New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Persiko
Nice update

Thankyou ! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Thankyou so much ABI!! Glad you enjoyed it! 😃😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

When I login to check for new updates and I do get one. Yaayee!!!!

Am sure I will like it. Going to read now 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: khushbloom
very nice.loved it. Update soon.

Hey Khushbloom,

Thankyou. Glad you enjoyed reading!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: anopama
Wow so hot
Love it
Both couldn't concentrate on work
But still they didn't call each other the entire week
Egotistic much
So dilshad gone knew asad would have went to use his house
So love the lunch meeting
They dress to impress
He was tender and loving with her
They can't close this deal once it is successful
They will keep craving for more
Continue

Hey anopama , thankyou so much. Glad you liked it !

I wouldn't call it ego here.. Thy're just trying to fight their feelings and maintain this so called distance, be preofessional and avoid the awkward feelings.

Anywho. I'm glad you liked the chapter!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: ajanshul
It's nyc

Thankyou ! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hey Chandini... 😊
Thanx for the PM..😛
Well I have a little confession to make here..😳 I am a little confused about the complexity of this plot and deal which is presented here...I don't know what all to say about it.. 😕 but yes leaving all that behind... I will just take this as an AsYa story...not going much into the deal's compelxities...hope you won't mind that..😳
Update was well written and very good...👏
Both AsYa were craving , thinking and yearning about each other...after the seal of the deal... 😉 but avoided each other fo further clauses...shayad..😆
Still dressed to kill eachother with their looks...and the office part...was naughty..😉
Interesting update.. ⭐️
Maybe you should change this title from TS into SS.😛
Continue soonish.. 😃

Hi Mayur,

No problem! 😊

I'm glad you told me just how you feel about the plot! It's good to read the readers true feelings! 😃

Also, you can totally question me about whatever you feel you can't comphrehend! I'll explain it tothe best of my capabilities! 😳

And thank you so much for the appreciation yet! 😃😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: shailu123
So awesome update yaar n sexy also love it excite for next one continue soon 😊

Hey Shailu,

Thank you so much, glad you liked it ! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: radadolcevida
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Really beautiful chapter and I am happy that you extend it to an SS, good job 😉
Coming to the chapter, it was really a pleasure to read it and well written, logically and perfectly.
I love how your portray their hesitation, their attraction, their awkwardness. It was really well described.
So finally both realized the hhuge step that both toook for this deal and all the involvement. I must say that I love how they tried to convince themselves that they are only doing it for the deal and not for more, this part was really funny.
I read one of your comment and you will detail later why Zoya took this kind of decision and why she don't want to have any attach. It will be interesting to go futher in the character, I feel that you are preparing something good.
Your story was really good and it has been a long time I didn't been hooked so much to a story like yours.
COntinue to do your good job and God bless you dear.

Hey Radadolcevida,

Thankyou so so so much! 😃 Glad you found the story gripping and are enjoying reading it! Thank you for the kind words! 😳 Very motivating!

Yeah, I had to change the story a bit, so yes, I've extended this beyond 3 parts! And again I'm not sure how in depth would I be going with the characters issues but I'll definitely do outline them. So yeah.

Hope you like the upcoming parts as well !

Loved reading your feedback! It's always great to know the readers view!! 🤗

Thanks! God bless you too ! x

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Posted: 10 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Awesome part loved it
Assad and zoya with their feelings were so nervous and excited
Asya lunch date and after kiss so hot
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon

Hey Nilu,

Thankyou so much, glad you liked it ! 😃

I haven't started writing the next part. But, hopefully should begin soon ! x