AsYa TS 'Love Across The Borders' Epilogue Page 35 COMPLETED

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Salaam...

Happy Independence Day to Pakistani IF members 🥳

Specially my Arshu n Choto 🤗

Aarzoo, Affu, Bestie, BF fikat not kal tum logo ko bhi wish karongi 😆

In fact i''ll wish all my friends here 😳

acha coming to the point now

I'm here with a TS dedicated to my Affu 🤗
Affu i know i'm to late
but kya karon ek happy story likhny mai mera bohat time jata hai
u know na i love writing sad stories

Finally mai Affu ke liye ek super happy plus unique sa TS likha hai
wo bhi Independence day par

IF members it is based on India Pakistan
sooo plzzz kuch bhi bolny se pehly ek bar padh zaroor lena
i'm all set for criticism but trust me it's just a thought nothing personal

Affu... Yeh half fictional n half real story hai
dare to say "Shoaib Sania" 😡
wo dono akley Ind Pak ko joint nahi karty
ufff kitna boling mai
okay you guys enjoy the first part of my TS
Affu eagerly waiting for your reply 😳


Index...

Part 1 Below
Part 2 Page 10
Part 3 Page 20
Epilogue Page 35


Note: All the characters and incidents in this write up are purely fictional... Resemblance to anything living or dead is purely coincidental... There is no intention of hurting any sentiments of people be it's religious or political or emotional...

Meher love u for this note 🤗


"Love... Across The Borders"




Banner Credit goes to Persiko (Affu) 🤗
Part 1
Asad Ahmad Khan, a 25 years old handsome cool dude... he lives in Lahore with his family which includes his parents RaDil and siblings Ayan n Najma, for the world, he is an ordinary pilot in Pakistan Air Force (PAF), but in actual, he is a trained officer who works for intelligence... he decided to join special forces but his seniors suggested him to perform his duties as a pilot only, they wanted to keep him unofficial so they can use his skills in toughest situations...
Zoya Farooqui, a 23 years old girl who loves to live the life to the fullest... she lives with her Aapi and Jeeju in Bhopal, she works for a software company but loves literature, she wrote some poems, but never shared them with anyone...
AsYa, being employed, managed to join some social sites, they didn't know each other at that time but unknowingly they joined at the same time... Zoya decided to share her first poem on India Forum (IF), Asad who was on leave, came across her poem, he was impressed, he appreciated the unknown writer... Zoya who was nervous got revealed after reading his comment, she smiled and thanked him immediately... this goes on and on, whenever Zoya posted any poem, Asad used to read it first, their lil encounters made them unknown friends, Asad asked her to write something on "life", and she agreed, after some days she came back with his request and dedicated him too... Asad was blown away by her gesture, he didn't only love her poem but also touched by her dedication, he decided to thank her via PM...
Asad thanked her genuinely, Zoya being Zoya, she replied him back, they introduced themselves and became friends officially... whenever Zoya used to post anything, she used to res' a post for Asad, and being her fist follower, he always leave beautiful comments for her...
After 2 months, they shared their Facebook (FB) accounts info, Asad used to wish her good morning before going on his duty, while Zoya used to leave some messages for him, on Sundays they used to chat for hours, if they didn't get the time to contact each other, they found their day incomplete, both were aware of their feelings, it was not just a friendship now...
After 3 months, a secret mission was assigned to Asad, he was going to deactivate his FB and other accounts, he was upset with himself, what will he do now, how will he tell Zoya??? Asad told Zoya, of course she too felt bad, but she came up with a solution, she asked his phone number, Asad didn't get her idea but gave the number, then she told him to deactivate his accounts right now, after a proper good bye he deactivated his accounts...
Asad was angry on himself, he was missing her badly, a whole day without her messages, he was about to go somewhere when his cell phone beeped, he picked up his cell phone and read the message from unknown number, he smiled widely and re read the message...
Assalam o Alaikum... Zoya here... Mr. Pilot, when you told me about your case, I really didn't like the idea of your disappearance, that's why I asked for your phone number, now we can be in touch via WhatsApp (WA), now stop being dull and bore and finish your work as soon as possible... All the best and be safe... BTW you look cool in glares...
Asad's DP

