New Asya FF....Mere Humnawah Part *1-5* link to nxt thread given - Page 103

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: binuuu

jash...you devil... why did you stop there 😡 😭
oh forget to say something... shorry... really shorry..
and also sorry for late comment...
family moments were superb.. bond between each family members were superb...
both of them are not fine..haha..cold..
who's picture is in that?? waiting to know...
next time this will not be happen... tum naraaz nahi,henaa?
thanku for the res jash... 🤗

Late commenter no. 2😆 its ok hojata hai yaar😉

huggies 4 d lovely comnt🤗
yeh raaz nxt part main khuling😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

hi jas its beautiful update dear

I think its the first time I commented for this story

I read it in one go

and its superb

pls update soon

pls pm me next time

YEah I guess pehli baar hai...welcome 🤗

Thanks dear 4 commenting here, Hugs😊
& 4 PM u have 2 buddy me on my PM id if u r added u'll surely get PMs😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kabhibloom


I too missed u a lot.
Glad to be back.
Haan, exams aaj hi khatam hogaye.
2 out of 5 bohot acche gaye aur baaki 3 thik hi gaye.
Huggies to u too.
🤗🤗🤗

Hugs specialist back wid lots of hugs😆

aaj hi khatam aaj hi back in action good 😃
awe kyun but hope tu unko bhi clear toh kar hi le😊

hugs back Shail🤗

now move 2 thread 2 both of u😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

res 😃
i am here already 😆 (few days later 😕)
i am here now. So sorry for not commenting earlier when I promise, but when I was supposed to do it, someone call me and I forgot to continue. So sorry (I am holding my ears, but not for so long because I need them to write the comment 😆)

LOL Rada last line cracked me U r my sweetu & its ok I know ho jata hai kabhi kabhi & than u had ur intv btw what happened did u cleared it

Chap 4

Did I told yout that I love your Zoya? She is brilliant, smart and crazy. I love her and her crazy plan, she must really like him and I must say,
Like no she has fallen madly 4 AAK😉😆 & I agree wid all adj u used 4 her🤣
he is a bit frustrated here , emotionally challenged, perfect combo of both.
I can say he's raised this way where he respect women is really kind & helpful 2 all.😊 EC yes 4 start but wid his family he's carefree like any normal boy.
When she pierced the tyre and I was just like her grinning like an idiot, and I clapped by hands for her crazy ideas. And she was spoiled when Asad came to her rescue as a perfect gentleman. I can understand I myself get excited sometimes when such idea comes 2 my mind 😆😆

Once again, he didn't talk and I can understand her frustration but Asad was not talkative as her and she must be notice this. Poor girl, she will have to run after him for a long long time. however, I didn't expect, but Asad felt something for her, not only because she was beautiful but maybe more. 😳. I could imagine her happiness when she was in his arms . The most beautiful scene in this chapter, it's when Asad stood between her and this old man, it was perfect and beautiful scene, this is chevalry and Asad was just perfect in this scene. All the girl love and focuss on small detail, but this one was a big one who went directly to our heart ( Zoya and I). The 1st fall was my fvrt scene too & yes Asad shielding Zoya from old man was something only u noticed as u always notice d smallest detail which not many often do. You know while writing I always analyse it as a readers that if u wold have been reading it would I like it . Mayb that's how I succeed in writing these small small portions which I think a man should possess.
So they finally found they way back home with something new in their heart, kuch kuch hota hai... Jo abhi filhaal main hi samjhti hun including some readers😆😆

