*New* AsYa OS : Just You!

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Hello everyone!! I am here with a new one shot on AsYa again. Here song is there but to your luck no choreography. The song sequence is the complete story and present of AsYa. Hope you all like it! This is one is for my rasmalai[ImmortalLove]! Love you meri Punjabi kudi!

Happy reading!

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" oho hussain chacha please make it fast! Sab guest ate hi honge", she said while checking all the preparations. She ran here and there, ordering everyone around. She cannot let anything incomplete. She wanted it all to be perfect, after all it was the wedding anniversary of her parents, Mr. Rashid Ahmed Khan and Mrs. Dilshad Ahmed Khan. This running responsible lady was none other than the daughter of the house, Najma Ahmed Khan. The youngest, responsible, enthusiastic, caring, loving, sweet and gorgeous girl. She kept running here and there arranging everything. She saw her elder brother, Ayaan Ahmed Khan descending down wearing his watch. She shook her head, ran to him and pulled him to the hall and signaled him to check the arrangements. He left an angry sigh and slightly slapped her head. she winced and hit him on the arm. She glared and walked away to the catering part, leaving Ayaan with the responsibilities. This was none other than the naughty, responsible, flamboyant, loving, caring and handsome, Ayaan Ahmed Khan, the second son of the house. Checking everything he sashayed towards Najma. He asked for the eldest of all, Asad Ahmed Khan. She smiled at him while he understood and both made their way towards Asad's room. They opened the room to find their brother standing near the bed, all dressed up with an earring in his hand and a smile dancing on his lips.

He gazed at the earring. A sudden flash came in front of his eyes displaying a beautiful girl eating some street side food and talking animatedly while the same earring dancing in her ear, this was the first time he saw her, and that day she left her earring which he picked up. Several images flashed in front of him, her dancing in rain, helping an old lady, falling and him catching her, her beautiful orbs and the dazzling smile she gave him turning back with a frown. He felt someone staring him. He looked towards the door, Najma and Ayaan smiling at him teasingly. He quickly fumbling placed the earring back in his drawer and adjusted his coat and tie. This was none other than Asad Ahmed Khan the eldest son of the Khans. He was responsible, stern and cool at the same time, a lovely brother and a caring son. He smiled at them who were not able to control themselves and burst out laughing. He looked here and there embarrassed and massaged his temples. He went towards them while they kept their fingers on their lips and started laughing. He went out upset with them. they followed and apologized to him.

Najma : acha bhai, what about the gift?

Asad : uh ya it will be there here in few minutes, don't worry! And other things, what wbout the oher arrangements?

Ayaan : its done bhai! Lo mumma papa agaye!

They saw the couple of the day descending down together. All the three smiled at them. they were indeed one perfect couple. They walked forward and wished their parents and hugged them. They all smiled and chatted when Dilshad remembered something.

Dilshad : are bacho! Listen, you remember I always mention about Zeenat aunty and Anwar uncle?

Najma : ha mumma! Kyu kya hua?

Rashid : actually we met them few days aback, and aj vo yaha ane wale hai?

Najma : really? Wow! Finally hum unse aur sabse mil sakenge! Itna suna hai unke bare me...

Dilshad : ha madam! Jante ho tum sab aur unke bache bahut close the ek doosre ke!

Ayaan : really mumma? Mujhe to kuch yad nahi.

Asad : kese yaad hoga? Mujhe tak yad nahi! Hosakta hai...

Dilshad : offo Asad tum excited nahi ho?

Asad : hu mumma, but you know I don't remember anything so..

Dilshad : of course, tum sab itne chote the to fir kese yad hoga?

They kept talking for some more time and looked after the guests that arrived.

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The party was in full swing. Asad, Ayaan and Najma walked forward to present the gift. As they gave them the gift Rashid and Dilshad smiled.

Dilshad : thank you so much baccho!! Ye bahut khoobsurat hai. Par hume to kuch aur chahie tha...

Asad : kya mumma?

Rashid : ek esa gift jo iss ghar ke liye ho, ek pyarri si, bahu...

