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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

So asad is happy to have the princess with him
But boy do their rub each other the wrong way
So they fight but then they work together to save themselves
So ayan happy to meet her tanu not
She vent her anger
Zoya is shocked
So the king and queen of eldorado
Najma their daughter
What is the possibility asad is their son
Continue soon
More English plz

thank you for reading and commenting😆
hmm more English haan
yeah sure
done😆😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nikii11

sukriya haan

apun jaisa hain waisa pyaar karnekeliye🤣🤗
warna aisa ajab gajab pyaar aajkal kaha milthi🤣


hehee sahi kaha
are gale mil yar
exams khatam🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac


hehee sahi kaha
are gale mil yar
exams khatam🤗

haan exams katam
hip hip hurray🤗
tension katham
sar dard katham
chain ki saans mili hai
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac


hehee sahi kaha
are gale mil yar
exams khatam🤗

oops tu tho rocker bhi ban gayi
sum dii ki thread main jaathi hoon
badayia badiya
mainu maaf karde
tu bhi busy main be busy thi
u know na how these kambakth exams are
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Haan koi baat ni yar
i knw
lekin ab tension ko mar goli and ja sunami ke thread pe 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ab toh exams bhi finish ho gaye chutiyan bhi mna li ab updt bhi kar do Chinki minki😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Ab toh exams bhi finish ho gaye chutiyan bhi mna li ab updt bhi kar do Chinki minki😉😆

look who is talking😡😡
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Ab toh exams bhi finish ho gaye chutiyan bhi mna li ab updt bhi kar do Chinki minki😉😆

waise aap kon hain jassi lassi do I know you 🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chappy 10

well as usual I am late with my updating this story.. so sorry...
baki reasons was out of ideas and was facing writers block
those who forgot plz don't take pain to read...
those who remember ...hey here is your update
Precap: zoya the princess meets asad's frnds

And tanveer doesn't seem to like the princess due to the king killing her parents

Aab aage...

Tanveer : hume chup chap humari khazana ke bharemain sochna chayiye

(We should simply think of the treasure)

Aur apne dosto ko wahi sheri ghaav main milna chayiye (and meet our frnds near sheri village)

Ayan : according to me hume shezadi ko uske ghar tak pounchana chayiye( according to me we should drop the princess home safely)

Zoya : "I am going to the palace on my own" blurts in frustration since you guys have wrong notions of the "king" and his family...

you guys can go to your treasur hunt

good luck with it...mockingly"

Tanveer : ohh so you decided

Asad : well you are coming with us princess

I mean this is elderado, "The enemy kingdom"

And The soldiers of this kingdom are after you

The soldiers can harm you or hurt you

So its better that we The narnian people, safeguard you

Zoya : oh so you think I cant safeguard myself well let me tell you ..

Thanks but no thanks

I can manage myself ...

Asad grabs zoya's hand tightly and says your are coming with me and that's final

let go of me...stuggling herself from his rough hard mucular arm

Asad : zidd chodo (stop being stubborn )and pulls her towards the cart

And tells others to follow him

Tanveer whispering to ayan : I don't understand why do you guys seem adamant in taking the princess with us

Asad : tum dono ki kusur pusar hogayi tho chale

{If you guys had enough of mumbling then shall we proceed}

The cart rider seeing them says where ??

Asad says sheri gaav

Asad makes zoya forcefully climb the cart

Zoya huffs and makes weird faces

Zoya : I am not your slave ...

And you cant force me

Main apni marzi ki mallika hoon

No body tells me what to do ??

Asad starts yawning : yeah right" says sarcastically

Tanveer stares at zoya irritated

Ayan giggles

Half an hour paas

And nearby sheri village in elderado kingdom there occurs sandstorm

People nearby run back to their homes shut their doors

Shut their windows

Sandstorm...run sandstorm.. people start shouting

Run back to your respective homes

Zoya telling the fellow who is running the cart to stop...

I say stop...stop right there

Asad holds zoya's mouth and mutters ...princess you being such a spoilt brat

Zoya : stop touching me

Asad : pulls back his palms which were brushing her lips

The cart stops...

Asad : why have you stopped the cart

The cart rider : we cant move further coz sandstorm approaching

But we are close to sheri village

Zoya jumps out of the cart

All come out of the cart...

Zoya : now I can go on my own

Ayan : you cant coz sand storm approaching and no carriage will leave for narnia

Tanveer : looks lik you are stuck with us

Asad starts to contol his laughter but ends up laughing hysterically

Zoya gets annoyed and rolls her eyes

...

Scene shifting to Narnia palace

Razia faking worry towards gaffur infront of the minsters

Oh I hope the king becomes well soon

I cant see him lik this in this condition and makes a dull face

The minsters demand for 10 ayurvedic herbal hakims (doctors) from different kingdoms coz the king is still in the same condition even after giving him herbal medicines

Razia gets scared...

...