Asad immediately replied her back...
Walaikum Salaam... thank you so much Zoya, you can't imagine how much I'm relieved to have you here, how come I forget about WA, hmm never mind, at least you remembered it and saved me from going mad... thanks again... have to go now... and yes I know I'm simply handsome... thanks for the compliment... see you soon... take care and Allah Hafiz...
After that day, AsYa used to message through WA only, they used to share each and every detail, what they eat, what they wear, everything... if someone read their conversation, he can tell easily that they are in love, but AsYa didn't realize their feelings at all, they just took it as a friendship...
Zoya used to compliment Asad a lot, she had seen his pictures in his official and unofficial attires, Asad too wanted to see her, but he didn't budge the courage, he didn't want to upset her by asking her picture, so he dismissed the thought and focused on his unseen friend...
AsYa spent 6 months on WA, there was not a single day when Zoya didn't wish him good morning or good night, their days n nights ended up together only... Zoya got a promotion, Asad congratulated her, Zoya was at her success party, when she sent her picture to Asad...
Mr. Pilot... it has been 6 months and you never asked for my picture, so I'm sending of my own, it's may day Asad, my all friends are here, and they clicked pictures with me so you also deserve the chance but as you are not here I can fulfill half of my wish, just suppose you are at my right side... so my friend "Across the Borders", stop grinning like an idiot and say Ma'Sha'Allah... I really missed you *pout*...
Zoya's Picture

Asad was on air base, he was all set to leave for home when his cell phone beeped, he took out his phone from the pocket and started walking... when Asad saw her picture, he stopped in his tracks, only word that escaped from his mouth was Ma'Sha'Allah... he smiled widely when he noticed her dimples, he broke out of his trance when he received a message from Zoya... he read it again and again... he was touched by her gesture, he immediately replied her back...
Zoya... I really didn't want to upset you by asking for a picture, you are my only friend and I thought it will be okay without seeing and all... Ma'Sha'Allah, you look so beautiful, and haan main pehly hi Ma'Sha'Allah keh chuka hoon, stop pouting and enjoy the party, Ammi is calling me again and again so have to go, will catch you later... BTW I'll prefer left side...
Zoya who was waiting impatiently for his message, as soon her cell phone beeped, she excused herself and read his message... she smiled at his sincerity about the picture, she wanted to ask about why left side, but as he mentioned he was going home, so she decided to ask later...

