SAHIL SS-TEST OF LOVE[part1-pg2]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi,guys.its my 1st attempt.so ignore mistakes.
ths stry after sanam's accident,2months later.in ths stry misbah is a positive charectr.misbah-shaad r best frnds 4m childhood.shaad told jannat abt her memory loss,his mission SK(u cn imagine SK whoever u wnt) & help her 2 sort out thngs,find her family.shaad get 2 knwt jannat is 4m india.shaad-jannat is a couple only 4 socity,shaad's family,bt shaad-misbah-jannat knw the real truth.misbah will cm IM 2 find her real family,relate 2 thm.shaad-jannat also cm with her.

PROLOGUE-
Sr Nawab-Nazia,ahil kaha hai?use kya pata hai misbah ane wali ha?
Nazia-ji abbu,bhaijan ko pata ha.wo pichle 3din se mumbai me ha,aj wapas ajayenge.
Shazia is also thr in4nt her lappy.
shazia-why r u guys so xcitd?bcz of misbah!abbu,kya aap vul gaye ha wo asal me kon hai,kiski beti ha?
Ahil-wo uss aurat ki beti ha iska matlab ye nehi ki wo waise hogi.tumlog vul rahe ho rehan uss aurat kahi beta tha.ahil entr in IM.shazia rolled her eyes.
Sr Nawab-ahil,misbah ke sath aftab sahab ka beta major shaad aur shaad ki biwi jannat vi arahe ha.ahil jst nodded.
Nawab-tum ghar me to rahoge na?pichle 2mahino se pata nehi kitne din tum ghar pe the,har waqt office-business.jo time milta vi ha pata nehi kaha kaha kis kis jagah pe sanam ko dhundte rehete ho,ghar me ate vi ho to har waqt apne kamre me rehte ho,kisise baat nehi karte.aisa kab tak chalega?
Ahil-i m tired,abbu.main apne room me jata hu.ahil went 2 his room.in his room at 1st he stand in4nt sanam's big wall photo & said-'hi,swtheart,kaise ho?miss kia,i also missed u.tumhe pata ha misbah arahi ha,use pata chala ki wo kon ha,isiliye ekbar humlogo se milne arahi ha.mujhe samajh nehi araha ki main kaise uske samne matlab tum to jante ho na.btw,tumhe pata ha mujhe city hospital se dr.Verma ka phn aya tha.unhone kaha Seher improve kar rahi ha,bohot jald wo coma se bahar ajaigi.seher apna palak jhapkake,hath hilake respond kar rahi ha.he kissed sanam's pic & said ab main fresh ho jata hu,mujhe hospital vi jana ha seher se milne'.
Prcp-ahil visit hospital 2 meet seher.misbah ntr IM.shaad-jannat go 2 indian army office 2 discuss SK's case.

Gv me ur feedbks.i will continue if u guys njy ths stry.should i continue?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is such an interesting read!!! cannot wait to read your story...

I'm so glad that Sanam in your story knows Shaad is not her real husband! thank yu thank yu thank yu!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good start dear! I like that Jannat/Shaad/Misbah are a team and they have told Sanam the truth.
Glad you took a positive route. Awww Aahil talking to Sanam's picture hopefully he'll come face to face with Jannat/Sanam.😊

Yes, you should continue.👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great plot! Loved the story! Please continue soon and pm me if possible!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i loved it, glad misbah is positive character here, waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE:-thnks guys for liking ths.i thought no one will like it.even i was thinking not to continue it.bt thnks 2 gv me the confidence to continue it.
so about the story i thought to change the stry a bit...koi negative charector nehi hoga to kahani me twist kaise ayega...at 1st i said thr will b no sanam2,bt i thnk to bring her bk for twist...dnt worry thr will b no kala jadu bt sanam2 will definately cm bk...as of now according to story sanam2 is in jail for helping tanvir with her misdeeds...she will make her re entry after sometime...
will update after tuesday...as being a bangali we hv a event 'jamai sasthi',so i m busy with guests,helping elders someway 2 prepare of ths event & as i said thought to close it,so i didnt even write anythng..so need some time...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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take your time but plzzz continue this story :) waiting for next chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part-1

at hospital in seher's room:

ahil sat on chair beside bed.'i m sorry seher.main ab tak sanam ko nehi dhund pai,par main use dhund k rahunga,ye wada ha mera tumse,u knw tht i lv her,seher jst blinked her eyelashes.main avi ati hu dr. se baat karke' ahil said.