Asad : papa!! Phirse nahi?

Dilshad : ha rashid! Phir se nahi...par Asad kamse kam us earring ke owner ka nam to pata karlete!

Asad gave a confused glance and then understood the hidden meaning behind her words. He looked towards Ayaan and Najma and glared them. Everyone started laughing while he embarrassed walked ahead. Everyone pulled him back. He slapped Ayaan's head. Ayaan opened his mouth wide.

Ayaan : bahut hogaya bhaijaan! Now see what I am going to do!

Ayaan walked in the center and announced something shocking Asad to the core.

Ayaan : hello ladies and gentleman. Ap sabka bahut bahut shukria humari hushiyo me sharikh hone ke liye. Jese ki aaj itni khushi ka mauka hai o would like my elder brother to sing something! Watsay?

Asad's eyes got wide and he stared walking away when Ayaan held him, smiring at him while Asad glared at Ayaan. Everyone started hooting. Asad used to sing very nice and that is what audience wanted. Dilshad and Rashid also encouraged him. Suddenly he saw the earring in his eyes. He turned to see Najma holding it. She took his hand and placed in it.

Najma : ye lo, apni inspiration!

Asad looked at Najma who smiled. He sashayed his gaze down towards the earring. He smiled and handed his blazer to Najma who smiled at him. Loosening his tie he sat with his guitar.

Music:

He closed his eyes and started playing some tune on his instrument. Slowly all the guest started gathering around him. He closed his eyes remembering her face while talking, how she turned to him and smiled with a frown, dancing in the rain, helping the old lady, her eyes when he felt into his arms. his eyes snapped open and a smile danced on his lips. He started playing it more happily and more energetically.

Thodi thodi katthai si uski aankhein
Thodi surme bhari..

He closed his eyes and remembered the hazel orbs. He remembered how she tripped and he was standing there so he caught and the eye lock that followed.

Hmm... thodi-thodi katthai si uski aankhein
Thodi surme bhari..


there on the other side she lifted her hazel eyes and looked into the mirror peeking through her beautiful eyelashes. There he continued singing in his melodious voice.


Uske honthon pe muskurayein
Haaye duniya meri

He smiled remembering her smile while on the other side she gave a beautiful smile looking at herself in the mirror.


Ho.. chakhna bhi chaahun
Rakhna bhi chaahun

He opened his eyes and spoke to the audience on the left side while she wore the earring in the left ear first. He again spoke to the audience at right and she again her earring danced on the right side.


Sabse chhupake usey.. haaye
Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba

Mujhe bas ik jhalak toh dikha
Ho.. ho!
Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Chaahe badle mein le le tu jaan
Woh hu wo...

She smiled at herself and got up and looked at herself completely. He again closed his eyes and looked upwards asking the almighty to fulfil his wish. He kept playing the guitar and again opened his eyes and smiled looking at the floor .

Music:

She looked at herself and smiled. The saree was certainly suiting her. She bitted her tongue and ran as her mother called. She ran down the stairs. Her parents and sister looked awe-struck at her. She indeed looked pretty as an angel. They all smiled and made their way towards the car.

Here he remembered how second time saw her dancing in the rain in some garden when he was running to save himself from the rain. Then he saw her once helping the old lady to cross amidst the traffic. Then he remembered how he caught her from falling and later on she thanked him but as she walked forward she did glanced at him with a frown and smile and then walked away. He opened his eyes and saw the same pair of eyes. She was there in a pretty red gown. He started walking towards her. He kept his one arm on his waist and second locked with her fingers. They swayed to the music but as he twirled her , she kept twirling and went out of sight.


Yaaron main kaise kahoon, kya hua?
Hosh hai ab kahin hai kahin yeh hawaa

He felt someone patting his shoulder. He saw Ayaan raising his brow and understood it was his hallucination. He sang looking at Ayaan and Najma, who were grinning at him, happy for their brother.


Phirta hoon khud ko bhulaaye huve
Yaad meri mujhe toh dila do zaraa

He stood and walked towards his parents and others while playing his guitar. He sang shrugging his shoulder and kept his head on Dilshad's shoulder who smiled happily.