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Days passed and AsYa used to be in touch like this only... both were aware of their feelings but never bothered to name it... it has been almost a year and AsYa were together, their respective families were also aware of their friendship, but they never considered it more than a friendship...
AsYa celebrated Eid ul Fitar together, their first ever Eid, they were physically apart but mentally they celebrated it like they lived in the same city or country... after Eid, Asad broke the news of his new case where he had to switched off his cell phone, Zoya was not the only one who was worried for him, his family was also worried... but at least they knew that Asad is near to them, but for Zoya, it was something unbelievable, how will she spend her day without talking to him, she was concerned for him, how much Asad loved his job, he too was afraid for his family, what if something happened to him, what will his family do and what about Zoya??? No doubt Zoya was now a part of his life...
Asad was on secret mission, where he not only missed his family, he missed Zoya too, his only friend, his tire full days ended in thoughts of Zoya only...
On the other hand, Zoya missed him too, she used to send him messages, her whole day went in waiting for his replies, but that day never came...
It has been 3 weeks and Asad was still working on the case... in Lahore, PAF informed Khan family that Asad is safe and sound, they were relieved, but Zoya was not... she didn't receive a single message from Asad in past weeks...
AsYa's distance made them realize of their feelings, finally they named their feelings, they admitted they were in love, but they were scared of other's reaction too, what if other refused, so they decided to keep their friendship only...
Independence Day was coming, both the countries, Pakistan and India were all set to celebrate it peacefully... "Aman Ki Aasha", a project that was started by both the countries, it held some meetings of high profile delegates from India and Pakistan, Asad came to know that something is going to happen on that day... he worked more and concluded that on 1st Aug, something big is really going to happen, he just have a week, he have to do something fast...
Asad submitted his report to seniors, his job was done, he was all set to go back Lahore, but his seniors suggested him to be a part of the mission and visit India... On hearing India, the only thought came to his mind was Zoya, can it be a chance for their meeting??? He agreed to go India, but after meeting his family...
Asad came back to Lahore, spent a day with his family and told them about his mission... Dilshad was worried, she didn't like the idea of Asad going to India, okay she understand it's his job, but what if something happened to him, being a mother she can't allow him, but Asad being an adamant, made Dilshad understand and left for India...
Asad, being a pilot in PAF and undercover officer of special forces, didn't get the visa, Indian Embassy clearly refused to give him a visa, so Pakistan High Commission requested and inform them about the threats, Indian Embassy agreed with some terms and conditions and Asad got the visa only for 3 days...
Asad wanted to tell Zoya about his visit, but he was strictly warned from Pakistan High commission that he will not reveal his real identity in India, he just need to attend the meetings organized by "Aman Ki Aasha",then he have to fly back to Pakistan...
For Asad, coming to India, and not telling Zoya was a really bad idea, he can't do this, he planned a surprise for Zoya... Asad landed in Mumbai, he was received by an officer from Indian Embassy, Asad provided him all the information... Asad asked him about the residency, he told him to manage it, as they can't reveal his identity, Asad told him what if he visits his friend???
After assuring the officer that his friend is trust worthy and will not reveal his real identity, Asad took the first flight to Bhopal, he just knew that Zoya lives in Bhopal only, but where he didn't knew...
Asad called Zoya from an Indian number, Zoya who was at work, took the call from unknown number...
Zoya: hello???
Asad: is this Zoya Farooqui???
Zoya: yes I'm Zoya... or aap???
Asad: ma'am I'm from courier service, there is a courier on your name...
Zoya: courier???
Asad: yeah... your friend sends it from abroad...
Zoya: sorry... but I have no friends who send parcels and all...
Asad: no ma'am it's only for you... it's from Pakistan...
Zoya stopped what she was doing, did she really here Pakistan??? Asad sent her a parcel??? Is he okay??? When did he come back from his mission???
Asad: excuse me ma'am... you there???
