New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15 - Page 59

Originally posted by: shakethebiscuit

just read first chapter...n its just wow..

a new reader 😃
welcome to you dear and I am happy that you like the first chapter
hope to read you soon for the rest
take care

From where do you get this extraordinary brilliant mind blowing , incredibly awesome concepts...seriously...

Honestly I have nothing to say...I mean I don't have words to describe what I am feeling now...

I won't be able to write all the things I liked coz I loved each damn thing in the entire update...


Exceptionally beautiful... Becoming your fan day by day...SPEECHLESS...

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

From where do you get this extraordinary brilliant mind blowing , incredibly awesome concepts...seriously...

Honestly I have nothing to say...I mean I don't have words to describe what I am feeling now...

I won't be able to write all the things I liked coz I loved each damn thing in the entire update...


Exceptionally beautiful... Becoming your fan day by day...SPEECHLESS...

Thank you so much sweetheart, i don't know what to say 😳

It always your comment who make me speechless and as always , I can't write anything 😆

it's so good to have you here with all my stories,and you are one of my loyal reader who followed me from the begining so thank you for believing in me. I am blessed to have you

Love u and take care 🤗

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

thanks a lot
Yes, finally Asad let out all this pain that he caged for years and he was free
It was important to show that where everything start, shoulb the point where everything should stop.
You will see how Asad will save Zoya from this and his confession too
It still a last part between Zed and Leo and after it will be about asad and zoya.

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Hello Mayur
Thnaks a lot, it was really a nice and happy wedding, all my close family was there and we were reunite after so long, it was so emotional 😭 for me.
You can't imagine how your comment makes me happy, I wanted to share many thing in this chapter and I don't know what readers felt about, I guess it will depend on their life and feelings. But I wanted to talk about redemption and second chance in life, how your choice can change you and changed other forever, sometimes with words, sometimes with action. We are not inside the other heart but we have to be careful, we can say innocently thing that can change the other forever.
And it's true, I have to admit that growing up is the best thing that happened to me, even if I am not totally mature most of the time 😆, but it help to look from far to the past.
you describe perfectly the situation and I even was surprised when i read you, and realized the parrallele between the situation ( @bold, i didn't see this image but it's so true, so thank you for this👏). For the surgery, it was not Zoya's fault, it was destiny, we have no control of other life and choice.
@bold blue, so true again, if you can't change anything, move on, it's the first step for changing and finding peace in your life. The past belongs to you but the present and future still needs to be written, so it had to be another chance to live. As I read once, there is not a last chance in life but just a second chance.
thanks a lot Mayur for you comment, love u my dearest friend 🤗

Hello Again Rada..
So i was late in wishing...khair Again HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS...To Your Family..including You.. 😆
You know what Rada...i agree with you about what all you said on second chances and all... but just clarify me the significance of that dialogue which Zoya told in this update when the docs were telling her about asking Mr.Aron for His daughter's body parts...she said something like..
' For some other person to live...why is it that someone has to die..'..
This may not be the right dialogue...but i got this meaning only from it..
It is true we should give second chances...but some cases don't even leave the same person whom they destroyed...to have another chance from them...because in this story after that dreadful incident both Asad and Zoya became some another personality...is that chance really have that worth.?
And yes i know Zoya was not responsible for that girl's death...but what i told you that both when she was Zed...Leo held her responsible..and here Mr.Aron held Zoya responsible...even god need a face to destroy somebody's life...even though he is god..right..
I don't know what am I saying...but this chapt had soo many things to have debates on and on and onnn...
Till now I believe this is your toughest written work...
And about the moving on thing...
my words look good in letters only...but it is difficult in real life to move on...sometimes..
Take Care.

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Again Rada..
So i was late in wishing...khair Again HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS...To Your Family..including You.. 😆
You know what Rada...i agree with you about what all you said on second chances and all... but just clarify me the significance of that dialogue which Zoya told in this update when the docs were telling her about asking Mr.Aron for His daughter's body parts...she said something like..
' For some other person to live...why is it that someone has to die..'..
This may not be the right dialogue...but i got this meaning only from it..
It is true we should give second chances...but some cases don't even leave the same person whom they destroyed...to have another chance from them...because in this story after that dreadful incident both Asad and Zoya became some another personality...is that chance really have that worth.?
And yes i know Zoya was not responsible for that girl's death...but what i told you that both when she was Zed...Leo held her responsible..and here Mr.Aron held Zoya responsible...even god need a face to destroy somebody's life...even though he is god..right..
I don't know what am I saying...but this chapt had soo many things to have debates on and on and onnn...
Till now I believe this is your toughest written work...
And about the moving on thing...
my words look good in letters only...but it is difficult in real life to move on...sometimes..
Take Care.

So to clarify your question, i am working with clinicians and scientist since so long, and we always discuss about giving organs and to be donors. All of my friends put their name in the list of organs donors, so if something happened to them, their organs can be used to save other patients. that why I said, to save someone, you have to take organs from dead body.
The delicate thing about it's that you have to take some organs (heart, kidney, liver, lung, skin, eyes etc...) as soon as possible, so the body was still on the surgery table. This is in general concerning person who died in car accident.
Asking family about this when they has just lost the person that they loved, it was disturbing even if it's noble. And this question is a disturbing me those days.

it is the toughest one and after finishing this one, i will write on something light, soft romance or something funny, i still don't know. This story asked a lot from me in term of thinking and emotion.

Another emotion pack update
Liked the way u connected past & present. Akram & asad convo was nice. He was free man now. All the heaviness left. Zoya lost her patient during surgery. Her life in danger but her Leo is there for her so she was not worried. Waiting for next update to see how asad handled the situation. Thanks for pm

Good update
This story is a little confusing
But I quite like it
Continue soon

unresd on pg 81

Originally posted by: jas91

unresd on pg 81

Rada when u get time read this story its awesome

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4472497/asya-ff-the-worst-kind-of-betrayal-ch-18-last-updated-on-pg-75?pn=8

I will thank you 😃