Chap 5
Asad caught cold, poor him. and he was teased by his family but he hid and replied smartly. I can imagine if he said where he was and with who.😕 all the ladies would have been crazy about.
Exactly 1stly that Asad was wid a girl & 2ndly d girl was Zoya 😆
Zoya was also in the same state, sick, this is so sweet. this is love dear 😆.
So do u agree now yeh sahi main pyaar hai jaldi hua toh kya... Ishq pe Zor nahi...😆😆
However, all the memories make her forget her pain, she is litterally in love and it was not just a crush. But she found something in his pocket. 🥱 I try to find what could it be? But I said earing, no, she must have noticed that she lost one, ring? Maybe but from who? A picture? I hope it's not any other girl. i don't know why but I feel it will break her heart what she was going to find in his pocket.
and as i tried to see what will happen next? She will bring back his coat to see him again and maybe try to invite him or to discuss with him more 😳.
LOL Rada so wild I made u to think aisa kuch nahi hoga promise & half ur guess is right😊😉
Zoya was really sweet and I hope you will keep her like this most of the time, she is my favorite character in this story.
Continue soon and hope to read the next soon.
Zoya meri bhi fvrt hai Rada infact all my characters & I intend to keep them tis way as much as I can😛😉

Originally posted by: radadolcevida



Hi Jas
Love you too sweetheart 🤗
the intv was ok, I was so stress, but I did my best, anyway I enjoyed my trip to London and I ate a lot of food 😆.

That's wonderful me being foody toh love such trips😆. Wish u get d job. Good Luck Sweetu👍🏼

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafeelz

Ok baba karti hun kuch😆😆
Idhar kyun khel rahe ho Antakshri thread 2 pe khelo 😉

Kuch mat Karo
Sirf update Karo
Next thread pe bhi 3pages ho Gaye res ke
I will update angel today or tomorrow
Kuch khas nahi
Hope you like it
Huggie 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hey Jas,

Just dropping in to say hello.
HEYA!
Hope you are good.🤗
Juliet

Hi Jules dear😃
So good 2 hear from u
Yea I m fine just kept busy 4 some weeks
How r u ?
I miss u
been caught up these days but we'll come 2 talk 2 u when I get time
Where r u busy these days college or job
Keep coming back sweets
I look 4ward 2 hear from u
Tyt hugs🤗🤗
Stay blesses😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Asshi...

hey jas how's you?
I am sorry for being late jas but i was inactive and come just for updating!
I read 2nd part and it was awesome! Really liked the intro!
And your end note😆 i know you will not bite and i am one of those who is not commenting but sorry girl i am having tough time in coming here

Hi Ashi me fine😊
Hope u r well too
Hehe no its ok that note 4 silent readers😆
I know u didn't read cuz u might b busy
R u having exams or r they over
do keep coming back
I get so happy 2 see & talk 2 u
& do updt ur SS too its long overdue😆
hugs Miss ya🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: azsumay

Kuch mat Karo
Sirf update Karo
Next thread pe bhi 3pages ho Gaye res ke
I will update angel today or tomorrow
Kuch khas nahi
Hope you like it
Huggie 🤗

Huggies Sum tu thread 2 pe chal main reply khatam karke aati hun😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: EMOksgian

cute update :)
vat vs in d pocket :o
plZ update soon and pm me if possible !!!

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

interesting update..n

😊please do pm me

Originally posted by: kadia717

new asya story..great.
nice concept..
add me
keep writing 😃

Originally posted by: don girls

interesting

just read all the part
love the storyline
update soon

Welcome 2 all u new readers its nice 2 hear from u😃
Sorry guys 4 not replying individually due to less pages left 😳
Thanx 4 d comnt & plz buddy my PM id 4 getting PMs
see u in thread 2😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -shimmer-

updateee please!!!!
I read ff when iam offline so plzz Merii req h k Update kro!

Shimmer u read my story phir comnt chod like tak nahi karti kyun
Yeh toh srasar na insaafi hai
Kam se kam like toh mara kar comnt na sahi

Originally posted by: asyakabhidreamy

Res !!!
So so so sorry my jas
I'm late I know !

Geetu updt chod tu khud kahan hai
I miss u yaar come back soon🤗

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Cuckoo naya thread bana

Ban toh gya😆😆

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