shaad nd jannat reached army office.thy told everythng regarding sk.army officer offer thm a guest house for thm & shaad jannat agreed.after cming out from thr jannat said tht thy didnt info ibrahim's tht thy r staying army guest house.misbah was at IM doorstep whn she got msg 4m shaad tht thy r staying army guest house,,will visit ibrahim's next day.ahil returnd 4m hospital,whn he saw someone at doorstep.he excused & misbah turned bk ahil shocked.he understand who is she nd rememberd all tanvir's misdeeds,his eyes bcm moist.

misbah;ahil bhaijan,&she jst hugged him.ahil stiffend,didnt hug her bk.whn misbah realize tht she bked away & said 'sorry...woh...main bas..i hope u dnt mind tht i called u bhaijaan'.

ahil;'ahil,i prefer only ahil,chalie andar chalia'.thy enter IM.ahil called everyone,all were shckd seeing misbah.misba said salaam too everyone.all were sitted awkardly whn nawab askd 'misbah,whr is shaad nd jannat".misbah:'thy r staying at army guest house 4 sometime,shaad said thy will visit tomorrow.nawab:ok beta,u tk rest,latif show u ur room.

same day afternoon:

ahil return bk 4m office,freshn up nd went dargah...same time jannat also went thr with shaad.at men's section ahil was preying "ya allah!mujhe meri zindagi wapas dila de,meri zindagi to andhere mein tha,sanam ne usme ujala bhar dia,mujhe meri khamiyon ke sath apnaya aur jab maine usko uski khusiya dena chaha tune use chin lia,usne hamesha teri ibadat kia ha,main janta hu wo jaha vi ha khush nehi ha,mujhe meri sanam se mila de maula,tune hamesha hamare mohabbat ka sath dia ha,aj bhi sath de de.hamari mohabbat qubul kar,mujhe meri sanam wapas kar de".other side jannat preying 'ya allah!tu to bhatke hue ko rasta dikhata ha,to mujhe vi dikha de,meri yadeein mere paas nehi ha,lekin mere dil me ek ehsaas ha jo harwaqt ye jehta ha ki koi mere intezaar kar raha ha.meri tarha koi aur bhi apna rasta bhul chuka ha,wo mera intezar kar raha ha maula,meri madat kar meri maula,mujhe meri manzil meri mohabbat tak pohocha de".unknwn to thm both came outside 4m dargah.shaad went to tk a phn call...

ahil kept walking on road,whn he saw a small child fall down.he was going to the child,bt he jst froze wht he saw...thr his sanam helping the child,he dnt knw wht to do...he didnt realize tht he started crying & smiling at the same time,he jst staring at 'his sanam'.he started to walk towards her bt wht he saw thn,he didnt expect tht..

the kid's mother thnked her.shaad cm thr,hug sanam,hold her & ask her if she is okey,she jst nodded.ahil fisted his hand & going near thm whn he heard shaad said'jannat,mujhe kaam ke lia bahar jana hoga,aur main tumhe akela nehi chor sakta.main tumhe IM leke jata hu,tum misbah k sath waha reh jana thik ha,main jaldi wapas ane ki koshish jarunga"...

ahil hear everythng & thought:'nehi meri biwi sanam kisi aur ki biwi jannat kaise ho sakti ha,mujhe janna hoga,mera hare ek sanse,meri dharkan meri har ek wajood cheekh cheekh ke yeh keh rahi ha ki ye meri sanam ha,main jaanke rahunga ki meri sanam jannat kaise bani"...

at IM:-

all were waiting for shaad nd jannat as misba said thm tht shaad hd work,so he leave jannat here.hearing door bell latif open the door,&everyone shcked,thr shaad nd jannat enter IM.misba:'ye hai shaad mera dost,aur ye uski biwi jannat'.shaad said everyone salaam bt jannat was jst lost,she was seeing whole house,get vivid images,jannat:'ye mujhe kya ho raha hai,kyu aisa lag raha ha ki iss ghar ke sath mera koi purana rista ha"..her thought inturupted whn she heard everyone stated talking...suddenly jannat feel her heartbeat increased,she dnt knw why bt she looking everywhr,thn she saw a very handsome man entering.she heard misbah said he is ahil raza ibrahim...bt sanam didnt knw wht to do,she jst staring tht man,specialy his eyes...thr is same emotion lk hers...love-pain-longing for someone-frustration-hurt...ahil at 1st looked away from her...

