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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Pls stry jaldi unfold kar
can't wait

ok done aaj update ker doon gi although its not soon but still..

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: sasir
Awesome...
Very very interesting..
So asad n ayaan swapped their places..
N zoya is falling for asad ...
Yayyy...
Zoya is true princess/ witch all are waiting for...
Plz update soon

thank u so much yaar.

will reveal soon that who zoya, faiqa , Ayaan and asad truly are...😉

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: anopama
Nice update
So Zoya turns out to have magical powers too

She is a special witch

So she met the princess and tht princess the evil r after so they can locate Zoya

Aww the boys came to their rescue

So asad has ayaan pretending to be a prince too

So the headmistress knows Zoya and her powers

And so they have to protect her

So r her parents her real ones and they don't know her powers

Continue soon

thanks anopama...

loved ur comment..

hahaha even u cant guess this time...lol...yess I succeeded ...

I will reveal soon.

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: SanKsgian
a magical one
witches
seriously

yes it is a magical one sana ...

hope u like it.

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: -PizzyLuvAsya-
It's so different and amazing one yar

thank u so much...

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: nilusoni
wonderful
thanx for pm

plz pm me for next

thank u so much..😳

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Thank u so much all of u for all ur support..

so there was a problem when I said that I wont send any pms, that has been resolved and made another list of the people who want to read my story.

thank u once again.😳

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#218

😳And yes I am very much fine now so thank u all who wished me speedy recovery...

love u all...

Edited by NnonaA - 9 years ago

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#219

Bavini, honeylika, Kanimolhi, imma.Ad, AryanRafs, muskaan17rocks, jaanu013, ifamanika, DarkBecoming, nikii11, azsumay, don girls, sasir, asifiqbalsh, nilusoni, anopama, suearmaniac, shailu123, jas91, -Crazy4AsYa-,

thank u so much guys.

Edited by NnonaA - 9 years ago

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#220

Chapter:3

In a dark forest one can hear the screams, the screams of pain , the scream of a burn. the three evil witches were screaming because they were burning by the heat of a fire.

fonce: ahhh..its hot...its burning...ahhh

glace:the heat is melting me...stop...someoneee...!!!

orageux: this never happened in past 15 years...

fonce, glace and orageux were the three ancestor witches, long back they were weakened by a inextinguishable fire, all these year they were trying to destroy the existence of it but were unable to locate it.

Glace: sisters! this is no normal heat...

Fonce: yes this is the fire which we were looking for so long.

Orageux: whatever it is, we have to stop it or else it will burn us completely...

Glace: yes...we need to pay a visit to our very dear head mistress reena...

Orageux: she must be missing us...

Fonce: and our old x school.

the three witches laugh evily.

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In the girls hostel, faiqa gets a totally private royal room like always and zoya gets a normal room. But for zoya it was like nothing less then a royal room, she never had an experience in living in this kind of rooms and was wonder struck to find such an arrangement. zoya with an oen mouth looked around in the room and was like checking everything. faiqa comes to see zoya in her room.

faiqa:(opening the door)heyy!!!...what(looked around to find an ordinary room) the hell!...how could they do that

zoya: hey whats wrong?

faiqa: no no no...this is an insult..how could they do this?(pulling zoya out of the room) we need to leave.

zoya: hey wait? what happened?

just then runda came. she saw faiqa pulling zoya out.

runda: what going on princesses?

faiqa looked at her and walked toward her angrily. while zoya greeted her by bowing.

faiqa: I knew this is all ur fault.

when runda saw that faiqa didn't greeted her but went on asking a random qs that she doesn't know about.

runda: princess faiqa! do I have to teah u ur manners too now.

faiqa: first of all u need to understand that there is a princess who is being not treated like one.

runda:oh not again! ok now tell me who entered ur room without knocking or who used ur nail paint without asking or who came in ur room with the slippers on or...

runda felt something and it was reena trying to mind talk with runda.

reena: runda!runda!

runda: yes ...yes head mistress!

reena: the witches are here, take zoya to a safer place,

runda: ok! at once head mistress.

runda looked at zoya who was getting uncomfortable due to something while faiqa was like always in her own world.

zoya was getting more and more uncomfortable

faiqa: or a princess is given an ordinary room.

runda: amm...princess faiqa we will talk later u go to ur room now.

faiqa: but I am not done yet.

runda saw the black aura in the garden through the window of the corridor and saw zoya sweating now.

runda(shouted): I said in ur room now!!

faiqa got shocked when she screamed and the runda saw zoya nearly fainting. faiqa turned around and found zoya to fall when someone caught her.

faiqa: Ayaan! prince asad? u guys here.?

asad(Ayaan for faiqa) was holding a faint zoya in his strong hold and Ayaan (asad for faiqa) came running with his sword and some other young boys, they were the students of the magic school.

Ayaan(asad for faiqa); head mistress contacted us for hep and so we are here. (looked at zoya) what happened to her.?

asad(Ayaan for faiqa): I don't know, but she is so hot...what happened to her (looking at runda)

runda(covering the situation.): she just fainted maybe due to heat stroke.

all three of them looked at her in surprise.

faiqa: ma'am!!?? its winters...

asad(Ayaan for faiqa): (carried zoya in his arms) whatever happened...I am talking her to the school's medical care. (instructing Ayaan(asad for faiqa) ) u lead the group I will be back soon.(looking at faiqa.) would u please accompany me princess.

runda knew that if faiqa gets suspicious, then she will get to the bottom so its better to remove her from here.

runda (sweetly) : yeah! princess u should help ur friend we will handle all this.

faiqa gets doubtful of runda's sweet behavior but agrees. and asad(Ayaan for faiqa) with zoya in his arms leaves with faiqa.

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outside in the garden of the magics reena confronts the three witches.

Glace: wel wel wel look sisters! who came to greet us...our favorite head mistress reena. say hi to her.

all three: Hi!! head mistress.

reena: why have u come here? there is nothing for u.

Fonce: really? is that so Glace then why are we here.

the three laughed while all the other teachers gathered around and joined reena.

Orgauex: well look there is a team to fight us.

reena: I have told u before too there is nothing for u here.

Glace: don't be new headmistress u know very well that why we came here.

reena attacked Glace, while she attacked back and reena falls back.

Glace: I don't fight with old bones.

Fonce: lets finish the talk give us the fire and we will spare u all.

reena: never gonna happen.

they get into a magical fight.

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in the hospital room zoya is lying on the bed and is still very hot.

faiqa: what happened to her?

asad kept quite looking and observing zoya.

she starts forming a fire like aura around herself and starts getting semiconscious while faiqa and asad are shocked to see all this.

faiqa: no way ...she is...

asad(Ayaan to faiqa): yes she is...

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Edited by NnonaA - 9 years ago

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