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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#851

Nice updates..

But now I really want to see the story moving forward.

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#852

Love it

so beautiful

so intense update

hawww what twist

is it going to be some misunderstanding between them

are they going to separate

oh no well you really did a great job

thanks for pm

update soon

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#853

hey dear,

I know I never comment about this story for many reason, I just started reading it two day ago, 😕 so sorry I didn't get the time before.

Coming to the story, it was totally different from the real version of dilwale, maybe this is why I didn't read it earlier, but I was surprised because it was totally different and I should expect this from you. Anyway, so sorry for being late about this story.

It started pretty well, Zoya entered with her big mouth and unique personality which attracted Asad instantly. When I read the first chapter, I though Tanveer will seperate or create a misunderstanding but, no, it went really far between them, they confessed, they made love and he asked her to marry her. And you chose at this moment to add a twist, Ugh, I should have expected it was about to come, the seperation 😆.

The story was moving really well and the attraction was 😳. You are one of the writer who built really well chemistry between character, I must confess, you are really good in it.

So let's see what did you prepare for us and I guess Zoya will see him with Tanveer ?

Thanks for the pm dear and for sure, I will follow this story by now.

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MonnaS

@msingh27

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#854

wow...just got done with all the chapters...i missed alot of updates..not sure how. but must say..this was an amazing treat for me today. Loved every single chapter..thank u so much for the PM. Looking forward to the next update..can't wait 😛

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#855

Hot and sensual updates👏

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#856

excellent part dear

My like button is not working

update is superb & hoot too

pls update soon

thanks for pm

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keya

@krazy4kash

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#857

a twist ... oh no ...i have a bad feeling for this one..

awesome update this one was sooo hot and filled with love

he proposed as well

waitng for more

luv

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srashti21

@srashti21

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#858

Hey sana

Srashti here...I have finally got time to read ur stories n since yesterday this is the third one I am reading n just can't seem to stop

Ddlj was a fun movie but u loaded this ff with passion and little bits of twist

I am loving it!

Continue soon...n pm me on -Crazy4AsYa- account

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#859

Hey I just read the story and I really liked it

Please PM me when you continue I would love to read more

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#860

Sorry commenting after a long time

In past weeks I commented very less on people's post n used to update my own stories very less as I had an exam on 16th.

Cumn to ur story, its going very well n smooth

AsYa got drunk n got intimate several times

Regarding d twist, I hope Asad does not do sumthn bad to Zoya. Wat may be d misunderstanding acc. to Asad?

Still, I don't want Zoya to forgive Asad easily for hurting her very badly n dumping her dat also after having sex wid her several times.

Regarding ur FSOG story, I don't think I will read dat I hate abuse in d name of love or anything. I really hate men controlling women.

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