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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was an emotional one!

Cried at the end :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I can't it awesome as I hated d ending but I can appreciate ur writing👏😊

AsYa scenes were so cute😃

Both cud do anything for each other

Asad thinks his boss is good

Sumthn wrong wid Zoya😲

Then d reality comes to Asad😭

He was so heartbroken to see Zoya dead n reading her letter😭

She wrote for him not to cry but its not possible😭

Felt bad for Zoya n Asad😭

His boss was bas***d😡

Wish u write another part as all says wid Zoya alive😛

D boss got away wid his misdeeds😡. He may have done dat to many women either for their promotion or for their husband or for anyone in their family.

I think he harassed her d 1st time wen he saw her at d office. Zoya had negatives vibes on him 4m d very start. Zoya's plight was heartbreaking😭.

Such men exists in real life not doing lihaz of their own age. In Jamai Raja, it is shown recently how an old man in his 50s who is divorced 4 times is lusting after his 25-26 year old employee n how he has a bad history as a womanizer n setting up his business by wrong deeds. He has many pending cases against him 4m many years but still he is innocent in law's face as there r no proofs against him to prove him guilty. So, very less people who r victims like dis ever get justice. Such people sud be hanged😡.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

I can't it awesome as I hated d ending but I can appreciate ur writing👏😊


AsYa scenes were so cute😃

Both cud do anything for each other

Asad thinks his boss is good

Sumthn wrong wid Zoya😲

Then d reality comes to Asad😭

He was so heartbroken to see Zoya dead n reading her letter😭

She wrote for him not to cry but its not possible😭

Felt bad for Zoya n Asad😭

His boss was bas***d😡

Wish u write another part as all says wid Zoya alive😛

D boss got away wid his misdeeds😡. He may have done dat to many women either for their promotion or for their husband or for anyone in their family.

I think he harassed her d 1st time wen he saw her at d office. Zoya had negatives vibes on him 4m d very start. Zoya's plight was heartbreaking😭.

Such men exists in real life not doing lihaz of their own age. In Jamai Raja, it is shown recently how an old man in his 50s who is divorced 4 times is lusting after his 25-26 year old employee n how he has a bad history as a womanizer n setting up his business by wrong deeds. He has many pending cases against him 4m many years but still he is innocent in law's face as there r no proofs against him to prove him guilty. So, very less people who r victims like dis ever get justice. Such people sud be hanged😡.



Lol lol lol

I will faint seeing this comment

Biggest comment ever ..

Thank a lot sweetie

Yippee I am dancing

Yaay I love u so much

I just don't know what to say ..

Thank u so much

I am happy u like it

Please suggest me any topic to write asya os

U should read other oses which r my lady love ,shower of love

They r my personally favourite

Then I will get big comment like that

Thank you so much

U don't know how much happy I am ..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

His boss is such a creep...I knew his intentions are not good


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -hotsauce-

This was an emotional one!

Cried at the end :(

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutie15

Omg..!!
That was shocking..
pls update the sec part soon..!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: riaa234

dat was sad!!!!!!!!!!!!

do update part 2



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sushma-

It was really good!


And you made me cry... 😭

I'm feeling really sorry for Zoya... 😭

Asad's boss is such a creep! 😡

He deserves a very horrible punishment...

I know Asad won't him leave after this...

Thanks for the PM...



- Sushma



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Azraa01

Cant wait for part B


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shailu123

Yaar r u seriously written it u made my heart cry 😭 i hate d boss 😡


what an emotional part😭😭
boss😡
nice one dear
do write more

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