KaBhi FF: Dosti Aur Pyaar- Link to Thread 2 on Page 116- 26th July - Page 10

Nice update
Like different shades of Zoya character
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Luks like u also want to show ur heroines as grey or near to grey. Girls can't be always mahhan. Luks like u have also got inspired 4m grey female leads of d youth shows. Zoya is not a villian but someone who has grey sides n who has hidden motives behind her normal behaviour. Zoya is not at all like Gul's villian but she is somewhat like Gul's grey female character Shazia n she has qualities of other grey female leads like Kiya, Sanyukta, Vidushi, Roshni, Mukti, Aaliya. If men can be jerk wid those excuse of bad past then why can't females? But Zoya is not a jerk. She just don't want anyone to trouble her in any way.

Asad n Ayaan r real brothers n Razia is positive.

yes actually being a girl i don't like as weak and just crying for their love but to be honest i never saw youth shows it's just my own thinking looking at the real world. According to me you have more expectation with your love ones and if they hurt you then you are hurt deeply and can't forgive easily also forgiving them easily is like giving them a certificate to hurt you again and get forgiveness without any hardship and facing same pain infact not even bit of that.
I know your zoya is not villain but what i wanted to say was your zoya is like guls villain who knows how to hurt the person and took revenge who hurt you and i love that about it😛

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Like different shades of Zoya character
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

lovely update

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

nice..

Love the update

Originally posted by: anopama

Love the update

So zoya and Asad confrontations

Brought back so many update

Original QH missed it

Looking forward to read

So dilshad and Najma know she is anu

But she give this fake name

Waiting to see how it is revealed

Continue

Part 2

"Lets have dinner," said Dilshad wid a smile.

"I will eat in my room," said Zoya.

"Why u want to eat in ur room?" asked Dilshad shockingly.

"I don't any problem," replied Zoya.

"There won't be any problem, Anan...Zoya," said Dilshad.

"Okay, I will eat wid all of u only," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Tuje pata nahi hai tu kisse panga le raha hai, AAK. AAK to main bhi hu par teri tarah dumb nahi hu," thinks Zoya in her mind.

Asad cud not believe dat he had to tolerate her on d same dining table. D dinner was quiet. Zoya was lost in her mind.

"Zoya, wat happened? Where r u lost?" asked Dilshad.

"Aunty, a branch of my dance academy AAK Dance Academy has been opened in Bhopal last month. I have to luk after dat. Also, I help in my mausa n bhaiyu's company. Dunno how I will complete my mission for which I came here," replied Zoya.

Asad cud not believe wat he heard. Zoya has several dance academies n she is also part of her uncle's business.

"So, u will come to house late?" asked Asad, "In dis house, no ladies goes out after 7pm. Dats why I don't like working women."

Zoya was actually thinking sumnthn else but she lied to Dilshad to see how Asad reacts. She was right dat he is a MCP.

"Out of all things, u had to ask me dat only," said Zoya pretending to be polite, "I can't believe an educated man who is aunty's son can hate working women just cuz they can be sumtyms. As for ur 7pm deadline, I can't change for anyone."

Asad did not wat to say before her angry reaction which was coated wid politeness.

"Zoya, u don't need to worry. Wateva ur mission is u will succeed. As for 7pm deadline, u don't need to worry abt dat. No one will tell u to change," said Dilshad wid a smile.

"Thanks for understanding me, aunty," said Zoya wid a smile.

Asad got annoyed wid his mother supporting Zoya.

After dinner, Asad n Dilshad were talking in d corridor.

"Ammi, she is not a nice girl. She don't know anything abt our culture n traditions. She can't even wear proper clothes. If she lives here, she has to follow d rules of d house to come to house before 7 n wear Indian clothes till she lives here. Her parents may been busy in some to teach her some etiquettes n manners," said Asad.

Zoya who listening to them 4m behind a wall got angry wid him. He did not even spared her parents along wid teln dat she had to follow d rules of d house. Rules, my foot.

"Asad, u sud respect ur guest. U r being too much judgemental. Its so wrong to talk abt her like dat abt following d rules and u did not even spared her parents," said Dilshad.

"Ammi but...," said Asad.

