AsYA (KaBhi) Story....LET ME HEAL YOU, Part Three(B) updated (Page 21)

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Sanjhari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

That's wonderful update

I loved it

Zoya was happy and asad is getting attracted towards her

And he wants to heal all her pain

So gaffer and razia are not her real parents

Asya met when they were kids

I really wanna know with whom zoya's father getting her engaged with

Continue next part super soon

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Very well written...

Orphanage scene was cute...

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Chahanya
Thank you for the pm
Will comment later :-)

okay...waiting for your comment

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Wonderful part.
Enjoyed reading it.
Update the next part soonish.

Thanks a lot Mayur

will try to update soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice update
Both thought abt each other. Asad wanted to erase all her pain & make her happy. Ghafoor decide something for zoya, hope it is a marriage proposal with Asad. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

Thankew so much 😊

ohh...you thought its a marriage proposal with Asad...well lets see...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: sasir
Nice...
But sad too...
Zoya is in very much pain...
Hope asad takes away all her pain

Thanks a lot Sasir

Asad will do that...he will fill her life with happiness...

but it will take some time...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Kabhibloom
Beautiful chapter.
Loved it.
The poetry was nice.
Asya r attracted to each other.
What has gaffur decided for zoya?
Continue soon

Thanks a lot dear

I m glad you like it

what Gaffur decided...keep guessing...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: azsumay
Hey diptee
Good to see you
I think you change your id that's why I didn't recognize you on my thread sorry
Amazing update
Asya orphanage seen was to good
I think Gaffur decided to zoya marry with asad
I loved it
Thanks for pm
Lol
Sum

Hey Sum...thanks a lot for lovely comment

sorry I forgot to mention that I changed my UN

so u also think that its a marriage proposal with asad...

wait to know...may be after one more update 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Woah! M i dreaming?
Yaha sach me update post ki he tune deepti?

Oye Sue...abhi dream se bahar aa...

let me chance to react like this 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Lovely update!
Their orphanage scene nd then she painted after long tym
kahi asya ke nikaah ki baat to nahi kehna tha gaffur ko?
Wait! Hang on! Wo shayris haye! Did u wrote them on ur own?
Coz they made the update magical and graceful
awesome job!

Thankew so much Sue

ohh god you also think its Asya nikaah...well u have to wait...

u really like that lines...actually I was thinking to skip...but then thought to give it a try...so happy that u like 😊