Akram arrives the palace

Akram and his aunt razia meet and greet each other

Akram smirks how are you aunt

Razia :haye mere jigar ke tukde I am pretty much fine

They Have long" interaction session" with each other

After a long session of chit chat

Since narnia is not having any king right now I thought you should look after the affairs of the kingdom

Minster 1: well your highness.. he cant sit on the throne just lik that

Razia : I know we have discussed this earlier right !

and you know he is not an outsider he is my nephew ...my brother nassir's son

My brother is no more...but the kingdom of corona my native place is very well looked after my nephew akram

and you minsters should not forget he is the male suitor for the princess and I have the royal scrolls of authority with the royal seal in it ..and you simply have to obey what is told to you

minster : but your higness we think that the princess was unhappy with this "marriage proposal" leading her to escape from the situation

and we think that even the king had figured that out

razia : stop interfearing and thinking so much in the personal matters of the royal family

you just are the minsitres working for the royals

if you anger us, we would even suspend you from your prestigious posts

so learn to respect "the queen of Narnia" and her orders

and I am temporarily announcing akram to look aftr the whole kingdom of Narnia

and that's final..

all minsters bow to the queen in fear of losing their posts

akram smirks"

and says well from today itself I would love to take incharge of the kingdom

minsters keep quiet

one of the minster named aftab kureshi is very disturbed with the sudden changes happening in the kingdom...

akram's first day

he orders the labourers of the kingdom the lowest claas to do more work and not to expect more wages

they would get the lowest...

and they would not get the right to learn sword fighting or any warfare activities

its only limited for the soldiers of the kindom and for the royals...

all listen quietly

next asya scenes

zoya : asking other cart riders whether they will leave to Narnia

or not

ayan tanu asad" the trio are watching her lik an audience...

the cart riders say : no they will not leave till a week

zoya is horrified till a week!

oh god dam it ! "what will I do till a week

asad : humare saath rahogi aur kya smirking

rehan imraan haider humi gather there as they came from sea route easily

and even knew wher to meet each other ..as their meeting was first itself decided

that they all would meet in sheri village

heyaa guysss

tanu heyaaa humi

all group hug each other..

tanu and humi bear hug each other

seeing their frindshp bonding

zoya feels left out

asad sees her engrossed in herself and says kya huva

zoya thinking "kash mere bhi ithne saree frnds hote" ...

asad : ahem ahem kaha koyi hain shezaadi(princess)

(where are you lost princess)

He snaps his fingers

Zoya comes out of her trance

zoya : hmm I am not staying with you guys

asad : well there is no other option left "smirking"

zoya : why in earth are you smirking

haider : may I know your name mohterma..

zoya simply ignores haider's question

rehan : well even I wanna know "the name of beautiful new entry in our gang

humi whispers to tanu : yeh kon hain ?

tanu says loudly she is a spoit princess of Narnia..she kind of thinks highly about herself

like she is the supreme authority

humi rehan haider imraan : wht a princess ??

tanu :yep

humi : looks at her in disgust coz the king has killed her parents too...

zoya too notices that disgusting look on her face and chooses to ignore humaira

rehan : hey there nice meeting you ...well I am kind of nervous what to speak

and you are really very beautiful lass

he bows infront of her and takes her hand and kisses her hand

zoya smiles and says nice meeting a true gentlemen

asad to bows infront of zoya and says well I am no less then a gentlemen..tries taking her hand to kiss

zoya pulls back...

Asad : yeh kya tha tumne apna haath usse diya muje kyon nahi

What was that! you gave your hand to him ..."why not me" says pouting

Zoya : meri marzi...Aur main tume apna haath kabhi nahi doongi...smirking"

Asad frowns in displeasure

Haider : hey I am haider

Imraan: heyaa zoya

Zoya handshakes them and befrnds them...

All the boys including ayan starts busy surrounding zoya speacking to her and chatting to her

Giving all their attention to her...

Zoya ignores asad humi tanu

Tanu : sab ke sab lage huve hain iss shezadi se baath karne main ki hum dono pyaari khoobsurat lagne wali ladkiyon ko tho bhool hi gaye...

(Everyone are so engrossed with the princess that they have forgotten the 2 beautiful looking gals)

Asad : ahem gals ...dont worry I am here itself to giv you both my full attention

Humi giggles

Tanu feels shy...

Asad : tanu tum ithni lal lal kyon lag rahi ho

Humi : haan bilkul tanu bolo na teasing her

Tanu : pushing humi aside blurts out asad koi ithna charming kaise hosaktha hain

asad : kya kare adat se majbur hoon.."I was born to be a charmer"...

Tanu : I agree says dreamily..

All go walking and talking in the village

The villagers seem to run franatically to their homes as the sandstorm as approached

All run inside their respective homes and close the windows and doors shut

Asad says oh no guys don't separate be close to each other and hold each others hands

Don't leave each others hands for even a second...

ps : not proofread ignore my mistakes
Edited by nikii11 - 9 years ago

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