Bematlab sa, jeeta raha tha
Ab mill gayi hai wajah.. haay

He turned back towards the audience and sang looking at them facing the door but turned as he sang the other line. He closed his eyes again remembering.

Music :

He suddenly felt a different sensation. He opened his eyes and frowned as the organ inside his chest was beating as fast as a bullet train. While on the other side as she stepped in the beautiful and elegant house she felt her heart running in marathon. She was confused with the sudden change. She kept her hand near her heart. She smiled and dismissed that something strange feeling. He on the other side turned towards the door and was about to glance when his mother came in between. He tried to peek through his mother but all in vain when suddenly he caught a pair of hazel orbs for a nano second. But again the face was hidden. He turned towards the other side thinking one of his imagination. While she on the other side was about to peek through the crowd when her dilshad aunty came in between. She greeted them and went scrolled inside with everyone.

Yun toh ye dil, haan phisalta nahi
Moam ki battiyon pe pighalta nahi

Gaining more energy only from her mere thought he started singing more energetically. He turned towards other side and removed the earring from his pocket and glanced towards it smiling. He pulled his parents to the center to dance.


Naina woh hai na
Haan sitaarein hain do
Chaand din mein kabhi bhi nikalta nahi

He suddenly caught the same pair of eyes and sang but thinking his hallucination he looked away chiding himself for his imaginations while his parents danced a little and moved from the center.


dhalna bhi chaahun, bujhna bhi chaahun
Main unn charaagon tale.. haaye

he continued singing and she followed everyone through crowd. She intently looked at Asad not properly due to the crowd but admiring his voice. She smiled thinking the person who is lucky to have this song.

Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Mujhe bas ik jhalak toh dikha
Ho.. ho!
Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Chaahe badle mein le le tu jaan

Music :

She finally stood in front. But as she stood he turned his back. He continued to sing looking at the other side just remembering the queen of his heart. She smiled at it. Slowly the everyone started clapping for everyone. He continuously sang while everyone cheered. He turned but simultaneously she also turned as someone called her. He smiled at the audience and continued the magic of his fingers on the instrument. He went towards his family and his siblings dragged everyone else. He kept his guitar and clapped for all the ones who danced in their happiness. Everyone started dancing, he walked a little back. As he continuously walked back, he felt someone behind her but before he could think they both stumbled but Asad caught the person in time, stabling himself. On the other hand, she was so busy seeing everyone that she didn't saw Asad walking back and stumbled but he just caught her on time.

He was shocked to see her. It means all the while he wasn't hallucinating. She was actually here. His heart rejoiced at the feeling. His heart started dancing, he couldn't get more happier. A moment later she opened her eyes and looked at him. She smiled and straightened herself.

Girl : thank you!

She smiled and walked when she felt a tug at her pallu. She turned to see it stuck in Asad's watch. She moved towards it as Asad brought his hand up. She got busied in removing the pallu while he got busied in seeing her a second later she smiled when it got removed. She smiled and moved ahead. She again turned back the same way she did before, smiling with a frown and then turned and walked.

He grinned at her. He felt like jumping and dancing but he controlled himself and took his blazer and wore it. He heard his mother calling him and went there. As he settled his cufflinks and glanced up and saw his lady love standing with few other people.

Dilshad : Asad, Ayaan, Najma...ye lo, ye hai tumhari Zeenat aunty aur Anwar uncle and ye dono unki betiya, Humera aur ye Zoya..

Asad looked up in shock. She was the one his mother used to talk often and he didn't took it much serious. He used smile and laugh at the memories and enjoyed even but was just till that. Ayaan and Najma greeted them happily and they replied the same way.

Asad : hello uncle, hello aunty. Ammi aur abbu kafi batein batate hai. Finally meeting you all nice feeling. Humsab kafi chote the to remember nothing special.

Anwar : hello beta! Of course, sab itne chotte jo the! Tum kitne chotte the, I still cant believe you have grown up so much. Nice! Kafi suna hai tumhare bare me!

