New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16

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sonia

@sdusa06

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Posted: 10 years ago

#441

it was well written update..👏
it was very emotional update ...made me really sad 😔😭
I really liked the fact that asad and zoya are trying to share each other harsh painful ugly past...which would bring them more close to each other and have a better understanding.
The most adorable moment was asad trying to support zoya and light her mood 😳
The end was not expected because the way it is left with the question ...it is giving worry feeling as to know what will happen next...
Can't wait to for the next chapter. plz update soon. 😊😛

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#442

Very emotional update
Zoya past was hurtful. She shared that with asad & he hold her. Hope they will open with their reservations & confess what they feel for other. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#443

Mona darling wonderful part👏👏

thoda zyada emotional tha agreed

Zoya's past was really horrifying I understand now why she is reluctant 2 embrace love even if she may feel it 4 Asad.😭

But it was really unfortunate as well a sweet loving family got destroyed just bcuz of doubt

I don't get it why her mother always used 2 smile & bear his every abuse was is it bcuz what he doubted was true or she felt their love will change things soon or just 2 keep Zoya away from their dark side.😕

D way she broe down telling d tale & Asad was their 2 support her was fantastically penned.👏

It ended again on a cliffy now what's Zoya's reason 2 have a baby I also want 2 know 😳😉 so 4 that updt soon Mona darling cuz I m impatient insaan.😆

Love of love hugs again 4 a sincere effort🤗

PS- itni late lateefi har baar nahi chalegi updt next part soon😉😆

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
mine

yay!!!!
is baar bhi pehla like and ist spot mera🥳
pichli baar tune pm ni kiya ni to aaj meri head trick ho jaati na🥱

unres
this was so painful to read yaar😭
such emotional things u can write so well
to pehle to uske liye thumbs up👍🏼
then came the horrible past
and how much she'd seen and gone thru
but still itni acchi insaan bani wo to kabiliyat taarif👏
i liked it when asad patiently supported her
just hope dono ke beech aage koi problem naa ho
kyuki the point u left us is making me worried yaar
kuch to he ...
i want to know more
pls continue asap
yar how can u end there???😡
i want update
pls chandnii
pretty pls😳

Aww, Surbhi .. Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! 😃😳

It's a bit difficult to write such emotional and sad stuff.

Hhaha.. you guessed it right... I'm planning on a little twist maybe... lets see.. ! 😈

Update will come only after I have thought of what next to write and when I get some time to write!

😳

*Goes and hides*

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: Kabhibloom
Very emotional chapter.
Loved it.
Zoya's past is sad n horrifying.
Nobody should experience such thing.

Liked how asad supported her.
Hope everything get sorted out soon n asya come together.
Continue soon

Hey Kabhibloom,

Thank you so much. Glad you liked the chapter! 😃

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: -ABI-
Pretty
Update

Hhahaha..

Pretty update kya hota hai ?😕😆

Interesting?

Anywhoo, thank you, glad you liked it ! 😊

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

hehee...mene abhi abhi lollipop khaya he...sweet to lagega hi na🤣

lol!

Kuch bhi na! 😆

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: harkav
great story pls continue soon want to see zoya pregnant n asad pampering her. love their child.

Hey harkav,

Thank you , glad you liked it! 😊

There's still time for that part.

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Superb part loved it
finally zoya's past is out
but it's really sad part
asya supporting each other wow
Excited to know what zoya is hesitating to tell
thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
continue soon

Hey nilu,

Thank you so much,

Glad you liked it.

Sure. Np!

😊