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evedallas1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Powerful chapter 😕 This is a delicate subject so many people in real life lose their mind or their life because of violence in video games ! Bravo I really like this chapter and the way you show Sanam so fragile and confused in front of the reality of her job: being in a studio and being on the crime scene are 2 different things 👏

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@ChamakChallo91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Edited :)

Really nice to know how Aahil and Sanam's relationship progressed!

Love their banters! And the way Aahil was always there for her!

Hope Sanam realizes her feeling for Aahil soon!

The crime scene was horrific!

Thanks for the pm :)

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darkice7_12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

That was such a heart wrenching chapter. Despite what they do, they are still human enough to be touched by the tragedy they have to report. Loved how Aahil was there for her. I am loving how you are portraying their relationship and its growth.

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Natasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Awesome update Loved it Thanks for the pm

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Applef

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Wow.. that was one awesome chapter..

Ahil and sanam on action.. finding out the truth..

It was adventurous though to read..

Ahil really care about sanam..

And they did fight alot but cared for each other more..

Ahil'a feeling for sanam is quite clear to me..

Update soon..

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thefangirllife

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Omg, so when I read the title I thought someone was really gonna get kidnapped or did in the past!

I love how you are describing their relationship with Sanam reflecting on it and having flashbacks. It's so ...poetic...author-y?

Okay, so it seems as if Aahil is also in love with Sanam. Or has strong feelings for her. Their relationship is so beautiful and subtle. From the caring for each other and knowing each other, and just wanting to share their lives.

I squealed at the pushing the hair behind the ear, I am all for that kind of romance over kisses and stuff. Ugh, I would die if I could actually see Surbhi/KVB play this story out!

Totally adored how you add elements of real-life in your story like with the crime scene, LIKE HOW DO YOU WRITE MAN? You really make me think about things, like the last two paragraphs, I was just like "damn, that is so true".

I am loving this so so much. Continue soon love!

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Uzma Ahmed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Mind blowing chapter & very heart wrenching too 👏 😭 Love the way you describe the situations & emotions 👏 Hats off to you..you're a blessed writer I can't stop myself from falling for your stories 😳 Coming to the update I adore SaHil's relationship in your story & also their concern towards each other 😳 Thanks for the pm & continue soon if possible 😛