Zoya was lost in her thoughts and forgot to answer back, while Asad smiled a lil, he knew where she was lost...
Zoya: yeah...
Asad: ma'am I misplaced your address, so where I can deliver you parcel???
Zoya: hmm... where are you now???
Asad: I'm at airport ma'am... actually I received your parcel some minutes back, and here only your name and number is mentioned, I don't know about your address, maybe I misplaced it...
Zoya: I'm at my office right now, but it's too far for you...
Asad: no ma'am I'll manage...
Zoya: you sure...
Asad: yeah ma'am...
Zoya: okay then meet me at XYZ coffee shop that is near my office...
Asad: okay ma'am... I'll be there...
Zoya: okay... and plz don't mention that it's from Pakistan in front of anyone...
Asad: sure...
Asad smiled widely, the way she showed concern for him blew him away... Zoya knew about his job, what if she landed them in some problem, that's why she stopped that guy...
Zoya finished her work and left around 3'o clock from the office, she was waiting for the courier guy at the coffee shop from past 45 minutes, it has been 2 hours, and he didn't show up... Zoya was not only worried for the courier, but for Asad too, he was working on a case, how come he send her a parcel, what if he wanted to convey a message, Zoya was lost in her thoughts when her cell phone beeped, she picked up the call but that was her Aapi...
Asad who was unaware of the routes reached the coffee shop quite late, he was not sure if Zoya is still there or not, he entered the coffee shop and found her on the phone call... Zoya was lost in herself, Asad was observing her friend, no doubt he was mesmerized by her, he had seen her in the picture, but that was nothing, camera was failed to capture her beauty, her innocence, her dimples, everything... Zoya felt a gaze on her, she turned to her right side and found him there...
As soon Zoya turned, she rooted to her spot and stopped breathing, Asad took some steps and came closer to her, he smiled a lil by seeing her reaction...
Asad: your courier ma'am... he said with a wink...
Zoya: huh...
The cell phone which Zoya was holding slipped from her hand and fell on the floor, Zoya blinked again and again, Asad was standing in front of her but she didn't showed any emotion except shock...
Asad who was impatiently waiting for her reaction, call her again but she didn't listen to him... so Asad placed a hand on her shoulder, Zoya looked at his hand that was on her shoulder and then back to him...
Zoya: As... Asad...
Zoya managed to say Asad, while Asad finally nodded his head in a yes, Zoya blinked one more time and fell on Asad's chest...
Asad: oh shit... Zoya what happened???
Zoya: I'm fine Asad... she said straightening herself...
Asad: you scarred me Zoya...
Zoya: Allah Miyan!!! What's wrong with you Mr. Pilot... mene kya kiya... you are the one who scared the hell out of me...
Asad: I just planned a surprise for you...
Zoya: OMG Asad you are here, in India... Ya Allah I can't believe it... reality dawned upon her that Asad is here and she screamed "OMG", but covered her mouth immediately as all locked at AsYa with curious eyes...
Asad: Zoya sab dekh rahy hain...
Zoya: haan to dekhty rahain... I'm meeting you for the first time Asad... reaction to banta hai na... she showed her dimples...
Asad: hmm yeah... a reaction but a reasonable one... he winked at her...
Zoya who was first shock, then excitement of meeting Asad for the first time, took a step ahead and shocked Asad by hugging him... Asad was shocked by her move, but when he felt her arms around him, a new sensation aroused in him and he immediately envelope her in his arms...
AsYa hugged for quite a long time, Zoya felt solace in his arms...
Zoya: I missed you so much Asad... she said still hugging him...
Asad: I missed you too... he replied back pulling her closer...
Zoya broke apart and looked in his eyes...
Zoya: you fine na...
Asad: hey I'm all good...
Zoya: Asad... you were on mission then how come you are in India... is everything okay...
Asad: we can talk in private Zoya... I mean here... he said looking around the coffee shop...
Zoya: oh shit... kitni pagal hoon main... Asad I'm so sorry I didn't mean to...
Asad: it's okay Zoya...
Zoya: acha leave it... first let's move out from here...
Asad: but where we will go...
Zoya: home... if you forgot I have a family Asad that lives in a home...
Asad: I know but first you ask them... are they okay if you take me at your home...
Zoya: come on Asad... it's not like this hum pehli dafa mil rahy hain...
Asad: oh then what's this???
Zoya: I mean we met for the first time, but we are together from a year Asad... aapi jeeju ko sab pata hai...
Asad: but...
Zoya: stop with these stupid formalities Asad... just come with me...
