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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey anjali!I have read all your works&love all of them!I completely enjoy reading your works!
I love this ff dearly!I love the flow of the story&pov's of the people& juggle b/w emotions&Lots of sexual attraction!It's a complete package like all ur other works!
I love ur sense of humour&the way you write!Gee,i always blush&giggle reading ur works,making people look at me weirdly!But they don't know how fabulous of a writer you are,Keep writing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome & Mind-Blowing Story...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Always a joy to read again
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: runi4.

hello miss anjali,i hav a lot of complains for u about ur FF clueless & classified luv.i know meri baatein tumhe acchi nhi lagengi but i cant help myself to express my feelings about u nd my judgement about ur story.you know i luv asya the way they are i would not have liked them if thier character would have been diffrent frm the character dat was shown in the show bt in dis forum there r some writers who make asad and zoya very much diffrent in thier story then they were in d show.

and in that list tumhara naam sbse top mein aata hai,bcoz in ur FF not only asad zoya r very much OOC bt also thier family.

In ur FF asad and zoya do a LOT of dirty talks,they always bad mouth,curse nd use swear word that too without any reason like itz a very normal thing.i never knew ki they r soo bad mannred ppls dat they will always use dirty language fu*k! also UR zoya is not adorable at all bcoz she dont act and talk crazy like d real zoya UR zoya acts and talks like a physcho nd s shameless women who dont hav manner how to talk with ur elder pls[i cluess she wass bhaving vid rashid as ifhez is his frnd,like we ppl dont adress r frnd vid his\her orignal name nd some funny insulting type name].
what can i say more yr.The Zoya and Asad and also their family shown in QH were soo decent,they were modern frm outside bt very traditional at heart,they knew d diffrence between ri8 nd wrong,between being very much modern nd being indecnt ,they knew d diffrence between being open minded nd being shameless bt in ur story every1 is jst d opposite of d orignal character's.

AREY in ur story asad and zoya almost did evrything dat lovers do,nd woh jst bcoz they realize dat they LIKE eachother[nd these shameless ppl dont even feel giulty they did all dat without any hesitation,miss anjali tum ek character ko aur kitna disgusting bana sakti ho]

in ur story asya had sex BEFORE marriage nt once or twice bt again nd again nd again ND THEY WERE ALSO STAYING IN A LIVE IN RELATIONSHIP??? asad's family know all dis phir v they dont hav any problem!!!
miss anjali koi v DECENT family mein ye sab nahi hota but tum nahi samjhogi agar tum samajhti toh aisa story kabhi nahi likhti

nd in dat story of ur s named as CLUELESS in dat story zoya has problem staying with asad's family before marrige as shez nt feeling comfortable of what ppl will think bt usko tab uncomfort feel nei hua when she was living vid asad alone in his apartment before marriage? nd uss waqt usko kharab nei laga when ppl were talking about her character when she was staying in a live in relationship vid asda?wah kitni decent hai tmhari zoya

u know what miss anjali if onscreen asya tumhara OOC asya type hote na toh nobody would have adored them

ur asya are doing evrything before marriage dat ppl shud do after marriage then whts d need to get married han bina shadi k baccha v paida kar lete na

nd ur asad nd zoya r soo disgusting they do dirty tals in their minds nd aslo vid eachoher,ur zoya luv to wear small size dress,ur asya dey dont hesitate for PDA chee !!!dude or kitna OOC karogi mare fav character's ko

ur asya r sooo horny day r sex addiucted they f**k each other at d worst situation.arey when sm1 goes through a serious situation they get pretty shook up frm inside bt ur asya toh they fell desire
u know ur asya they dont have love between them they have LUST nd only lust

ur asya they also drink!!u know what miss anjali hamare muslim family mein itni acchi upbring hoti hai baccho ki dat we dont do any wrong things like
1-having physical realation before mariage
2-staying in liv in relationship
3-having liquor
4-public display of love between lovers

next tym u'll write anything on asya then write smthing very ri8,clean,decent,intresting nd good


Originally posted by: runi4.