Zeenat : ha and even for Najma and Ayaan. Very happy to see you all again. Itne saal hogaye , sachme bahut acha lag raha hai!

Dilshad : sach me Zeenat. Kitne chote the ye bache. Humera aur Najma to bahut hi chotte the. Sab kitne bade hogaye hai..mashallah Humera aur Zoya kitni khoobsurat hogayi hai. Mujhe aaj bhi yad hai kese ye sab milkar khela karte the. Zoya tabhi bhi vee hi thi aur aaj bhi vesi hi hai!

Zoya : offo! Sab itne senti kyu ho rahe hai! Chalo chalo enjoy na, we have met after sooo long.

Everyone smiled at her. Anwar, Zeenat, Dilshad and Rashid left from there. All the children smiled and engaged themselves in something or the other. Ayaan, Humera and Najma chatteing went from there leaving Asad and Zoya behind.

Zoya : umm ap vo bahut acha gate hai, you, you really sing too good.

Asad : thanks! Aur ap apne bare mei kuch bataiye.

They engaged themselves in some conversation about their lives. Talking here and there a while later all the other three joined them

Zoya : kitna time hogaya humsabko mile hue!

Asad : ha sachme but I know somewhat. Mumma and papa used to talk about you people. I heard you and Ayaan used to call each other mona and rabert, Humera and Najma were quiet young...

As he spoke Ayaan and Najma narrowed their eyes thinking since when was he interested in these things. Asad saw this and glared them. still not able to satistfie them he slowly removed the earring a little and gestured towards it and then signaled towards Zoya. Ayaan and Najma gasped at the realization. Najma squeeled at it and was about to say bhabhi' when Ayaan kept his palm over her face and dragged her towards the other end.

Zoya and humera smiled at Asad.

Zoya : mujhe esa lagta hai ki hum pehle bhi mile hai!

Asad : ha mile hai na bachpan me...

Zoya : nahi, abhi! Ek second..yad aya...you saved me from falling that day right?

Asad smiled confirming her doubt. She also smiled back thanking him. They were all called for cake cutting. . Everyone clapped and cheered for the couple that was cutting the cake. In the centre was Dilshad and Rashid and at the left side were Ayaan, Humera , Anwar and Zeenat and on the right there was Najma , Asad and Zoya. As the photographer took the pic it was picture perfect.

Dinner was done with lots of chit chat. Slowly guests started departing. As the Farooqui's turn came everyone turned gloomy.

Asad : offo to kya hua, ab to Zoya..mera matlab hai, Zoya, Humera, uncle and aunty yahi hai na to phir kya tension? We will meet.

Everyone smiled at him but only Ayaan and Najma knew the meaning behind it. As Zoya moved forward she felt a tug at pallu. She turned to see Asad. She chuckled that again the pallu got stuck in watch. But as she looked down, she saw Asad holding it. He moved towards her and left the pallu. She looked with a question towards him.

Asad : kya tum mujhse dosti karogi?

Zoya smiled and frowned. Allahmiya whats wrong with him? Aren't we friends. But she smiled and played along.

Zoya : dekhungi, sochungi, kal parso bataungi! Okay?

She chuckled and waved him bye. He smiled and rubbing the back of his head. he waved them bye and his parents turned towards him asking everything...

There started a new beginning , a new chapter...

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So how was it? Hope it wasn't too bad! Please do leave your reviews.

love,

Riddhi

(always smile and just be yourself, certainly suits you)

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Cute, sweet & beautiful story
Want part 2
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It was so lovely!!!!! I loved it!!!! So beautiful !!!!! Asad Miyan
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Wonderful O.S Riddhi... 👏
Loved it... 😃
Par isme sirf Asad ka POV tha...Zoya ko toh woh yaad bhi nahi tha... 😕
Good job...⭐️
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So love os asad is so cute love it
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That was really sweet babe. Thnks for the pm
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Oye yeh OS mere liye.. WOW :)
Thanks doll
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its awesome
asya were so different but same also
both families were lovely
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plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Awesome Os...👏

Just love it...😊

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