Zoya dragged Asad with him outside the coffee shop, they got seated in Zoya's car and reached at her place in 45 minutes... Asad was hesitant but Zoya assured him that there is nothing to worry about... Zoya introduced Asad to her aapi Zeenat, no doubt aapi was surprised but not like Zoya, Zoya excused herself to change, while Zeenat chatted with Asad regarding his family...
Anwer came from office, Zoya came out of her room but didn't notice her jeeju, Zeenat looked at Asad...
Zeenat: Asad...
Asad: ji...
Zeenat: look over there...
Asad looked where Zoya was standing lost in her own thoughts, then he looked at Anwer...
Asad: aapi yeh...
Zeenat: yeh Anwer hain... now enjoy the scene...
Asad: matlab???
Asad was confused, he was looking at Zoya an Anwer... Anwer came near to Zoya and shouted...
Anwer: peek a boo...
Zoya who was unaware of his presence, as she heard "peek a boo", she bow down without thinking for a once, while Asad and Zeenat started laughing...
Zoya: kya jeeju... aap bhi na...
Anwer: how's my bacha is at home before me...
Zoya: yeah... actually my friend visited me so I'm here...
Anwer: friend???
Zoya: hmm Asad...
Anwer: Asad... from Pakistan???
Zoya: yup...
Anwer: where is he???
Zoya: look over there... enjoying our scene with aapi...
Zoya introduced Asad to her Anwer jeeju, Anwer was also shocked but he didn't show it at all... Anwer came back after changing and joined Asad and his ladies in the living area... Asad told them about his case and how he came India, AnZe were amazed by his bravery, who come there for the sake of India and Pakistan, they told him to stay with them and feel like home, Asad thanked them and excused himself to call his family in Lahore...
After an hour, Anwer suggested Zoya to take Asad out for a dinner...
Asad: no plz... first I'm not allowed to roam around, I just have 2 more days here, and about dinner, I want something made by aapi...
Zeenat: mere hath ka khana???
Asad: actually I was on duty from last month and I missed homemade food a lot, I hardly spent a day with ammi, so if you don't mind can you cook for me???
Zeenat: of course Asad I'll... bolo kya khana hai???
Asad: whatever you can make it quick...
Zeenat: okay, Zoya you joining me???
Zoya: no way aapi... Asad is here only for 2 days and I can't miss even a second without talking to him...
Zeenat: you guys enjoy...
AnZe left and Zoya took Asad to the backyard where they chatted for almost 2 hours, actually 2 hours were not enough after a gap of month... Zoya was the only one who was talking, Asad was just lost in the beauty sitting in front of him...
Later that night, Asad enjoyed the dinner with Farooqui's, no doubt Asad loved the food and thanked aapi for doing this for him... after dinner, they chatted for some time, as night falls AnZe bid good night and left for their room, AsYa too bid each other a good night and left for their respective rooms...
Asad was in his room, he was on call with Ayan, when Zoya barged in his room...
Zoya: your coffee Mr. Pilot...
Asad turned to face him, Zoya looked at him with eyes, he was standing in front of her without a shirt...
Zoya: Allah Miyan!!! I'm so sorry Asad... she covered her eyes with free hand and turned around...
Asad: Ayan I call you later... he cut the call and put on his shirt... you can turn Zoya...
Zoya: I'm so sorry Asad... I just...
Asad: forgot knocking...
Zoya: hmm... she hmm-ed looking down...
Asad: can I have my coffee...
Zoya: yeah sure... she gave him his coffee and waited for him to taste...
Asad took a sip and looked at her smilingly...
Asad: just like the way I liked it...
Zoya: really???
Asad: yup...
Zoya: okay then you enjoy your coffee... I should leave now...
Asad: no... I mean stay here Zoya... I have something for you...
Zoya: what???
Asad: your parcel ma'am... he said giving her a gift box...
Zoya: for me???
Asad: nahi... bhoot ke liye... of course it's for you...
Zoya: thank you so much Asad...
Asad: abhi tumny hi kaha tha no thanks and all... now what's this...
Zoya: acha baba... no thank you... can I open it... she asked excitedly...
Asad: yeah you can...
Zoya opened the box and a smiled broadly, she looked at Asad with moistened eyes, Asad too was smiling at her...
Zoya: it's too beautiful Asad... she said picking up the pendant in her hands...
Asad: you liked it...
Zoya: I loved it stupid...
Asad came near to her, he held Zoya's hand, his slight touch sent a shiver to her, she looked at him, Asad too looked at her, then he broke the eye contact and placed Zoya's thumb at the middle of the pendant and applied some pressure, Zoya looked at him with confused eyes...
Asad: look at our hands Zoya...
Zoya focused on the pendant and in the next second the pendant was broken in two pieces...
Asad's gift to Zoya

