New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

I loved it rada.

Awesome start.

Past n present mingled so well.

The patient is Asad I guess n he recognized his Zed but she dint it seems.

Obviously they have a back story.

Looking forward to it.

The surgery was also well described.

Since u have started a new one,does that mean that gift of life is coming to an end?

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Interesting start. ...though a bit confusing.. .but would like to read more

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Continue soon and do pm me

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Just read...want to read more

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Interesting start

Ye Dil Maange More

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roshni_A

@roshni_A

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Wow..that is superb..i loved it...ur writing is intriguing..pls updt soon n put me to ur pm list..

tc..

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
I loved it rada.
Awesome start.
Past n present mingled so well.
The patient is Asad I guess n he recognized his Zed but she dint it seems.
Obviously they have a back story.
Looking forward to it.

The surgery was also well described.

Since u have started a new one,does that mean that gift of life is coming to an end?

yes dear, soon the gift from life will finish, maybe two chapter more and after khatam 😭

that's why I started a new story but today, I will try to write the runaway bride, I keep it on hold for long time. I wasn't inspired for an end.