SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12 - Page 57

Originally posted by: Persiko

Aqwww ...

I can say...

No ZoYaan mast...

feelings Haye...
love it

Originally posted by: priya--

Amazing

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Srash yar gale lag
mwuaah mwuaah 🤗
Kya likha yar
love u
have unresed ;)

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

resss

unres

srash

LOVE U 🤗

i just loved it

amazing se amazing

wonderful OS

their pain was written brilliantly 👏

finally truth came out

asya sath sath hain

thanks for pm

write more 😃

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice OS
Wish that happened in the show but not to worry, writers are here to write in their way & I loved it.
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: kaju27

it was so emotional...
i loved the scene bw asya nd ayan outside sm...
zoya's outburst at gaffur..loved it...
humera came with them..
loved it

Originally posted by: anopama

Omg my most hated time in QH

Zoyaan

But I actually love this

If only this had been part of the show

It would have been a success

The writers never gasp the concept of qubool hai

Originally posted by: nilusoni

superb part loved it

asya together soo strong and finally together loved it

excited for next part

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Awesome os..

Wish simething like this hppnd in d show

Originally posted by: binuuu

wonderful os srash..
loved it very much...
the scenes which couldn't created in serial,but which we all hoped to see, u beautifully penned here...😊
asya's pain...my god,how amazingly u wrote it..
asad stuck between his heart and mind :(
wow..zoyaan's nikaah didn't happened..
raziya's outburst...😲
she confessed everything.. at last the real culprit got her punishment😃
for a moment I doubted zoya like asad.. :(
but her reply to gaffur 👍🏼
at last all izz well..humeirah went with her baaji..good..
loved whole os ;)
update next os soon...

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Srashti a beautifully done OS. Absolutely brilliant.

It conveyed Zoya, ayaan and Asad's emotions so we'll. I loved the scene where Zoya falls to his feet silently requesting him not to leave her there. Zoya's outburst at her Abbu was penned so well.

Ayaan's pleas pierced my heart to. The poor boy knew he was asking for too much and his passion was palpable and Asad's pin was no less. Can't imagine how he was able to take her to that house and then have the heart to leave her there too.

Loved it dear and am loving these regular OS's 😃

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

Aww

I loved this

I hated the Zoyaan track

Thats where everything got ruined

Then from there

Blah

I wish this happened in the show

It would've been way better

Originally posted by: ASYAaishu

awesome update dear...

i felt myself teary at last...

and truth is, i love to get emotional..thanks for such abeautiful os.

plz update next too,,,...

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Awesome OS!

Originally posted by: urvisaini

Oh I so wished ki yahi dikhate! !!!!

Kitna beautiful and dignified lagta

Loved it

Thanks for writing it down

It's like a wish come true...

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Interesting OS...

Originally posted by: Amin21

Thanks a ton dear for writing it

Very beautiful

Love tge way destiny didn't zoya stay in SM for a single day

And yeah that's how we all wanted to happened in the show But thank you for writing it here the way want😊