Thread II, Asya FF: the runaway bride, Epilogue,(LAST) 15-11-15 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
Love the update
It was a lesson learnt well for asad
But he cheated he should have told her
But the spa threat was a nice gift for her
Love how he shut her up and boy did they missed each other
A great lesson for men to learn
Women r gifts from God
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was a lovely update
Asad challenged & he caught in his words when Zoya applied those on him. Liked their scenes. Finally they finished their prank. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
This was such a cute chapter
Asad and zoya there's no match for them
Really zoya did a great thing by making him realize that childbearing is just not a game
Continue soon...excited for the baby to come
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow super duper update dear
Poor Asad bhas gaya

It was so funny

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Rada...
Well If this is your Happy Part...I wonder How you will write the happiest part..
Matlab...in this Update their were very close moments where if the things were not controlled and someone would not have mellow down...things could have gone worse...but alas...the update was very good...
Like Asad i also would have said the same thing to my wife and it would have been a GOOD NATURED advice only...having said this What Zoya did with Asad...as a challenge and what Asad did for Zoya..minus the part from the spa thing...was Unique...in its own way...and i as a person and a Man myself wouldn't have done this...but Asad accepted it...and did this for his wife...but i think first it was about his EGO...then after 2 yaa 3 days when he got habituated to this...he ( and MYSELF ) finally accepted this is a TOUGHEST thing to handle..and no amount of preperation...could avoid any of the bearings during this time.
Rest AsYa's scene with Dillu was soo funny and good.
Last mein Spa thing ke time i felt...it was stretched to far a little by Zoya...but she can be excused as it may be her HORMONES at play.
I actually learnt a few things from this part...but i actually have to realise its depth...that i guess when my time comes i will do.
So In a Way THANK YOU for this part..
Loved it.
Continue soon with the NEXT PART SOON.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Rada...
Well If this is your Happy Part...I wonder How you will write the happiest part..
Matlab...in this Update their were very close moments where if the things were not controlled and someone would not have mellow down...things could have gone worse...but alas...the update was very good...
Like Asad i also would have said the same thing to my wife and it would have been a GOOD NATURED advice only...having said this What Zoya did with Asad...as a challenge and what Asad did for Zoya..minus the part from the spa thing...was Unique...in its own way...and i as a person and a Man myself wouldn't have done this...but Asad accepted it...and did this for his wife...but i think first it was about his EGO...then after 2 yaa 3 days when he got habituated to this...he ( and MYSELF ) finally accepted this is a TOUGHEST thing to handle..and no amount of preperation...could avoid any of the bearings during this time.
Rest AsYa's scene with Dillu was soo funny and good.
Last mein Spa thing ke time i felt...it was stretched to far a little by Zoya...but she can be excused as it may be her HORMONES at play.
I actually learnt a few things from this part...but i actually have to realise its depth...that i guess when my time comes i will do.
So In a Way THANK YOU for this part..
Loved it.
Continue soon with the NEXT PART SOON.



You can't imagine how it was enjoyable to have a man's opinion about this chapter. And I am so happy to read your comment.
I agree with many points that you mention above, most (I can even say all) wouldn't accept this kind of challenge, for many reason 😃 that I guess i don't need to mention here. This is what it's beautiful about writting, you can imagine thing that might not happen in real life 😆. I must admit if I was a man, I wouldn't accept this challenge too.
you know, I spoke a lot with many pregnant women and all the points that I mentioned in the chapter were their own experience: how it was difficult at the end to carry such a heavy weight 24h and the small thing became greater with the passing day and the increasing weight.
@bold so true
There is also other small point but I will let you discover this when it's going to be your turn 😉.
Men will always give innocent advices but many of those advices which can be said nicely, can turn to be a world war for exhauted and tired pregnant, not only hormones were involved. Men will always try to find and to handle the situation while women will want more to share at the beginning then to solve the situation.
This chapter was really dedicated to men who wanted to know subtle thing about pregnancy and I am happy that you learn some of them in this chapter, you can't imagine how your comment make me smile. and i am sure that your wife will be lucky to have a man like you, already prepared mentally to support he
r 😃.
thanks a lot Mayur
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Wow super duper update dear

Poor Asad bhas gaya

It was so funny

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm



thanks a lot Asseelah 😃
Asad went through pregnancy himself 😆
I will try soon in sha Allah
take care sis
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

This was such a cute chapter

Asad and zoya there's no match for them
Really zoya did a great thing by making him realize that childbearing is just not a game
Continue soon...excited for the baby to come



Thank U so much 😃
This is what I wanted to show how some men see pregnancy while the true was different,
the quotes of this chapter is : if you didn't go through the situation, you can't judge.
I hope to update soon and of course, it will be about the baby to come this time 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

That was a lovely update
Asad challenged & he caught in his words when Zoya applied those on him. Liked their scenes. Finally they finished their prank. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm



Thank u so much dear 😃
In the first thread, they went throught hard time, so it was time for them to enjoy now.
And i am happy to give some cute scene between them 😆.
both of them knew how it was ridiculous but they can't live without masala in their life.
I hope to update soon and it will be the last chapter 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Love the update

It was a lesson learnt well for asad
But he cheated he should have told her
But the spa threat was a nice gift for her
Love how he shut her up and boy did they missed each other
A great lesson for men to learn
Women r gifts from God
Continue soon



He didn't want to lose the challenge and his face in front of her, and the spa was to soothe her, if he was caught at the end.
And of course, Asad knows how to close her mouth and to calm her 😉
@bold: this is exactly, why i write this chapter, to show how the hardest and the hidden part of pregnancy, even if it still other but to private to expose them here. Only mother who carry babies can talk about.
thank you so much for your comment because you understand perfectly the message that I wanted to share.
😃

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