Zoya: ouch... what's this Asad... that was my first gift from you and you broke it...
Asad: you are so stupid Zoya...
Zoya: oye...
Asad: kya oye??? Abhi yeh ek nahi 2 pendant hain... one will be with you and one will be with me...
Zoya: wow that's so cool Asad...
Asad: acha hai na...
Zoya: haan... I want the part on which "friends" is written...
Asad: no... you will take the "best" one...
Zoya: it's my gift Asad... so my choice...
Asad: it's our gift Zoya... "friends" part is mine...
Zoya: so mean Mr. Pilot...
Asad: whatever... now come here...
Asad turned around her and made her wear the pendant...
Asad: now it's more beautiful...
Zoya: it's looking beautiful... bcox I'm the beautiful one...
Asad: yup... I completely agree...
Zoya: okay Mr. Pilot... kal subha milty hain... Good Night haan...
Asad: Good Night Zoya...
Zoya was at the door when Asad called her...
Asad: Zoya...
Zoya: hmm... she turned around...
Asad: hmm nothing...
Zoya: huh...
Asad: I said nothing...
Zoya: whatever...
Zoya left while Asad smiled like a fool and smacked him on his head...
Next day, Anwer left for his office, Zeenat too left for her NGO, Zoya had taken 2 days leave from office, after the breakfast AsYa chatted for hours... both were so lost in their talks and forgot about lunch, they realized the time when Asad's cell phone beeped and he got a call from his senior to be near the delegates of "Aman Ki Aasha", which means Asad had to go back to Mumbai... Asad told Zoya, her face fell but she came up with the idea of her going to Mumbai with him...
Asad clearly refused of her coming to Mumbai. He can't risk her life, he dismissed the argument and packed his bags for Mumbai... Zoya being Zoya, she too packed her bags and waited for him in the hall, when Asad came out of his room, she was already there with a bag...
Asad: Zoya... I said NO already... you are not coming with me...
Zoya: okay fine... after 2 days I have a meeting in Delhi, so as you know I'm on leave, I'm going to enjoy 2 days in Mumbai then I'll fly to Delhi... now you can't stop me...
Asad: Mumbai is not safe Zoya... tum samajh kyun nahi rahi...
Zoya: if Mumbai is not safe, then why are you going there Asad...
Asad: it's my duty yaar and I need to go there...
Zoya: and what about your safety???
Asad: I'll manage Zoya...
Zoya: you know what... your ammi is right... you chose a wrong field... udhar wo pareshaan rehti hain or idhar main... apko koi fark hi nahi padhta haiana???
Asad: now why are you worried for me???
Zoya: bcox I...
Asad: I what Zoya???
Zoya: I care for you Asad...
Asad: I know yaar but...
Zoya: Asad... if you ever considered me as your true friend then don't stop me... main aap ke sath aa rahi hoon and that's final...
Asad: do I have a choice???
Zoya: nope...
Asad: then leave a message for aapi... and plz tell her we are going just for fun... dare to tell her about my mission...
Zoya: what's your mission???
Asad: abhi Mumbai chalo... you will come to know...
Zoya: oye Mr. Pilot... mjhy marna nahi hai haan???
Asad: kyun... abhi se darr gayi...
Zoya: main darti nahi hoon... it's just that abhi meri engagement bhi nahi hui yaar...
Asad: so what??? I'm single too...
Zoya: Ya Allah plz bacha lena warna yeh Pilot to pakka marwany ke mood main hai...
Asad: can we leave now???
Zoya: yeah... me all set to die with Mr. Pilot...
Asad: that's like a true friend...
Zoya glared at him while Asad controlled his laughter, both informed aapi and jeeju and left for Mumbai, on a mission to save humanity and bring India and Pakistan closer...



