Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil
Thank you so much for the PM! :)
This is how it should be! Atleast! Loved where you took it from and transformed it in your own way. Yes that Major needs to realise what he has done and so glad Aahil atleast spoke up something to him.Sanam in Jannat. That was sweet!😳 How she was nervous about talking to Aahil, Reminds me of that garden scene where Aahil was so nervous 😆Loved how she saved him and hugged him! Aww! Lol at his smirking at the Witch. I am glad you kept that smirking part intact though. He does smirks and gives those glares at her in the show too 😆Amazing job! Love how you write! :)
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