|AsYa TS ~ All I Ever Wanted| (P2 updated pg8 1/6) - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Ramya,
Its really nice to see you back. Guess life has been keeping most of us really busy these days. I signed it after many days and saw your pm. Had read it last night itself but cudnt comment.

The Ts is awesome. It brought back so many memories. I love your version of that fire incident. It was good in QH too. Asad's tears and honest apology were heart touching but they needed to be done while she was awake. Zoe letting him off the hook so easily as always wasn't really cool. This was something he needed to remember, he was the only one who knew it. But due to his anger issues n judgemental nature, he over looked it.

I loved how you've made him man up here and seek.an apology face to face. Her words in reply were truly like a dagger plunged in to the heart. Though she hadnt uttered those things deliberately, they were needed to make him realize how his each action n word affects her.

Finally he has got a taste of his own medicine. Always pushing her away n breaking her heart by chanting the "nakli nikkah" thing. Ab he knows how killing it must have been for her. Finally, he lets out the truth. Dnt make Zoe give in immediately. Let him realize his mistake of always misunderstanding and not trusting her.

Please post soon. Waiting eagerly for the last part.

Love..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..



Thank u for understanding! I'm trying but even if I do manage to come up with something I'm sure u will be the only one left to read it. 😆



i can't b sure of that lolz😆😆

coming back 2 part 2
so Asad finally said he wanted 2 marry her 4 real
OMG he should make some special arrangements 1st EC AAK
jab Zoe dur jaane wali hoti hai bas usse kaise bhi rokna chahta hai but doesn't say ILU
Airport engagement pe bhi toh yahi hua tha
i m sure Zoya bolegi kyun chahte ho shaadi karna & he'll b tongue tied cu itni simply ILU nahi bolega bina koi special arrangements
liked ASYaan ki convo Ayaan 4 a change looked more intelligent & mature
& I loved d breakfast scene Asad ki excitedness 2 see Zoya & Dilnaj ki full on teasing😆😆
thanx 4 PM
aur nxt part jaldi liko😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you all for all the lovely comments! Sorry I haven't replied to most of you, actually there's a rule on IF now that you can't post thank you replies which is why I haven't. I'll reply to the longer reviews though. And guys sorry for not updating yet, I'm just a lil busy atm, I'll update by the end of this month, please just bear with me till then.
Ramya :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

Thank you all for all the lovely comments! Sorry I haven't replied to most of you, actually there's a rule on IF now that you can't post thank you replies which is why I haven't. I'll reply to the longer reviews though. And guys sorry for not updating yet, I'm just a lil busy atm, I'll update by the end of this month, please just bear with me till then.

Ramya :)


Ur business is understandable Ramya
but promise me u won't leave this Ts also like d forgotten FF😆
only than u r allowed😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
^Haan haan, promise, I won't break up with this TS. 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cute, funny and romantic!
Awesome piece of work!
Update soon. :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

^Haan haan, promise, I won't break up with this TS. 🤣


OK than permission granted😃
Ja Ramya ji le apni Zindagi😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wahi toh kar rahi hoon abhi bhi 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update yaar. :) and your lkg standardsss????... seroiously!!!!!!! You are doing an awesome work. Love you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...

he is trying to mend things...

she just going on ... with her ranting...

he just need to kiss her to shut her up

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