Sooo that's it...
Ignore my mistakes plz...

Affu pasand aaya ya main bhaag jaon...
I know mela Affu will love it...

Next part kal ko
Affu ke Independence Day par...

with love
Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mera res -------------- Sab se pehle Aashu yahan no one will have problem abt Ind and Pak ...
hum sab dost hai divided by borders but united by hearts❤️
aur haan mai Shoaib saniya nahi karta!!! yeh dono zyada famous for Indo Pak relationship!!!
And I LOVE YOU 234567890000000 ITNA ZYADA🤗...
Haan Meri sadist queen ek tum aur dusri meri Aloo the tragedy queen u dono jab bhi happy likhte ho sirf mere liye I feel so special... 🤗...
Oye hoye AsYa met on IF like us 😃...
Then FB same to same
Jhoote its what's we do on WA subha ki lazy yawn se raat ki last japki tak we share everything...
... Haye kya dosti hai same apni jaisi jab u me aur DM baat nahi karte like day incomplete reh jata!!!!!
Awww AsYa love each other..
Mohabbat koi sarhad nahi dekhta!!!
Dil toh Jud jaate hai bas
I LOVED IT SO SO CHO CHO MUCHHH🥳...
Edited by Persiko - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mine
unres
Bestie bestum best concept hai👏👏👏
meko toh koi problem nahi hoti toh apni frndship ni hoti😉
Love u so much🤗
So Asad miyan is kind of secret agent😎
dono mile in IF oye hoye IF nu famous kar dita bestie🥳
phir frnds bane aur Pyaar bhi hua
Asad came on mission but India aaye toh Zoe se toh milna hi tha😉
Loved their meeting Zoe ka reaction was superb😆
now they left 4 Mumbai
I liked d pendent part also😊
par bestie yeh dono end main marne ki baaten kyun kar rahe the. Me no likey
Itne din baad koi story padi sabse pehle teri😃 abhi dosron ki baari lol😆
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing concept, Ashii.🤗
Loved it.
Asad is a secret agent.
Asya met on IF n became frens.
They slowly fell for each other n r in love but haven't realised it.
Their first meeting was awesome.
They r together now.
Looking forward to what happens now.
Edited by Kabhibloom - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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updated
opps i forgot to res 😳

sooo this post is a res post for my world famous IF Family n Friends 🤗

abhi kisi ko idea pasand nahi aaya n koi bhadka to bacha lena plzzz
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Before coming to the update, happy independence day to you... 😊
what was the need of the partition of India, that's why we are celebrating our independence day in different days 😭
you did a wonderful job by writing a story based on India pak love story. 👍🏼
yeh borders hume kabhi nahi ruk sakthi..like India pak friends in this forum..
update is excellent ashii...
loved it very very much...
asya's friendship started from IF...😊
then fb..then WA.. awww..
pura update made me to smile..
sometimes I'm grinning..
if anyone see me while reading this story.. they will think I became crazy.. you know,that much expressions are in my face at that time.. really enjoyed.. 👍🏼
oh my God.. asad came to Bhopal to see his BFF..
Loved asya's bond...
family members also know about asya's friendship... 😊
asya together going to Mumbai...
interestinggg..
continue soon ashii... can't wait for next update..
thank you very much for such a wonderful...amazing.. beautiful... (I don't know,what to say)...story 🤗
Edited by binuuu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome part
asya are chat friends and their friendship grow soo much
asya together wow
excited for next
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: jas91

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Bestie bestum best concept hai👏👏👏

meko toh koi problem nahi hoti toh apni frndship ni hoti😉

Love u so much🤗


So Asad miyan is kind of secret agent😎

dono mile in IF oye hoye IF nu famous kar dita bestie🥳

phir frnds bane aur Pyaar bhi hua

Asad came on mission but India aaye toh Zoe se toh milna hi tha😉

Loved their meeting Zoe ka reaction was superb😆

now they left 4 Mumbai

I liked d pendent part also😊


<em>par bestie yeh dono end main marne ki baaten kyun kar rahe the. Me no likey

Itne din baad koi story padi sabse pehle teri😃abhi dosron ki baari lol😆



Love u tooo bestie 🤗

Oyeee agar hum frndz na hoty to tjhy prblm hoti kya 😲

Bestie sachii mai koi bat galat hai to bol na
Mai next part mai khayal se type karongi

IF famous hui bcox hum sab yaha jo hain


Marny ka koi scene nahi hai yh to bs AsYa apny jesy pagal hain na ulta seedha boling 😆

Huggiieee again 🤗

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