AsYa/Kabhi FF:MY DARK KNIGHT,Chapter2-Page9

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Aleena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: SanKsgian
Now introduce asad quickly
Want to see him

Ya,I will introduce him soon.How can my FF be good without our AAK[KSG,missing him so so so much😭 ]

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Aleena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: shailu123
Hey just read u r story it was awesome yaar aww my poor zoya n zayn is so cute continue soon n pm me 😊

Thanxxx ,shailu.I will try to update soon&Ya ,will pm u for sure. 😊

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Aleena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
Thanks for PM.😊
It was Very Interesting Concept.😊
Prologue was very interesting.😊
Chapter-1 was so Nice.😊
Felt so bad for Zoya that her parents met with an Accident and in serious condition.😭
Her Brother was so Cute that he wanted to divert her.😊
Please Continue soon and Pm to me,I am waiting here.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

Loved your comments,Priya.Thanxx 4 reading. I will continue soon and will pm u.

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Aleena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: anopama
Nice start to the story
Surprised Zoya hate. Rain
She loses everything when it rains
So now she is left with no parent and a 6 yr old brother
So is she abt 17 yrs old here
So is asad gonna be her school mate
Continue soon

Thanxx,Anu.I will update soon. 😊

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Gourav

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Chocochip008

Thanxxx ,Gourav.I will update soon for sure. 😊

Hey How do you my name...??
oh my profile...😊
well try to update soon...😃

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EMOksgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

nice concept !! many congratulation to u :) I liked zyan so cute ... Zoe is a fighter here and yess I liked d bro sis bonding ... plzz continue soon and thxx fr pm :)

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Aleena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Hello friends...I'm back with an update.I know that its only been a few days...But here I am... 😃 It is bcoz my laziness had taken a back seat for a while.But I cant say,it may reappear soon. 😭 .So I wanted to update B4 I gets lazzzy,so here I am... 😉
Not to forget,I'm really overwhelmed by the response I got for this FF[MY FIRST FF]Thank you all my wonderful readers...&HAPPY READING
Chapter2
My little brother
The dinner like always was a silent affair.He was in his'Dora' and me in my thoughts.I took our plates and went for washing it.I huffed in annoyance when I heard the title track of'Dora -the Explorer'.I just hate that girl.That girl with big round eyes annoyed me like nothing else in this world .I dont know what was with that girl which attracted Zayn.Was that her backpack or her map.Seriously,I dont know.I had tried many times to figure out the reason behind my hatred towards Dora,but had failed at each attempt.Was that her stupidity which forced me to hate her or was I jealous of her getting all attention from my brother.I just hoped that it was not the second option,I am not jealous of her-I said to myself
To get out of this crazy thoughts,I pulled the plates into the running water.Then I turned my eyes to the television,where I found that girl asking the viewers to jump,so that she can reach the Icecream hill.'What a stupid girl'-I wanted to shout but controlled the urge knowing very well that Zayn wont spare me if I call her stupid.I continued washing plates while my brother was jumping there,probably trying to help his Dora.I would name that show-'Dora and her foolishness',if I gets a chance.Again I tried to concentrate on my work ,but was failing because of that round eyed girl's high pitched voice.
Later I finished my work and went near Zayn.I sat near him waiting for it to end.Finally the time had come for Dora to bid goodbye .She had finished with her victory song& had finished asking the viewers,their favorite part in her journey.
Then I looked at him and he caught me staring at him.'What Zoe?he asked.I took it as a time to irritate him so I shouted'BREaKING NEWSSS...Dora died of heartattack while discovering google mapsss. Dont joke Zoe-he muttered and retired back to his room and slammed the door behind.What happened to him?-I asked to myself.Then I decided to let it be.After checking on him for the last time,I headed towards my room.I sat on my bed,once I reached there.I did'nt understand the reason behind Zayn's anger.Though I noticed that it started once he came back from the nearby stationary shop.I wanted to figure out but left it for tomorrow.
So tomorrow I am going to my new school.That thought sent a shiver down my spine.It was after One year that I am going back to school&I really hate to be a new kid.I then peeked through the window &found out that the rain had stopped.It calmed me.I hope nothing is gonna be bad.I dont want it to be.I'm really nervous.I dont know anything about Australia.Though 1year had passed,I had'nt paid any attention to the place.Even the beaches did'nt fascinate me nor the crowded Melbourne city.
Doing well in acadamics might turn tough to me as I had lost the touch in studies.I wished that everything turns up well.I laid down,my mind again went back to Zayn,his anger filled eyes came back to my mind.I need to figure out-I told to myself.Then I looked at the dark sky,praying for a good day,good future because I know past was past&I cant change it.
I could find myself adjusting to the sunrays that hit the room.Besides from that I could feel something crawling under my blanket.I ran my fingers through the blanket to find out what it was,then I shouted &ran towards the door,when I found a leech in my bed.Leech,really leech-I asked to myself.I tried to find out the possible way to get rid of it.Then a thought struck me-How did it get inside my room?
Zayyynnn...I yelled
Pls sroll down 4 more 😊

Edited by Chocochip008 - 10 years ago

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Aleena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

I found him standing there,laughing his heart out.I prentended to be angry and pulled him towards my room.
How did it come here?I asked
What r u talking about,he asked giving me an innocent look
Seriously, u dont know what I am talking about -I asked raising one eyebrow.
NO I dont know -he replied,this time with a puppy dog face.I tried hard not to melt.I was actually happy in seeing his oldself.I was happy knowing that he had lost yesterday's anger.But I cant show him that I was happy,not angry.So this time I yelled-U put that filthy creature here to annoy me and on the top of that you are lying too. He smiled and ran .I ran behind him.What followed was absolute fun and we ended breaking a vase.I shrieked when I glanced at the nearby clock.It was half past 8.I was not ready yet.I gave Zayn a glare,this time I was really angry.I asked him to get ready and quickly grabbed by clothes and ran to the bathroom.I was really gonna be late today and I do want to walk Zayn to his school before heading to mine.I cursed my stars
We were heading towards Zayn's school,I glanced at my watch again .It was quarter past 9.I am going to be expelled today itself,I murmered to myself.Soon I spotted Mike,my co worker and best friend.Hey honey-he chirped.First day at school,nervous...-he asked.Without answering I handed Zayn to him and pleaded.Take him to school,Mike.I am running late.Will see u soon.I pecked his cheek and ran.My heart pounding,breathing hitched,when I reached the gate of the school.I sighed in relief when I found many students arriving.Soon I saw the guard closing the gate.I ran and entered making the gaurd growl.I'm sorry-I muttered .I hastened my pace ,only to bump into someone.I fall and landed on the ground.I heard laughter everywhere.All were laughing at me.I felt like crying.Look what she is wearing,I heard someone saying.Seems like an Indian girl I heard another girl.Then someone gave me a hand.I soon heard lot of oohs and hahss.I badly wanted to look up,but was afraid what if I had bumped into a professor or something.But gaining my courage,I took the hand,only to fall again.The owner of that hands again pulled me down.Anger spread inside me...

Edited by Chocochip008 - 10 years ago

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Aleena

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Now its time for feedbacks. 😳 Plsss do hit the like button. 😉 .I hope that u enjoyed reading it like I enjoyed writing it.Plsss Leave ur comments.It really means a lot.