New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Mine 😆

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OMG Mona so so hot ☺️

Gosh how they tried controlling themselves gut failing. Hiwbtheyb were both acting like teenagers going on a date for the first time and then how finally they couldn't keep their hands off each other 😳

I adore Zoya here to be so considerate about Dilshaad's presence in the house when they... 😉😆

Loved it completely and am really praying that they decide to stay together by the end

Update soon meri jaan 🤗

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

When Berry gets the 1st spot!

I hopeyou like it though! 😛😆

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Abi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: mona12345

When Berry gets the 1st spot!

I hopeyou like it though! 😛😆

When I login to check for new updates and I do get one. Yaayee!!!!

Am sure I will like it. Going to read now 😉

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Kabhibloom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

very nice.loved it. Update soon.

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anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Wow so hot

Love it

Both couldn't concentrate on work

But still they didn't call each other the entire week

Egotistic much

So dilshad gone knew asad would have went to use his house

So love the lunch meeting

They dress to impress

He was tender and loving with her

They can't close this deal once it is successful

They will keep craving for more

Continue

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Hey Chandini... 😊
Thanx for the PM..😛
Well I have a little confession to make here..😳 I am a little confused about the complexity of this plot and deal which is presented here...I don't know what all to say about it.. 😕 but yes leaving all that behind... I will just take this as an AsYa story...not going much into the deal's compelxities...hope you won't mind that..😳
Update was well written and very good...👏
Both AsYa were craving , thinking and yearning about each other...after the seal of the deal... 😉 but avoided each other fo further clauses...shayad..😆
Still dressed to kill eachother with their looks...and the office part...was naughty..😉
Interesting update.. ⭐️
Maybe you should change this title from TS into SS.😛
Continue soonish.. 😃

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Shaila Banu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

So awesome update yaar n sexy also love it excite for next one continue soon 😊

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Really beautiful chapter and I am happy that you extend it to an SS, good job 😉

Coming to the chapter, it was really a pleasure to read it and well written, logically and perfectly.

I love how your portray their hesitation, their attraction, their awkwardness. It was really well described.

So finally both realized the hhuge step that both toook for this deal and all the involvement. I must say that I love how they tried to convince themselves that they are only doing it for the deal and not for more, this part was really funny.

I read one of your comment and you will detail later why Zoya took this kind of decision and why she don't want to have any attach. It will be interesting to go futher in the character, I feel that you are preparing something good.

Your story was really good and it has been a long time I didn't been hooked so much to a story like yours.

COntinue to do your good job and God bless you dear.

Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago