New AsYa FF : The Truth (BANNER POSTED| 20th September)

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Hi friends! 😊
M Hena, some of you may know me. After receiving a great replies from u guys for my previous works, this time m here with a ff on our beloved AsYa. 😃

U guys motivate me a lot, so finally I managed to penned down the Idea which nagging me now for sometime.

The story is mysterious type, about some secret missions of a cop to reveal the dirty face of a very successful so called famous -for- nobility man. While finding this truth how it interferes a lot more people's life, how the cop's life got intertwined with the love of its life...

I can't reveal the character sketch, or the plot as its of suspense type. U have to wait to know it.

So tell me should I continue??
Will leave u guys with chapter one...

❤️Hena 😊
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AsYa FF : The Truth

CHAPTER - 1

BHOPAL AIRPORT:

A car stopped outside the airport with a screeching sound. Two men got down from the car, one wearing a brown coloured suit with a brief case. The three piece suit couldn't hide his well build tall figure, his facial features screams arrogance which makes him more handsome. Wearing an aviator he doesn't look less than a Greek God. While the other man is in a light blue shirt with a matching tie taking some note. The looks clearly indicating that he is the assistant of the first man. They marched towards the entrance. The man in suit walks into the airport handing over the brief case to his assistant take off the aviator revealing his chocolate brown eyes.

Same time, inside the airport:

A little girl running all over the airport with a childish curiosity in her face n laughing innocently, while a women, seems to be her mother running behind her trying to catch her. The girl bumps with a young girl who was collecting her bag from the belt. The little girl got frightened n steps back a little. The lady is wearing an aqua coloured jeans n a green coloured full sleeved shirt, looking gorgeous and younger than her age. The innocent glow in her appearance makes her breath taking. She turned around to see a cute little girl standing looking slightly frightened. Finding no one around her the young lady smiled brightly at the little girl, n cheerfully said,

"Hey Ms. Beautiful girl! M Zoya n you are?"

Getting no awaited scolding the girl too cheerfully said, "Hi m Antara."

Zoya once again looked around to find if there is anyone with this cute girl but not finding anyone she kneels down to her, "aap iyaha akele kya kar rahe ho? Aapke mummy kaha hai?"

"Wo mummy mere piche to bhag rahi thi, pata nahi kaha chali gayi!"

"Acha?" she again look around.

"Aapko ek secret bataun? Acha hua wo nahi mili. Mujhe bohot maza aa rahi hai iyaha." N started laughing.

Zoya thought to be with this girl n hand her over safely to her parents. She tried to befriend with her. In no time they got along like long lost buddies. Antara cutely describing what she is seeing making Zoya laugh openly.

The man who entered the airport suddenly stopped hearing a melodious laughter. It's like a music to his ear. He snapped his head towards the direction of the laughter to find a young lady with a cute little girl laughing freely. He inches closed to them, clearing his view. He stops in his track mesmerised by her beauty. Her long shiny smooth hair flowing with her movement, her laughter creating a magic on him. Then he noticed the dimple on her cheek. He couldn't look away, staring shamelessly at her. Unknowingly a smile formed on his lips.

"Mummy!"

The loud voice of that cute girl broke his trance. He guiltily chided himself, shamelessly checking out a married woman. Though somewhere in his heart a sadness grip him.

"Asad sir, they are here."

He turned around to see his assistant calling him. He walked towards him totally missing the scene unfolding behind him.

Zoya was standing with Antara laughing at her cute talks. Suddenly feeling someone's eye on her she was about to turn back when Antara screams, "Mummy!"

She runs happily to her mother who picks her up in her hands n hugged tightly!

"Kaha chali gayi thi maeri bachi!" n kissed all over her face. She then turned towards Zoya n thanked her heartily, "Aapka bohot bohot sukria meri bachi ka dhyan rakhne ke liye."

"Nahi isme sukria karne ki koi bat nahi hai. It's my duty! Aapki beti bohot pyari hai. By the way m Zoya Farooqui."

"Hi Zoya! M Ragini. Nice to meet u!"