"Asad, its very night. Go to sleep now. Good night," said Dilshad n went 4m there.

"Good night," said Asad n went to his room.

Zoya too went to her room. He changed into her short blue nightie dress n got on d bed.

"Etiquettes n manners. Oh really? Pehle khud sikhkar aa fir muje sikhaana. Idiot," said Zoya wid gritted teeth.

She then luks at her book rack wid several novels n other books. She goes there. She places comic n cartoon books in front of all d book rows.

"Now, d rack luks like I read only comics," said Zoya wid a smirk, "Now, I will act immature n messy in front of Asad to irritate him so dat he will think I am dumb which I am not."

She went to her bed n slept.

Next morning, during breakfast Zoya sat on Asad's chair purposely. She was wearing a blue kurta n jeans.

"Why r u sitting on my chair?" asked Asad.

"I am so sorry. I did not knew everyone's place is fixed like d seat no. in d exams," replied Zoya pretending to be polite.

She quietly got up n sat on d chair she sat last night.

"By d way, I remember a shayari on dis,

Arz Kiya Hai

Ruhani sukoon aur dil me chain honi chahiye

Ruhani sukoon aur dil me chain honi chahiye

Tumhaara naam Asad nahi Chairman hona chahiye

Shukriya shukriya shukriya

Dilshad n Najma laughed while Asad got irritated wid her shayari. Just then Asad gets a call 4m Ayaan.

"Hello Ayaan," said Asad.

"Arz kiya hai

Zindagi hai pencil, kismet hai rubber

Zindagi hai pencil, kismet hai rubber

I have called to give you a good khabar

Shukriya shukriya shukriya," said Ayaan.

"Oh plz Ayaan, I already got my dose of a shayari," said Asad.

"Wat? Who told u shayari apart 4m me?" asked Ayaan.

"Our guest Zoya," replied Asad.

"Ohh, d guest u talked abt yesterday," said Ayaan, "Well, I have called to tell u dat Nikhat's alliance has been fixed wid Imraan."

"Dats a good news, Ayaan," said Asad happily, "Now, Nikhat will get married to Ayaan."

Dilshad, Najma n Zoya were hearing everything.

"U r getn so happy, Asad. But soon ur happiness will be gone wen u will know who ur sister is marrying," thinks Zoya sympathetically.

Asad talks wid Ayaan for some more time before he hung up.

"Don't u think its too early for Nikhat to get married?" asked Dilshad.

"Ammi, its okay," said Asad, "Imraan is a nice guy."

"Asad, I heard dat Nikhat is just 19 a year younger than even Najma. She is too young to get married," said Zoya.

"I think u sud not talk in other's matters," said Asad reudely.

Zoya controlled her irritation.

"Well, lets have breakfast now," said Zoya calmly changing d topic.

While having breakfast, Zoya thought abt last night at wat she decided. She was eating noodles wid her hands. While having bread-jam, wen she got jam remains on her fingers instead of wiping it wid a tissue she licked it like a child. Asad was disgusted by dat while Dilshad n Najma wondered wat had happened to her all of a sudden.

"Asad Ahmed Khan, I hate u for dis. Cuz of u, I am eating like 2 year old Zara," thinks Zoya wid irritation.

Zara is Zain n Aaliya's 2 year old daughter.

Next afternoon, Zoya n Najma comes home 4m Najma's college after Zoya throws inks on d loafers who were teasing Najma. Zoya n Najma went to their rooms.

Asad said, "I don't want Najma to get involved wid Zoya as Najma will get spoiled in her company due to her influence."

Only Zoya hears dis 4m far n gets angry.

"What the f?" asks Zoya angrily n went to her room.

Next day, Asad enters house in d evening. Dilshad n Najma were in their rooms. He went in d kitchen to drink water. He was shocked to see d sight before her. Zoya had made a mess in d kitchen. She was wearing an apron n making sumthn.

"Wat r u doing?" asked Asad.

"Cooking sumthn. U can see dat clearly," replied Zoya wid a smile.

He called Dilshad n Najma, "Ammi, Najma, come here."

Dilshad n Najma came in d kitchen.

"Ammi, she is making a mess of our kitchen," said Asad wid irritation.

