New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16

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@ToughStuff

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Posted: 10 years ago

#451

*sigh*

madam hum kumzor dil ke hai...

Itna rulaya na karo Hume...

An plz next update me Kuch galat na ho

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: anopama
Nice update
Very emotional
Wow Zoya pass what can I say horrific
I can't depict whose pass is more bad
Zoya is so broken and damaged from tht
But still she wants a baby and asad want to know why too
Guess she want to share love but she saw how love destroy her parents
And tht is y she don't want love and a relationship
Aww how asad try to comfort her
He tells she is fixed she is perfect
Aww main hoon na hope he stand by his words
Continue soon

Hi anopama,

Thank you for your feedback, glad you enjoyed the update! 😊

Yes, both have had a devastating past, and as children both were severely affected.

Thanks.

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: cutie15
Yeahh u updated..:)
Mind blowing update..
I dont know why are u not happy wid zoya's past.. but this was something so so emotional..
I got goosebumps reading this..
zoya has suffered so much..! Loved how asad took care of her..nd told her to be there always..
awesome update..
plz plz update soon the next ond nd do pm me.. I didnt received pm for this nd the previous one..:(

Hi Cutiee,

My very excited reader! 😊

Thank you so muchdarling.. I'm glad you liked it.

Yep, not happy with how it came out, I had a lot more planned , more impact full but never got the time to write it all down.. so yeah.. not how I planned it.

Arrey but I always send every one PM's ..😕 I don't know what's happening.. many of you guys are complaining in not receiving PM'S.

Anywhoo, I'll make send you a PM alag se next time. dw😳

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: Chandnii.

Aww, Surbhi .. Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! 😃😳
It's a bit difficult to write such emotional and sad stuff.

Hhaha.. you guessed it right... I'm planning on a little twist maybe... lets see.. ! 😈

Update will come only after I have thought of what next to write and when I get some time to write!

😳

*Goes and hides*

m happy ur glad😆😉
yeah i understand its tought o write those sad ones
being a writer myself m running a story where the horrible past revolves🥱
haww!!!!!...now m becoming hell curious to what this devilish mind of urs is planning⭐️⭐️⭐️
okay write when u feel like
as a reader i have to wait i guess😛

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Very Well written and emotional part chandinii..
Zoya's past was really horrible...i mean for a little girl to witness that and then to become a person she is truly applauding.
I just hope it doesn't turn in the wrong way now...whatever AsYa shared...
Interesting update.
Continue soonish.

Hey Mayur,

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it..

Hope things are falling in place for you now .. as the story progresses aur samjhega!

Thanks for the patience and not leaving the story midway!

Oh and I may add some twist.😈

😊

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya
Beautiful...meaningful chapter...
Zoya's past was horrifying... But like the way asad try to support her...
What asad said is only what he felt...
What could be the answer of asad's question...?
Plzzz...update soon...

Hey kabhi_asya,

Thank you so much, Glad you liked it! 😳

The answer to Asad's question could be a twist in the story! 😈😆

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: ayat20
Felt bad for zoya...
Hope asad always stands for zoya n never leaves her

Hey ayat.

Than k you. Glad you liked it 😊

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: don girls
Interesting
Zoya past was dark and sad emotional type

Hey

Thank you so much 1 😊

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: sdusa06
it was well written update..👏
it was very emotional update ...made me really sad 😔😭
I really liked the fact that asad and zoya are trying to share each other harsh painful ugly past...which would bring them more close to each other and have a better understanding.
The most adorable moment was asad trying to support zoya and light her mood 😳
The end was not expected because the way it is left with the question ...it is giving worry feeling as to know what will happen next...
Can't wait to for the next chapter. plz update soon. 😊😛

Hey sdusa06,

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed reading the chapter.😊

It's so sweet of you to have come around! 😃

Yep, there may be a twist in the tale, not sure as yet !

I'm not sure soon, but i'll try! 😊