New AsYa FF : The Truth (BANNER POSTED| 20th September)

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Update

Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Very Good and Interestin part Hena.
Waise I don't know how you have planned this story..but I don't want Zoyaan...they can be best of friends...but not the other way..but again as you please.
AsYa's 3 meeting was also action , staring type and interestin thi...
Gaffur seems twisty..he was rude on phone but good to Zoya...and emotional of the orphanage.
Isme maine Mumaani ka Dialougue bhi padha..chitteniyon waala.
Intriguing part..
Continue soonish..
And Take care also.

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#133

gr8 part

asya meet amazing

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next

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Kabhibloom

@Kabhibloom

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Amazing. Loved it.
So zoya n nikhat were tensed about zoya's nightmare.
N zoya n imraan were hiding about proposal.
Asad saved zoya.
Here i think gaffur is zoya's father.
I also think that asad is a secret agent n he has got the chip.
Continue soon.
Take care of yourself n Best of luck for exams.

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Res for comment

Take care of your fingers Updates can wait

Also all the best for your exams Do well

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Aishwarya

@--Aishwarya--

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Well...it was a good update and loved your writing!!

But are you planning for ZoYaan?? 😕 I really don't want to see a ZoYaan track...Zoya and Ayaan would be good in Mona-Raabert mode 😉

But still its your story and tracks are of your wish 😊

Thanks for the pm!! 😊

And yeah...take care of yourself!!

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Beautiful update Trish...
Loved it...
MoBert were cute...
Ayaan ki flirty behavior kab jaayega?!
Bhabhi ke sath bhi flirt karta hai...
AsYa...
haye Zoya in musibat and Uska saviour in shining 3 piece suit aagaye bachane

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

awesome updt Trish

Kmal kar dita😃

so Imran made plan wid Zoe 2 propose Niks

khali pili bechare ki class lagne wali thi'

Asya ki 1 aur mulakat hui when he saved her

but udhar bhi woh jhagad rahe the😆

baaki everything waas nice Zoe getting nightmare Ayaan cheering her & d mystery is still there

overall nice one

& take care of ur fingers updt can wait😊

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#139

superb...
mona and Rabert friendship started ...interesting...
asad saved zoya...
loved the nokh-jokh between asya...
imraan with zoya arranged surprise for nikhath...
very nice..
study come first...
so study well...
all the very best for your examination...
hope burned parts will heal soon...