SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#551

Srashti a beautifully done OS. Absolutely brilliant.

It conveyed Zoya, ayaan and Asad's emotions so we'll. I loved the scene where Zoya falls to his feet silently requesting him not to leave her there. Zoya's outburst at her Abbu was penned so well.

Ayaan's pleas pierced my heart to. The poor boy knew he was asking for too much and his passion was palpable and Asad's pin was no less. Can't imagine how he was able to take her to that house and then have the heart to leave her there too.

Loved it dear and am loving these regular OS's 😃

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#552

Aww

I loved this

I hated the Zoyaan track

Thats where everything got ruined

Then from there

Blah

I wish this happened in the show

It would've been way better

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#553

Hey srushti

I loved it

Two tracks in one package

Wrote beautifully

Write my os ASAP, please

Thanks for PM

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#554

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was so Happy to see you on another os on ASYA(KABHI).😊

It was Awesome Os on ASYA(KABHI).😊

I just Loved this Concept.😊

If it happened in Qh,it will be so nice.😊

The Whole OS was so Differently and Interestingly explained.😊

The banner was so nice.😊

Please write like this on ASYA(KABHI) and Pm to me,I am waiting here.😊

Thank you So much for this Os.😊😊

__________________________________

(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: sweet4shehzadi

I know I'm feeling bad for that I apologize to you 😳

No need to apologize it happens sometimes that there are many things going on in life

I understand and am happy to see u here after a long time

Actually the problem isn't less likes or comments but the thing is that I feel that maybe I am not writing what the readers want so it just discourages me sometimes😳

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ASYAaishu

@ASYAaishu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#556

awesome update dear...

i felt myself teary at last...

and truth is, i love to get emotional..thanks for such abeautiful os.

plz update next too,,,...

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#557

Oh I so wished ki yahi dikhate! !!!!

Kitna beautiful and dignified lagta

Loved it

Thanks for writing it down

It's like a wish come true...

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#558

Thanks a ton dear for writing it

Very beautiful

Love tge way destiny didn't zoya stay in SM for a single day

And yeah that's how we all wanted to happened in the show But thank you for writing it here the way want😊

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Wowie ka zowie ❤️
asyaan plight and dal ki request 😃
And AGAIN i say
why weren't u the cv of qh srash!
And whaj are you!
I knw an awesome writer to write as beautifully as ths update

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Mai hi mai har jagah

unres
zoyaan word padhte se hi and gaffur ka truth wagairah se i shut my eyes thinking padhu ya nahi padhu!
As i hate wat gul did bt i absolutely love what u did yar
and m happy shappy ki mene padhna thik samjha 😆
ni to me to bina padhe ek line me comment dene wali thi
i loved it 🤣
bt ye kaam mujhse ni hote
na esa kiya kabhi and tere sath to bilkul b ni karungi
kyuki ...tujhme rab dikhta he yara me kya karu
❤️ 😆
no bt seriously i feel like snatching away ur writing magic *pout*

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Ths os covered all the prespectives
like 4 lives..asya and ayra were going to break to save 4 of them..imraan nzma nikhat and her fiance
the emotions and feelings were potrayed beautifully...the scenes still run in my mind as that much effectively imaginative it was 👏

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Aao ye page khaye hum zara 🤣

at first zoya's part was written so beautifully painful
her thoughts explained her heart's plight naturally an i love to read sad parts and i admired the way u created them talking thru eyes
asad's pov was best
i always love to read asad's pov
and ur right! Neither of them deserved bt destiny!

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Ishq di gal wich no entry 🤣
asad by her side always how could she leave him
kya jawab diya gaffur ko 👏
asya together and humi accepted zoya as her sis. 😃
right ending
and m like addicted to ur writing style
i can't get enough !

I am glad u decided on reading n liked it too.

Jyada tareef mat kiya kar...yeh sab toh readers ki meharbani hai ki woh like karte hain I just try to fulfil their expectations

Love u

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: cutie15
I too wish that this happened in the show.. it would have been something else right now..
this was great..! Loved it..:)