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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tonight I caught a star.

That had abandoned its celestial home for a mere mortal.

They tell you stars are dead- Mind you, this one is a live wire.

The moon tried to race with her glow.

The moonlight paled in embarrassment.

The universe stopped to steal a glance.

The stars frowned in envy- their fire was dead long ago.

The winds flirted with her curls,

As if to taunt me more.

A soft sigh escaped her lips...

Whispering this was not a dream...

I stood and stared...

How does one take care of a star?

How do you let the warmth stay?

How do you make sure the light shines?

Does it hurt when I hold her?

Wish my hands were feathers for her to touch.

Her lips parted slightly- For a drink? For a kiss?

Eyes fluttered - what would you want to behold, my beloved?

I have caught a star.

Tell me, the world is yours.


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chicksoup thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Neither prose nor poetry...
And only half of what I'd like to express...

This moment...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous...Magical...Fantastic...👍🏼
Yep! He caught HIS Special Star ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is absolutely beautiful! 👏
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Soup, this is so beautiful And the moment... Enchanting, Magical, Blissful ❤️
Edited by Raingoddess - 10 years ago
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fabulous... this pic is worth a thousand words. And your thoughts on the moment⭐️
Edited by minnie2308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hayyee. .. so beautiful ...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful! 👏

This encapsulates so completely what Sanam means to Aahil. How precious she now is. And after he wonders at her being, the very next question he asks is how do I take care of you? Total aww-worthy moment there.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh gosh Chicky!! This is breathtaking girl! Damn I think I needed a moment when I read this and then I read it again. I can't just happen to write what should I write on this?! I think I just teared up a little too in between...
This was enchantingly gorgeous! ❤️

"Does it hurt when I hold her?" 😭 This is so heartbreaking, I don't know it tugged at my heart like anything. I told you, its just an altogether different thing, when I read you..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was such a beautiful piece of work
would not count it as a poem or a drabble, just something written from the heart which was so pure and enchanting
loved it😊

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