New ASYA SS : I Forget You Not, Note PG 124, 04/07/2015

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-silentbang-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Poor asya 😭

What happened to her father ??

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paru

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

its sad part
hope everything will be fine
thanks for pm
love u

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sasir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Sad n emotional
Poor asya
But what happened to zoya n her family
Plz reveal it soon

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Shama_zz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

tat was emotional part

feelng bad for asya

waitng for nxt whch wil a leap i guess

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ASYAaishu

@ASYAaishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

you made me cry man...

but i just love it...

it was awesome...

plz continue

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Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#286

Huh !!!??? What was that !!!!!
I was so excited for dis one to read choco :-( :-( :-(
Ye kya hogaya :'( :'(

That was emotional updt.. Emotionally beautiful and well written...

Felt so bad for asad.. He had so many plans for dis day...
U described very well What he felt at that tym.. U nailed it *claps*
My eyes too gt moist...

Zoya.. What happened to her father !?
At least zoya gt to know her feelings for asad.. Nd We can say she loved asad..
Fate played very cruel game wd dem :'( both.. Asad and zoya r in so much pain yaar..
And I can't see dem like dis...

I guess we bttr be ready for one more emotional updt huh !?

Hyyy now how ll thy meet again !? Eager to know..

Loved it a lot... Continue soon...

P.s- finally gt d tym :-( sry for d late...

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anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#287

Wow what an update

Very emotional

Poor asya couldn't get to spend their happy day

A day that would have been full of confessions

Faith for in the way

They were separated before they got together

Asad sadness then his desperation to reach her

He couldn't get her# but he is determined to find her

He loves her

Aww so sad for zoya what could have happen tht she couldn't tell her bff too

Have to be something horrid can't be her abbu is dead she would have share tht

Maybe he is jailed or something

Zoya breakdown in her ammi arms she lost all her happiness

She found something she could have seen a future with and the mutual feelings

And all is lost now y is alllah punishing her

It is a test of faith and love and strength

Hope zoya and Asad pass this test

Hope they. Not separated for long

Continue soon

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rajsmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Poor Asad and his plans...feel sad for Zoya too! Hope all gets better soon for Zoya and then she can reach out to Asad ;-)

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Nim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Hey Choco,

This is a big u turn in the plot. Where I think all of us were waiting for AsYa to spend their last day together and maybe even go as close as confessing, you made them part :(

Anyhow the part wasn't lacking in anything. The feel, the emotions everything was just up to the mark. Absolutely beautiful. It left my heart bleeding n eyes moist at the pain both my babies went through. :(

Seriously I just want these times to end testing them and let them be together.. as they deserve to be. Here's a tight hug from me for my babies. Plz dont cry. All will go back to ok soon. Just hang in there.

Amazing part Choco. Update soonish.

Much love.. hamesha.

Edited by Rarepearl - 10 years ago

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Avie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#290

Berry, that was just so sad and emotional..😭

Asad hoped to spend the day with Zoya but instead he has to grieve for her..

I could feel Asad's helplessness when he was asking about Zoya.. Broke my heart to see him like that.. 🥺

That scene where he feels everyone is joking with him and he realizes they aren't.. That made me tear up...

Back home, Zoya is also heartbroken she couldn't meet him.. Ahh poor girl.. I wonder what exactly happened to her Abbu.. Maybe he cheated someone and committed suicide?? There is a new show coming on tv based on these lines.. It might be possible right..

But Berry even though it was sad, the way you showed their emotions and portrayed their helplessness, Kudos! Brilliantly written..👏

Continue soon..

Love you loads Berry! ❤️

PS: Read your note and I must apologize for not commenting frequently here.. I am kind of stuck with my projects and assignments.. But that is not an excuse for not commenting.. I will pakka try to be regular here Berry.. I always catch up with your stories and read them between breaks.. And I don't wanna put up a small comment like amazing update or something.. So I wait till I get time so I can give a decent comment atleast.. So apologies and will definitely try to comment more.. Please do PM me..😳

Edited by Avie - 10 years ago