Originally posted by: radadolcevida
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What to say? really beautiful chapter, I noticed that chapter after chapter, your skill of writing and exposing emotion improve a lot. and this chapter was really well described and beautifully penned.
We can see now how Asad changed his behavior toward Zoya, ignoring the fact that she was his angel, and his restless was well mentioned in this chapter. I love the first scene when she hugged him and 😳 almost kiss.
but the first part scared me a bit, I think Asad will be angry that she hide that his ammi was sick, and I am just scared that it will create a rift between them, I hope I am wrong.
For the moment, he just realized that she was his angel but he still didn't know that his ammi was still alive. It's going to be really emotional scene, i guess.
His convo with his father was really hearttouching, his words are really beautiful, person we love, it's only their bodies who left us but not their souls and memories.
it break me down when Zoya said : i promise him to bring her back, I can feel for her, poor soul. She fought long time to find him and now that she found him, she can't lose his ammi, she was his amanat.
Can't wait to see now that they will find each other, was he going to reveal himself or you will add other twist before their reunion?
Continue soon and for a change I unres rapidily 😆
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