Asya ss: its asli or not?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I know very well that the title i gave my ss is a little weird...actually very much weird but what to do...
this ss will actually not be that weird but still jootas ,chappals , tomatoes and smelly socks (if u have any😉😛) are always welcome

now, too much of weirds...here u go with my ss


Asya ss: its asli or not?


part 1


it was daytime when everybody gathered up for lunch asad was not at home

the lunch was quite

dilshad and najma were surprised because zoya didnt said a word

dilshad- zoya tabiyat theek hai na

zoya- jii phupi kyun

dilshad- asad ko miss kar rahi ho

zoya- nahi toh mei unhe miss kyun karungi

dilshad - coz jab asad ghar ayega i want to make an announcement

zoya- jee

zoya*kahin phupi mr khan or tanveer ke nikaah ki baat toh nahi kar rahi*

najma- lijiye bhaijaan bhi aagaye

asad- kyun tamatar kuchh khaas hai

najma- nahi...bhai jaan coffee?

asad- sure

ek minute asad mein chahti hun sab log hall mei aa jaye everybody was there except of tanveer

dilshad- mei chati hun saare yahan ho TANVEER TANVEER!!

tanveer-jee khala

dilshad toh mei yeh kehne chahti hun ki meine tumhaara nikah teh kar dia hai or ladki ke gharwaalon se baat bhi hogai hao

asad and zoya were completely shocked

dilshad- or uss ladki kaa naam hai

(dhak dhak beat in the background😳😆😆)

asad* zoya...zoya plz aami ..*

zoya*tanveer na ho allah plz tanveer na ho*


pheww!!! so finally ended this weird part 1 dont worry m not starting with that "weird ka gyan" again but still plz let me know the reviews .



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Asyalover2905 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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asya ss: its asli or not??


part 2


dilshad- n the girl i hve selected for asad is ...zoya

zoay and asad looked up with joy

asad- amii

dilshad- not happy no prob or bhi hai...

asad- nooo i support ur decision ammi

zoyas face lit up n dilshad can see the happiness in her eyes

after that she knew that she loved him

she went to asad

zoya- mr khan aapne jo bahar kaha...

asad- ms farooqui i didnt wanted to disapoint ami thats why m ready

zoya- sso this nikaah is real...i mean this nikaah its asli or not

asad- yes its is ms farooqui

zoya- but u dont even love me

asad- ohh that means u love me😉

zoya- i didnt said that

dilshad- arre zoya asad keh bhi doo ek dusre se

asad zoya- what to say

dilshad- that u love each other

zoya- no i dont

dilshad- inka kuchh karna padega

najma - right



sorry if this part sucks but m disappointed on myself coz m feeling sleepy🥱🥱

n taking things in a hurry
will post next part tomorrow
Edited by Asyalover2905 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Will update but tomorrow coz feeling sleepy😛🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very Good part..
But why in a hurry..?
Aaram se karo update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start dear
It's Asli not fake
Continue soon plz
Do pm me thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Asya ss : its asli or not?


part 3


najma- right

dilshad came up with a plan to make asad confess his feelings for zoya


at night when asad was back

zoya- mr khan mujhe kal kahin jaana hai toh please koi achhi si taxi book kardijiye

asad- taxi mei kyun mei...

zoya- allah miyan whats wrong with u mr khan ab kya mei itni door pedal jaungi

asad- mei pedal ki baat nahi kar raha mei chhod dunga aapko ...

zoya- no thanks mr khan aap cab book kar dijiye mei chali jaungi
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asad- theek hai jaisa aap theek samjhe

zoya went to her room

tanveer* zoya tum ghar se niklogi toh zaroor lekin waapis aa nahi paogi*

next morning

zoya- mr khan aapne cab book kardi thi na

asad- jee ms faroqui bahar intezaar kar rahi hai...mei fir bhi aapse keh raha hun ki mein aapko chhod dunga

zoya- no mr khan mei chali jaungi

dilshad to najma- yahi samei hai najma tum zoya ke peechhe jao or sahi samme pe asad ko call kardena

najma- jee...achha zoya mei bhi chalu aapke saath

zoya- waise no need mujhe bas shopping karni hai but...agar tum chahti ho toh chal sakti ho

asad- najma ...

zoya- please mr khan

najma and zoya went to the mall

najma was again n again checking her phone for the right time to call

najma called dilshad


sorry for not keeping my promise to post fast...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read all together!
Cute!
Update soon please!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Asya ss : its asli or not?


part 4


najma called dilshad

najma- hello ammi zoya ki abhi tak shopping nahi khatam hui

dilshad- najma tum zoya ko pura plan bata do aakhir voh khud bhi chahti hogi ki asad woh kahe jo voh sunna chati hai

najma - jee hold pe rahiye...zoya aami or meine ek plan banaya tha...d...o...m

zoya- najma yeh galat hai mei tumhaara saath nahi dungi

najma- ammi zoya nahi maan rahi mujhe plan b use karna parega lekin zoya ke saath mei voh nahi kar sakti

dilshad- tum chahti ho na asad zoya ko apne pyaar ke baare me bataye ?

najma- mei samajh gyi achha bye zoya ki shopping ho gyi

after 15 mins of journey in car najma sent the driver back n told zoya

najma- zoya driver mechanic bulane gya hai woh kya hai na gaadi kharab ho gyi hai

zoya- ok najma lekin humei ghar toh pahuchna he parega nahi toh jahapana hum, don ko chunva denge...achha paani paas karna

najma mixed something in water n gave to zoya

after drinking zoya was fast n deep asleep

najma- sorry zoya but i had to do this

wen najam got out of car to call his bhai jaan a man woho was hired by tanveer tried to wake her up so that he can make tanveer hear her scream

man- yeh toh pehle he behosh hai kya karoon

tanveer- pada rehendo whai pe koi na loi gadi maarke chali jayegi

man noticed najma n ran from the spot

najma (faking cry)- bhi jaan jaldi yahha aa jayiye zoya ko pata nahi kya hogya hai uth nahi rahi na he hil rahi hai plz bhaijaan

with this she got scared and cut the call

asad - z...zoyaaa

asad was driving like a mad man n then he reached where the car was parked

asad- najma zo...zoya kahaan hai

najma- car ...mei

najma took her phone out and started to record the scene

asad went inside the taxi n sat near zoya

asad took her hand

asad- zoya plz utho ky hua hai please zoya please

he tried to shake her

asad- zoyaaa get up please achha ...aap kya sunna chahti thi yahi ki naa yeh ring its asli or not haiana...haan zoya its asli dammit yes i mean it please zoya utho chilaao na zoya plase zoya i love you

with this she flinched her eyes stretched a little bit



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Again a nice part...
A clifflanger...at the end...
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read all part in one go
Very nice
Edited by Sanjhari - 10 years ago

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