"Same here"

"Aap iyaha nayi lag rahi hai."

"Ha. Mai New York se hoon. Iyaha meri dost ki nikah mein ayi hoon."

"Oh! Hum aapko lift de sakte hai aap jaha bhi ja rahi hai."

"Sukria. Par mujhe pick up karne aa rahi hai meri dost."

"Nice to meet u Zoya. Hum phir milenge. Bye!"

Zoya kissed little Antara's chick and bid each other good bye. Zoya picked up her bags and walks toward the exit, dialling a number in her cell.

Somewhere in the city:

In an abundant factory, some men are seen to be playing cards on a table while drinking. There appearance clearly indicating of their goon nature. A young lady is tied up on a chair unconscious beside them. They evilly laughing n murmuring dirty words while eying the girl. One of them, seems like head of them put out a cell phone and called someone informing the successful kidnapping, when suddenly the light goes off!

The goons got alerted n pick up their guns pointing their surrounding try to find out any intruder. Finding no movement around them one of them suggested checking on the fuses. He goes out and in some time the light comes back. They sigh in relief but that was just for a while!

"Ye ladki kaha gayi!" One of them shouted.

All of them looked towards the direction where a lady was tied up in the chair, now is empty, ropes are hanging freely from the chair. They all again picked up their guns and started searching the whole factory.

"Wo mere pas hai". Suddenly a loud voice echoed the empty factory.

The goons turned towards the voice pointing their gun, a hooded figure of a well built man visible in dim light of the factory.

"Koun hai tu?" the head of the goon asked the man pointing the gun straight towards him, but without any warning the man starts shooting all the goon straight at their heads leaving any chance of surviving. Startled with the sudden event the head of the goon drops his gun and started running from there frightened. The hooded man shook his head in amusement n followed him. In sometime he finally cornered the goon. After finding no way to run the goon sat on the floor pleading him not to kill him.

The hooded man stopped running and inhaled loudly, "Uff! Kitna bhagaya! Ab to tujhe bohot bara saza milega!"

He pulled up the goon by his collar and forcefully took him out. He handed over the goon to the police. Police officer thanked him for saving the girl and helping in arresting the goon. He just waved his hand and walked away from there smiling to himself for accomplishing another successful mission. He pulled out a microchip from his pocket which he managed to sneak out from the goon's cell phone without the officer's notice. He kissed it and safely put it inside his pocket again smiling victoriously, "Another step towards your destroy Mr. Gaffoor Sidiqqui!" He murmured to himself and started whistling merrily still walking!

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So who do you think the hooded guy is?? Let me know in ur comments..



SO THIS IS WHAT IT IS..

WAITING FOR UR REPLIES..

IGNORE MY MISTAKES PLZ...

Edited by H.e.n.a - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX :

Chapter 1 - page 1

Chapter 2 - page 5

Chapter 3 - page 10

Chapter 4 - page 14

Chapter 5 - page 18

Chapter 6 - page 22
For pms plz buddy me..
silent readers plz don't buddy..
Edited by H.e.n.a - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res for me...
unres...

lovely start
so asad ko galat fehmi hogayi k zoya married hai
enjoy reading it
loved how u describe asad
update soon
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res for Aarzo, Jas, affu, arshu, choto, adi, srash
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continue it soon dear
Little idea seems interesting
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continue soon
Plz pm me for updates
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Awesome. Amazing.
Loved it. Interesting storyline.
Curious about story to unfold.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WellCome back yar
Interesting Plot
do CONTINUE
&
count me in
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kya baat hai Madam kuch jyada hi accha likh lia himmat kese hui?? 😆

Kidding but it was really superb. I just loved it please keep continuing it and I loved the way it started Asad is really mysterious.



And about Zoya, I guess she has come to Siddhique Mansion at Humeira's wedding ... I just guess and may be that little cute girl Antara is some how related to the story's next step.


Thats what I guess 😆 Mark it. Just guess ROFL




Or ye sare baad me unres karenge sal do sal baad main zara quick reply karti hu 😆


But i really loved it ❤️ ❤️

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