"Aunty, I had yesterday seen u making dis chocolate cake. So, I tried to make it myself as I was hungry by seeing d video on my I-Pad. U know na how I made a video of u making it. I did not told u & Najma cuz I thought dat u both r sleeping," replied Zoya pretending to be innocent.

"Asad, dekho na bechaari cake banaane ko try kar rahi hai aur tum itni si baat pe irritate ho gaye," said Dilshad.

"Ammi, I told u many times vo bechaari nahi hai," said Asad.

"Tune sahi kaha, Asad. Main bechaari nahi hu," thinks Zoya wid a smirk.

She then went to d trio wid d cake she made. D cake was not lukn in proper shape.

"Plz, have some. I hope its properly made," said Zoya wid a smile.

"U call dis properly made wen its not in proper shape," said Asad.

"Its my 1^st time, Asad. I am sure u were not able to make rotis n kababs properly in d 1^st attempt," said Zoya calmly.

Asad was tongue-tied. Dilshad n Najma tuk a piece.

"Its nice, Anan...Zoya," said Najma wid a smile.

"Yaa, it may not be in proper shape but its not for d 1^st time," said Dilshad wid a smile.

Asad left d kitchen in frustration.

"Oh, I forgot where I kept chocolate sauce," said Zoya.

She removed her apron n went in d hall. She saw d bowl of chocolate sauce kept near d couch. She smiled as she recalled how she purposely kept there to irritate dat OCD freak Asad. Asad accidently puts his hand in d bowl of chocolate sauce n gets irritated. Zoya had not planned dis but she still smiled at wat she saw. She came before Asad.

"Asad, have u seen a bowl of chocolate sauce?" asked Zoya innocently, "I forgot where I kept. I need it."

Asad got angry n pointed at d bowl.

"Zoya, its here n I accidently put my hand in it so its wasted. Can't u keep it somewhere else?" asked Asad angrily.

"I did not dreamt dat u will keep ur hand in it. I told na I forgot where I kept. I am sorry for ur hand getn into it. But u don't need to be angry," replied Zoya calmly.

"Agar mera bas chale to main tera bathtub chocolate sauce se bhar du," thinks Zoya angrily.

"Zoya, u sud stay away 4m Najma. I don't want her to become like u. I don't like girls who don't respect their culture n wear modern clothes. I don't like independent n working girl. Muje tumhaari vajah se ghar me koi gandgi nahi chahiye. I want dat till d time u live in dis house u wear Indian clothes instead of western clothes," said Asad rudely.

Zoya was boiling wid anger n it was hard to control herself. He don't like independent n working girl. How dare he said dat he don't want dirt cuz of her?

"Asad, I don't have time to hear ur nonsensical talks. I have some work. By d way, clothes does not defines someone's character. Luks like u r the only one who has problem wid my clothes in dis house," said Zoya firmly n went to her room.

Asad was speechless. He gets some vibes dat she is not as innocent as she seems.

Zoya goes in jail while saving Najma 4m d same loafers wen she breaks d principal's window. Asad insults her very badly n she cries in d mazhar(Dis scene is 4m d show only. I will not write but u all can imagine. NikNuzHum had not seen Zoya's face but only her back while she was fighting wid d goons so they does not knows how Zoya luks. No Zoya-Rashid scene as Rashid is negative in dis story).

Zoya returns home late. She sat in mazhar for some time n then went to a mandir. After dat, she went to Barkat Royal which is her uncle's business of chains of hotel in several cities n countries. She called Dilshad dat she will be late as she has some work n she will do d dinner there only. She goes in Najma's room n sees dat Najma is hiding her hair wid her blanket lukn shocked.(Here, d hotel is not named after Barkat as there is no Barkat. Just a random name is given cuz Barkat means blessing in urdu).

"Najma, why r u lukn like Najma The Ghost?" asked Zoya wid a laugh.

"Anan...," replied Najma but Zoya stopped her.

"Zoya," said Zoya.

"But we r in d room," said Najma.

"U sud get used wid Zoya so dat u don't make mistake in front of others. Also, deewaron k bhi kaan hote hai," said Zoya.

"Ohh, I get it," said Najma, "A chewing gum got accidently in my hair n I had to cut it. Bhaijaan will get angry."

