New ASYA SS : I Forget You Not, Note PG 124, 04/07/2015

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: Persiko
Beautiful update Di... Zoya got a job... they have come a long way... Was that Asad at other side????... I think yesss... can't wait for them to meet in next update... p.s. my like button isn't working count my like too

Hey sweetheart thank you so much for liking this one too 🤗. Absolutely it was him

OK will count it in don't worry ❤️ 🤗

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: Avie
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Berry! 😳😳

Three years!!! OMG 😲😲😲

Mujhe pehle hi shak hua tha.. Like I said, on this title of yours.. 😆😆

Bechare dono.. Itne saal laga diye..

Zoya and her mother have made a successful world for themselves.. 😃 So so happy for them!
And Zoya's mom knows about Asad too.. 😲😃

3 years and still she loves him.. 😳😳
Zoya still remembers him and everything about him..
Ab toh milado Berry.. Aur nahi dekha jaata.. 😳😳

Kahiye ye Khan hamara Jahapanah toh nahi.. 😆😆 So excited.. 😃

Already 67 likes.. 😃😃 Jaldi ek aur update bhi mil jaayega.. 😃😃

Love you ❤️

Lol yea I remember that n only you had guessed it right in the beginning 😉

Yea I has to finally give them some happiness. N yea remember she'd told her immediately after she'd returned 😳

That is what is true love naa

Meeting next update pakka 👍🏼. Lol yea its him.

Really 67!!! I didn't check. Wanyed to reply first 😳. I I'll start writing once I get the 80 n you know naa Me his such a slow writer 😳. But will try hurrying up 😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: Sathya77
suddenly you took a 3 years Leap 😲
i hope our Mr.Khan recognized her voice 😆
just waiting for AsYa reunion
and thanks for the PM 👍🏼

Oh yea leap was required to move the story forward 😊

Ye he found it familiar and the reunion or rather they will meet in the next chapter 😳

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: mona12345

Res ! 😃

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Finally you updated ! 😳

I had been impatiently waiting for this update and it was worth the update. It brought happiness with it.

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3 Long years ! 💔

My poor ASYA ! 😭

Glad Zoya and Benazeer could move ahead in life and she found a job to support them.

*The Conversation*
Both, Asad and Zoya felt it..
And now Mr. Sharma is going to make them meet. Angel in disguise ! 😳

Choco, why do you always do this ? Now I've to patiently(impatiently) wait for the next update !😒

Can we get an update tomorrow or something ?

Please.. Pretty please ?

Love ya
Mwah !
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Mona meri jaan, thank you for this appreciation and am glad ki intezaar ka phal meetha tha 😆

Yea after all the Rona dhona and the hardships had to give them some happiness 😊

Oh yea definitely both felt the tingles. Mona Mr. Kapoor, not Sharma. Yaad rakhna or he might feel offended n become kabab mein haddi 🤣

Ab see if I don't demand the likes naa, toh people read and move on without hitting like. I've experimented. Chapter 4 I asked for 75 n got them in 2 days n chapter 6 I didn't say anything it reached 76 in a week 😕. Ab people are not proactive toh mein kya karoon 😛😆

Will start writing as I get 80 n will try updating asap 🤗

Love you too Sweeti ❤️

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: swapno
Wonderful update...!
Loved it!!
Asad gave the phone to other!!
So he realized it is her???
Update soon

Thank you Swapno am so happy you're loving it 😊

No he didn't give the phone to anyone, he found the voice familiar so was fumbling 😳

Will surely do 😃

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Aww Mayur you make me so so happy with your comment. Am so glad you felt content reading this part . Thank you so so much for all the appreciation sear. This is the reason we writers write her. Lil appreciation and we feel on top of the moon🤗

Lol yea 3 years ho gay n they haven't met but that will change in the next part😉
Of course he is waiting for her too. Yea Mr. Kapoor is her guardian and loves her like his own daughter.

I hope so too😛😉😆

And I always love & enjoy reading your updates...and wait for the response you give it to my comment.

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Avie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Lol yea I remember that n only you had guessed it right in the beginning 😉
Yea I has to finally give them some happiness. N yea remember she'd told her immediately after she'd returned 😳

That is what is true love naa

Meeting next update pakka 👍🏼. Lol yea its him.

Really 67!!! I didn't check. Wanyed to reply first 😳. I I'll start writing once I get the 80 n you know naa Me his such a slow writer 😳. But will try hurrying up 😃

I am way too excited for their meet.. How would they react? What will they do?? 😆😆

Haan I knew it was something like this.. 😆😆 *Lateef style* Main tho hu hi chuimui.. 😆😆

Abhi tho its already 67.. 80 tho chutki mein ho jaayenge.. 😃😃

Berry, do one thing na.. You start writing now.. And 80 ke baad you can update.. What say?? 😉 I can't wait more.. Aur aap ho ki bol rahi ho.. I am a slow writer and all.. 😆 Intezaar nahi hota.. 😃😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: Sanjhari
Lovely update
Zoya is settling down in herlife...
Was that asad on the other line, he kind of recognized zoya.
Wait a minute...zoya is aware of everything about asad. Then why she is not approaching him.
If not as lovers...but they are friends atleast...
You start writing next update girl...as we are already 40+ likes. It will be done by tomorrow... 😊

Thank you dear 😊. Glad you liked it. Yes that was Asad n he did find the resemblance in the voice so the fumbling 😉

Yup she knows about him but can't approach him as she knew him for only 5 days so she didn't want his help in anything. Self respect you see

Yup have started writing but am a self confessed slow writer so will need sometime before I update 😳. Vaise bhi I'd said I will start writing after I get 80 😛. But am writing 😃👍🏼

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed
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Beautiful chapter Choco

Even with the three year leap it followed on and blended beautifully

Big have carried on living but deep inside they still hold on to each other as they can't forget

Mwah

Look forward to their meeting

Love u

Love you too Sis n thank you so much for the appreciation. This is what keeps me going or I would have stopped writing long time back 😳. Hope their meeting is liked too 😳