New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 - Page 32

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Mine 😃

Unres 😳

OK. I know I am a slow writer and even a slower reader. But itna slow bhi nahin that it would take me 2 hours to read that. Am telling you Mona, zaalim zamana dushman humara 😛😆Everyone... EVERYONE! had something or the other to discuss with me tonight. N then, hubby dearest came back early from work n took my tab wanting to do office work 😕 why did he even come back early was beyond me 😡.

Hahahha.. It's absolutely fine, Chocs. .. I understand! 😆😊 You still find the time to stalk and catch your spot! 😳😎

Anyways. I read the update And definitely loved it. This is not just a deal anymore am telling you. Its become much more from the time they have started sharing those kisses ☺️. Am now only waiting to see who realises first and who confesses first.

Thank you darling Choco! ❤️ I wish I could keep it this simple and make them see right away why it shouldn't be a deal but more ! 😕

Loved it completely my sweetheart. Waiting for the next part already 😳

I haven't even thought about writing the next part! 😆

Probably after you post a couple chapters of your story! 😳

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Mine ;)
lol aaj me har ek ka thread stalk kar rahi hu
i hit the 1st like

unres

wow!!!

its just wow how a writer like u can write the same thing with 2 different person's prespective👏

great job

Originally posted by: ajanshul

It's amazing

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Well Similar to previous one

but

was on Zoya's pov

so,

I still it

Originally posted by: life4me

Wonderful update. Please continue soon.

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

res😃

unres,

First, this chapter was mindblowing, exceptionnel, wonderful, brilliant and stratospheric and I can add more and more adjective to describe this one and it won't be enough.

I know you will say that I am exagerated a bit, but NOT-AT-ALL. First, because it was unexpected and second, because I didn't expected this kind of chapter and third, because this is what I love the most in stories: emotions.

You write, no... You painted such an amazing chapter, full of emotion, showing Zoya's inner battle between her mind and heart. And this is what I like to read and to write about.

Zoya's pov was really really beautiful, heartouching, you show so many shades of her: hesitation, confusion, clumsiness, confidence, even her love. This chapter is a delicacy and you describes very well the up and down in her heart, in her body and in her head. You didn't miss any part.

You gave me as a reader a beautiful travel throught all this different and mysterious compartment, heart, body and soul. You merged perfectly all of them, and because I am a girl, this chapter touched me more because I went throught all this battle in my life. Not in the same situation, but I can understand how it works, this non-stop battle between close partner but yet so far when feelings came in between. I feel like emotion was acting like a beautiful girl and the heart-body-soul were 3 youngs boys fighting for her 😆 (I know I am crazy 🤪and I assume).

I will finish with one word to describe your chapter, even if I know it will not make justice to how I feel after reading this. It is just P-E-R-F-E-C-T. You don't need to change any word in it, because the emotions that escaped from your chapter was in the right place. It was not only intense between character but the chapter was full of it.

Beautifull and well written piece. I am so glad that I came to your story.

I am in love with this chapter. Totally