"Why he will get angry for even a hair issue?" asked Zoya shockingly.

"He don't want me to cut hair," said Najma.

"But u luk awesome in dis hairstyle," said Zoya.

"But bhaijaan won't understand," said Najma.

"Well, I will think of sumthn later. U sleep. Good night," said Zoya.

"Good night," said Najma.

Zoya went to her room n called Zain on Skype. Zain came on d screen wid Raghav(Himansh Kohli) who is Zain's younger brother. Raghav was of Najma n Humeira's age.

"Hey Pizza Monster," said both Zain n Raghav wid a smile.

"Hey bhaiyu n Raghav," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Bhaiyu, dat Asad is so annoying. 2day, he said many hurtful things to me," said Zoya.

She told him abt d events of d college n home.

"How dare dat Principal send u to jail for just breaking his window which was an accident," asked Raghav furiously.

"Raghav has college but I n Aaliya will come to Bhopal to teach dat Principal a lesson for sending u to jail," said Zain furiously.

"Bhaiyu, we will deal wid dat Principal later as I can't reveal my identity. Very less people knows dat I am d owner of AAK Dance Academy n also a part of Barkat Royale. I can't reveal my identity so soo. For now, I have to take revenge 4m dat Asad," said Zoya.

"Wat u will do?" asked Raghav.

"Sumthn dat he will be forced to apologize to me. He can't even apologize thinking dat I was only wrong," replied Zoya wid an evil smirk on her face.

"I think I know wat u will do. He deserves dat. Being a brother of 3 sisters, he does not know to respect a girl," said Zain angrily.

"Ya, he derves dat," said Zoya angrily.

They talked for some more before Zoya logged out. Zoya quietly went to Asad's room n did sumthn to his cellphone wid a smirk on her face. She wen t back to her room n slept.

Next day, Asad was irritated as he had to say I am sorry, Zoya everytime before unlocking his cell. Zoya set dat password n she told him abt it wen he was in d office by calling him. Asad got irritated but he was helpless. He came home in d evening. He cud not even say to his mother n sister due to embarrassment.(Here also, its same 4m d show).

After breakfast, Asad went to Zoya.

"Zoya, mera phone thik kar do," said Asad.

"I have no time," said Zoya.

(Here Asad does not corners her as no normal man does dat to any girl.)

Asad throws d phone in anger breaking it.

"Do u know how much dat cellphone cost? Not everyone can buy dat. Its not right to throw anything like dat," said Zoya calmly.

"Muje gyaan mat do," said Asad n went to his room.

Asad was irritated due to Zoya. After some time, he sees a cellphone hanging 4m his window by a string. He takes it n there was a note. He read d note.

Asad, u hurt me a lot yesterday n many times earlier. I wanted to teach a lesson to u cuz u did not even apologized for ur yesterday's insults as if I was only wrong. U sud think before wat u say to anyone. U broke ur own phone n I repaired it.

-Zoya

Zoya threw d phone in anger on d floor while saying angrily, "I don't want ur help, Zoya."

He then recalls Zoya's words dat he sud throw things n regrets wat he did. Zoya who was standing near d window gets angry at wat he did wid his cell.

"U again broke ur cell. U call me childish n immature but its u who is childish n immature to break things in anger. U need to grow up, Asad Ahmed Khan," said Zoya angrily.

Zoya went 4m there to her room.

Precap: #Zoya is angry on knowing dat she is banned 4m d college n talks abt it wid Zain. Next dat, Zoya n Ayaan meets again wen they wear burqa to enter college.

#AsYaan performs for a TV show audition. Haseena tells her brother Feroz dat she wants to know abt Asad n Ayaan's relation. Feroz agrees to do her work.

#Feroz kidnaps Ayaan n Asad comes to save him. But someone kidnaps Feroz later.

#Asad points Feroz's gun at Zoya to scare her only to get a shock of his life.

What does AAK in AAK Dance Academy stands for and why Zoya is also AAK?

PS: If it was a Gul's show, Zoya would have been a vamp instead of a heroine at the way she is shown in this story because there is no place for grey-shaded heroines in Gul's serials😆.

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the storyline is quite similar to QH...