at night ahil sat on poolside,whn nazia,shazia cm thr.nazia:'ye sab kya ha bhaijaan,ye sanam bhabi apne aap ko jannat kyu keh rahi ha,mujhe to kuch samajh nehi araha'.shazia:mujhe to lagta hai ki wovi dusro ki tarha nikli,bhaijaan ko chorke dusre admi k pass chali gayi'.ahil:shazia!mind ur language,u very well knw tht sanam aisi nehi ha,kuch to baat ha aur wo main pata lagake rahungi.shazia:aur kya ho sakti ha bhaijaan,bura mat manna mujhe to ye misbah pehle sehi pasand nehi ha,aur ab ye shad aur jannat'.

Later tht night in the garden ahil was walking whn he heard misba,shad & jannat's convo-

Jannat-main janti hu shaad, par main apna wajud dhundna chahti hu,pls aap mana mat kijiye,shaad:jannat main mana nehi kar raha hu par tum pure india me apne family ko kaise dhundgi,tumhe apne beete zindagi k bare me kuch yaad nehi,humlogo ko jab tum mili tum apni yadasht puri tarha kho chuki thi,yaha tak tumhe apna naam tak nehi pata,hum logo ne tumara naam jannat rakha,logo ki taano k wajah se hum pati,patni hone ka natak kar rahe ha,sabkuch janti ho tum,dr.ne saaf mana kia ha tumhe stress lene k lia,warna tumahri jaan ja sakti ha,maine tumhe promise kia ha na main tumare family ko dhund nikalunga,I need time jannat.misbah:shaad thik keh rahi ha jannat,pls maan jao,apne health pe to dhyan do.jannat(frustrated):tum log meri baat samajh hi nehi sakte,mujhpe kya beet rahi ha ye sirf main janti hu,har waqt aisa lag raha hai meri zindagi mujhse dur jaa rahi ha,mera koi intezar kar raha ha aur main uss tak pohoch nehi paraha hu,aisa lagta ha uske bina main adhuri hu ushi tarah jis tarha meri mohobbat mere bina adhura hai,aisa lagta ha mera koi apna mere aaspas hai par main ustak pohoch nehi pa rahi hu.pl misba,shaad main Bhopal me apne family ko,apne pyaar ko dhundna chahti hu".misbah:Bhopal me matlab??jannat:misbah tumhe yaad hai na maine tumhe bataya tha ki main har raat ko apne yaado me ek couple ko dekhti hu,jo ek dusre se bohot mohabbat karta hai,woe k chehra jo mere dil aur zehen me hai,par main use pehchan nehi paarahi hu,mujhe lagta ha wo sirf ek sapna nehi meri ek yadein ha,aur ye ring(pointing her ring on her ring finger),sayed ye meri mohabbat ki nishani ha,shaad:tum ye kaise keh sakti ho??jannat:bcz shaad,aj galti se ye ring gir gaya to maine notice ki issme "I LOVE U" likha hua ha,sathme kisi lakshmi jwellers ka tag,jo Bhopal me hai,pls shaad maan jaiye.mizba:shaad,I think hume jannat ko jane dena chahiye,u dnt worry,main isske sath rahunga.shaad:thik hai.btw ab hum inlogo ko kya kahe,I mean main kal subha jaa raha hu,raat ko yehi ruk raha hu,pakisthan me to sabko sabkuch pata tha,jannat guest room me rehti thi,lekin yaha to sab hume couple samajhte ha,to...misbah:koi baat nehi shaad,jannat mere sath so jaygi,koi bahana bana denge,dnt worry".all r went to sleep unkwn to thm ahil hear everything...

Ahil to himslf:mujhe pura bharosa tha meri mohabbat mujhe kabhi dhoka nehi degi,kabhi mera sath nehi choregi,tum chinta mat karo sanam,tumara ahil tumare pass ha aur bohot jald hum firs eek honge...

Prcp---shaad go city hospital for some enqueiry.he sees seher nd get to knw tht seher ahmad khan is ahil's sister in law,he doubt tht how cn jannat nd seher lokking exactly same.shaad-ahil conversation..

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an interseting concept dear
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This was literally auch an amazing chapter
cant wait to read more
please continue soon😊

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