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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Asad apologised to her bc of his presence on airport. Ayaan asked him & he told him to get out. Zoya again thought Ayaan as AAK. Nice naughty time in office. Waiting to see her reaction when she got to know abt real AAK. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

Thanks u so much...
U always give me the feel that u read my update head to toe... Love u for that.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

thanks for the pm...continue soon

Yar to tell the truth I am going to have my Urdu paper tomorrow and I am concentrating full on it, but it seems like what I read, flew away over my head.😡
Today I was thinking that I would had rather updated my story if that was to happen...
Inshallah I will update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

this misunderstanding is going to be fun...
both bros are having fun...
it was interesting

Yeah, but only ayaan is having fun, asad is supper irritated.😆

Btw awsome D.P
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Nice start
So asya met
He mesmerize by her
So nice he called and apologies
But how he knows her number and how she knows where he works
Haha she thinks ayaan is AAK
So ayaan is crushing on Zoya the movie star
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anopama

Nice start

So asya met
He mesmerize by her
So nice he called and apologies
But how he knows her number and how she knows where he works
Haha she thinks ayaan is AAK
So ayaan is crushing on Zoya the movie star
Continue soon


Actually, I mentioned asad is a famous architect so knowing his place is not a difficult task, as for zoya's no. Is concerned so asad again do have contacts that can lead him to anybody's no.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Guys I will update in an hour ...
Thanks for waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Credit: starry-Phoenix
CHAPTER:3
Asad leaves for his meeting and on his way says gives instructions to his P.A.

Asad: undder ayaan aya hoa hai, make sure ussey koi
Pereshani na ho.

His P.A nods yes and Asad was about to leave when he remembers ayaan asking for coffee, he in annoyance rolls his eyes and turns around to stop P.A.

Asad: parassad!!!... 2 coffee bhi serve kerwa do.

Prassad: ok sir.

Asad leaves for his meeting.
On the other hand zoya and ayaan are talking.

Zoya: actually mein aap se milney ayi thi...

Ayaan: mujh se ... I mean kyon?

Zoya: wo, subhe ( morning ) aap ne calls ker k maafi
Maangi thi, I felt relieved after that, so I wanted to
Thank u, koi aur hota to he would have tried to protect
Himself rather comforting me.

Ayaan: haan... Acha hoa k aap ayein...

Zoya: jeee???

Ayaan: I mean k acha hoa k aap, thank kernai ayein...
Mujhey acha laga...

Zoya: pata nahi loog kuch bhi kehtai hein, kuch bhi likhtey hein
Mein ne issi liye newspaper, or TV nahi dekha subhe se.
Ayaan: yea... It's good k aap me nahi dekha...

Zoya: can I on the tv now, actually ek bar dekhon tu k kya keh
Rahey hein ye loog...

She proceeded toward the remote and at once ayaan grabbed the remote before she could. She looked confused st him, while ayaan thinks if she saw TV she will come to know that I am not AAK.

Ayaan: ko...k...koi zaroorat nahi...

Zoya: jee??

Ayaan: I mean Phir se wo be matlab news dekhney ka kya
Faida, sirf gussa hi aye ga...

Zoya: actually... I think u r right...

Ayaan sighed.

Zoya: well then I think I should go now... I have to go to shoot
Too, so see you soon.

Ayaan: jee... Khuda hafiz.

Zoya: khuda hafiz.

When she was about to leave prassad comes in. And a peon with coffee. He places the coffee on the desk.

Prassad: sir aap ko aur kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho tu mujhey
Bateye ga, AAK me kha hai aap ka pora khyal
Rekhney ko.

At this statement zoya turns around and looks at ayaan, while Ayaan is scared what to answer but when she looks at prassad, ayaan signals prassad to leave.

Zoya: inhoon be aisa kyon kha k AAK ne kha hai aap ka khyal
Rakhney k liye?

Ayaan: wo...wo...( he gets an idea ) arey aisa kab kaha,
uss be kaha k AAK, yaani mein ne aap ka yaani,
zoya farouqi ka khayal rekhney ko kha hai...

Zoya: oh... Acha...

Ayaan: coffee?

Zoya: nahi bus mein already late ho gai hoon...

And then finally she leaves, while ayaan sighed relief.

Asad finishes his meeting and leaves for home.
In his room after changing he gets ayaan call

Ayaan: Asalamualikum bhaijaaan!!!

Asad: walikumasalam, kha baat hai boht Kush lag rahy ho?

Ayaan: haan bhaijaan, aur kyon na hon aaj hoor se mila hoon.

Asad : kub?

Ayaan: arey bhaijan aap itni jaldi bhol gaye, zoya, Zoya farouqi.

Asad: acha wo..

Ayaan: aap ko kesi lageen?

Asad remember seeing her and isn't able answer because he is lost in her innocent face.

Ayaan: bhaijaan??

Asad: h...han...

Ayaan: kya hoa... Kin k kyaloon mein gum the?

Asad: kya behooda guftugu ker rahy ho tum, aurtain izzat
Hoteen hein unn k barey mein aisey nahi baat
Kerni chaye.

Ayaan: acha...acha ab bas, koi lecture nahi, ok?

Asad paused for a moment and then said.

Asad: ayaan tumhy unhey sab such bata dena chahye...

Ayaan: kyon, hum ne thordi koi jhoot bola hai, wo kudh hi
Sab kuch sumujhti gaien

Asad: phir bhi, ayaan ye sahi nahi hai.

Ayaan: uff... Bhaijaan aap boht sochty hain jab waqt aye ga
Un ko khud pata chal Gaye ga.
Acha khuda hafiz Kal mulaqat ho gi.

Asad: khuda hafiz.

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Previous = CHAPTER-2
Next= CHAPTER-4


Edited by NnonaA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Super update but ayaar lie to her jhoot tho kabhi na kabhi pakada jata hai continue soon 😃
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: shailu123

Super update but ayaar lie to her jhoot tho kabhi na kabhi pakada jata hai continue soon 😃

Yea right jhoot tu ek na ek din pakada jata hai.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Hey! Read the chapters in a go nd they were conceptually fantastic nd amazingly written.
Waiting 4 ur nxt pm in my inbox
thanks 4 ths 1

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