'SS'-ASYA-'To Call U Mine'-Updated-Pg#31-29/9/15

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so this story of mine is inspired by cartoon, actually my personal fav, i wont reveal the name and will let u guess as the story progress.
and ya one more thing its supernaturaltype story.
so as usual AsYa is played by KaBhi only. now here i go ... i hope u like it.

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Somewhere in new york a mother tries to wake her sleepy daughter.

mother: wake up sweeti!

girl: mom plz! let me sleep..

mother: sweet heart u will be late for ur college its already 9.

and when she completes 9 the girl is out of bed and start panicking...

girl: oh my god.. oh my god... i am late... allah miyaan whats wrong with u mom... why didnt u wake me up earlier...

the girl was running here and there trying to get ready as soon as possible and her mother was smiling at her, she sees her mother smiling and says.

girl: wait a second... there is no college its summer vacations...

mother: yes sweeti but plz get up..

the mother said softly and the girl again went into the bed...

girl: mom plz let me sleep...

and then comes the girl dad.

father: hey my princess!

girl: hey dad (after yawning and then covering her face with the blanket)..bye dad..

father: okaayyy... but its ur birthday...

girl: so what should i...

realizing that what her dad said now, she uncovered her face and sat in surprise.

girl: my what?... alllah miyaan whats wrong with me how can i forget my birthday.

mother: its ok...ur father has a surprise for u outside.

girl looking at her father: really dad?

father: yes.. go have a look at it..

the girl jumped out of the bed and went to see whats waiting for her and ran out side and whta she saw made her smile go vanish, it was a bike for her, a beginner's bike.

girl: seriously?

she was actually not happy with it, it was her 18th birthday and what she was getting is a beginner's bike.

and then her parents came.

father: so how is the surprise.

girl: oh..this..its..its..ahhh..its..actually..wonderful...ammm. thank u so much... i will just have a ride on it.

father: ok..

and then the girl rode off from there.

father: look zeenath i told u she would love it..

zeenath looked at him and shook her head in a no.

anwar: what?

zeenath: anwar its her 18th birthday she was expecting more.

anwar: not a bike then what?

zeenath pointed at something and went inside.

anwar: a car?

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on the other side on another planet there was a handsome man practicing his sword with another young man. he looked so charming that everyone could fall for his one look. his moves were fine during practice and he looked visibly tough and brave. during practice he won on the other young man. he wan none other then the prince of that planet asad ahmed khan. and the other young man was his best friend and learning fellow ayaan.

ayaan: saayaa.. u have become much more stonger.

they had magical swords that vanished somewhere in the air.

asad: thank u ..and ayaan plzz no formalities...u r my friend call me by my name.

ayaan: ok as u say.. when r u joining to the college.

asad: i am free and will join with u.

ayaan: oh really but i am leaving today... and now.

asad: ya then i will go too.

ayaan and asad went to the palace to inform king about there departure and the king allowed them to go but taking promise from asad to return as soon as he gets free because his kingdom needs him. they left the palace and asad stopped ayaan.

asad: hey.. will u do me a favor.

ayaan: ya ..tell me..

asad told ayaan something which left ayaan shocked..

ayaan: nononononooo... u r joking right...

asad: i am serious..

ayaan: king will kill me...

asad: i wont tell him..

ayaan: everybody knows..

asad: no nobody knows...

ayaan was not willing but asad made him agree,they both left for magica the planet of magics and it consists of greats wizards and witches.

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so here is the short intro of the story hope u guys like it and dont worry i will only continue if u guys like it... 😆..
and i think by now everybody would have guessed the cartoons...😉

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NnonaA thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Me first 😉

Hey Nona 😎

I like concept
Asad and aayan from other planet 😆

Ha didn't saw much cartoon 😛

But I saw one Hindi film
Which girls from other planet 😉

Update soon
Thanks for pm
Lol 😊

Edited by azsumay - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey nona nice starting yaar 👍🏼 par konsa cartoons hai mughe samaj nei aaya 😕 continue soon 😊
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Nice intro dear
Liked the entries. Sleeping zoya & tricked played by zeenat was nice. Asad was a prince. He & ayaan was good friend. Going for planet of magic.
Waiting for story to start
Sorry don't know much abt cartoons so no guess from my side.
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i m luking forward for this bcoz sounds nyc
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Interesting prologue.
I think the cartoon may be 'Winx Club'.
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start nonu..
Loved it coz i luv supernatural stories..
Asad a prince on other planet and zoya a normal gal..
Wow m loving it..
Edited by Kanwal4salman - 10 years ago
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New story yay
Asad a prince
Zoya seems a normal girl lives in NY
So both r in college
Looking forward for more

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