AsYa Song Drabble ||Humdard||

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Hello AsYaians😛 here I am posting my first ever song drabble on AsYa...waisa toh I started writing song drabbles on SidNi at JR but now this is for my AsYa...don't know how it would be so bear with me..
And this goes out tehs apiya and my personal apple😉 and yeah it starts from asad taking zoya at graveyard with him..no tannu here😃
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HUMDARD

She broke down badly as asad brought her to her abu's grave...she felt as if her whole world crumbled down in front of her ...as if her soul left her body.. everything turned blur, she felt as if she is dying and with that she fell backward directly landing in his arms who got totally scared seeing her fainting

Pal.. do pal ki kyun hai zindagi
Iss pyaar ko hai sadiyan kaafi nahi
Toh khuda se maang loon
Mohallat main ek nai
Rehanaa hai bas yahaan
Ab door tujhse jana nahi...

He brought her home and a doctor was called to check her...she was weak and seeing her in such condition he too felt like crying...a while later she was screaming in her sleep as if the same nightmare was haunting her...he hurriedly held her hand and soothed her

Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai

Few days passed but she was still the same she was that day...her eyes longingly starring at one side or the other thinking that this all will be over...she wanted to forget that the only hope she held in her heart is no more...her past will be a misery only...

Something clicked in his mind and soon he went to her with a box of pizza with him...he offered her but she didn't responded so he started to have it himself eating in the most messy way...unknown to herself she started to smile seeing him doing such act...finally he too smiled wide revealed to see her smile

Teri muskuraahate hain taakat meri
Mujhko enhi se ummid mili
Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan
Enmein hi hai sadaa hifaajat meri
Zindagaani badi khoobsurat hui
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin

He brought a slice close to her lips feeding her himself...his eyes moistened as she opened her mouth to take it...she too smiled through her tears and that moment he promised himself to bring the old zoya back

Jo tu mera hamdard hai
Jo tu mera hamdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera hamdard hai

Days started to pass in same way with the Khan Family trying all possible ways to bring zoya back to her old self and to say that the result was nothing would be wrong...there struggle was resulting in the most beautiful way as zoya was slowly slowly coming back to her old life...

But all this while asad who already had unnamed feelings for zoya had now badly fallen in love for zoya...he was all ready to have her in his life forever to heal her to love her...

Teri dhadkanon se hai zindagi meri
Khwaahisein teri ab duaayein meri
Kitna anokha bandhan hai ye
Teri meri jaan jo ek hui
Lautunga yahaan tere paas mein haan
Vaada hai mera, mar bhi jaaun kahin

It was zoya's birthday and all the three beautifully decorated Khan Mansion to celebrate her birthday...she was so happy as they surprised her at exact 12...

As the ladies were busy enjoying the cake out of nowhere asad came and sat in front of zoya on his knees...he forwarded his hand towards with a beautiful yet simple diamond ring in it and confessed 'Zoya I love you a lot...will you marry me?' He asked and felt to be the luckiest person in this world when she nodded her head in a yes...he promised to be with her and love her always

Jo tu mera hamdard hai
Jo tu mera hamdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera hamdard hai

Hope it was worth reading...do leave back your reviews...criticism is welcomed

Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res 4 kadoo, apple, tehs api, yoyo, shona, mumma, binni, gowtu, shano, maggie, yashu, liyu, trish, srash, amu api, adi, choco api, badi api, aseelah api, sukhi, sumi, nino, anopama, sanjhari, mayur bhai, asif bhai and abi bhai (sorry kisi ko bholi hn to)
Edited by asyaarshilover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely drabble aroo..
Such a cute one...
Zoya sadness and khan family trying to bring their old Zoya back. ..
Asad's feeling towards zoya...
His proposal was so cute and simple...
Love it..
Keep writing ...

Edited by aYASHIKA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
unres

Arshu 🤗
such a wonderful work
loveddd ittt
hope u write more drabbles

P.S i have a request write something on "Kabhi jo badal barse" plzzz 😳
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aaroo..
it was wonderful...
started with zoya's sadness and ended with asad's proposal..
such a cute drabble..
write more drabbles also..
enjoyed very well
Edited by binuuu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey aroo

Thanks for res 😃

Amazing 😊

Song selection was good 👏

I loved it 😳😉

Thanks for pm 😊

Edited by azsumay - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome OS Dear👏😊
It was so beautiful
Loved how Asad consoled Zoya😃
Glad dat Asad is not dumb n EC like in d show
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is so sweet...I love that song
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was really sweet
cool concept...song based drabbles...do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😭...so beautiful...really I just love it especially the engagement

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