hey miss anjali i think u r no more active in QH forum so i came here to convey my feelings about u nd ur story actually i want to talk about asya FFs so go nd read my comment on last page of ur FF clueless i hav gave a very big comment ther nd also i want to say some more things to u

sm ppl get a lot of likes becoz their story is really very nice nd sm ppl get alot of likes jst bcoz they hav a lot of frndz nd sirf frndship k liye hee hee they get likes nd u r 1 of them only u r not a superp writer actually ur writing style aka ur vocabulary is nice bt sirf vocabulary se toh kuch ni hota na story line shud b gud story plotting shud be gud concept shud b gud nd every chapter shud b gud all d situation or scenes or a comedy part or a emotional part shud b gud bt tmhare story mein toh aisa kuch v ni hota nd storyline toh tmhari bohot bakwass hoti hai

u know what m suggesting u some stories,time nikal k read kar lena nd m telling u,u will learn a lot of things frm my fav writer's improve as a writer
so the following ff nd os my favs
1-gangster's girl nd marked by him by belleamme
2-forgotten melody by missreadingFaye
3-LOST SOMEWHERE by rada
4-married to darkness nd os-tonight its u nd me by McKSGDreamy
5-every os nd ts nd ff named breaking the waves nd battling vid the curse by bubble007
6-destinies intertwined nd her all os by smiley star
7-chapter black by ElmoFuj
8-saiyaraa by anita
9-my mental love,hidden love,nd all os by miss appy
10-all os by starstruck[except mature content]
11-always with you by aishwariya
12-aghast by INjoy nd her one more ff bt dont remember itsd name
13-the col;our of love,a compromisd love and a TS dont remember its name by saima syed
14-the sunshine of my life by anku
15-tumhe pyaar kab tak na karenge bhala by misshumpydumpty
16-rejected by husband and the hidden twin by pia
17-broken wings by kaussar
18-given nd dinied by swapno


Hi. I know you had a lot to say since you managed to hunt me down in a different forum to tell me your opinion. I respect your opinion, you have the right to not like my stories, that's your view and I don't care to change it.


But here's the thing, if you don't like something on the internet, you don't have to read it. I didn't hunt you down and force you to read my stories, so if you don't like them don't read them, it's as easy as that!


Now, onto your comments, I agree my FF characters are very OOC, but I tell everyone that up front, the stories are AU, which means that I have taken the liberty to change the characters and stories as I see fit, I don't want to stay true to the characterization in the show completely, because there is a show for that. You don't like the characterization, you want the original Asad-Zoya, but my imagination went further than that, so I am not going to apologize for not living up to your expectations, because frankly I don't care.


Onto your problem with my content, the swearing and sex without marriage. You have a problem with it, which I understand, but I don't have a problem with it so I'll write what I want to write. I personally don't think sex is taboo, that it's something you have to wait for until after your wedding, I am not the type to shame anyone for their sexual choices, because at the end of the day that's what is, a personal choice. There is nothing wrong with live-in-relationships in my eyes, I understand where you're coming from though. It's a cultural difference, my parents and I were both born and raised in a country where this is the norm, so I was never taught to view in a negative way. And for me, when you love someone and you know you're going to spend the rest of your lives with them, marriage is just a construct that is added to the relationship for the sake of society.


And you have no right to attack me for my views, your "koi v DECENT family mein ye..." comment is very condescending and arrogant. You can't enforce your definition of what's right onto others, you think what I write is against your beliefs, I respect that, but I am not attacking your beliefs in way. Everyone has their own beliefs, and a lot of people don't have a problem with PDA and sex (which you refer to as vulgarity). What's wrong with having sex with someone you love, no matter if you're married or not, because that's just a label society puts on the construct. Also, just because you joke around with adults, like Zoya does with Rashid, doesn't mean she isn't respectful, my parents are my best-friends and I am very chill with them, I still respect them a lot but I am not scared to joke around with them and this is what I see in healthy parent-child relationships where I am from so that is what I write.


Oh wow, okay, so apparently you're the only one in this world with decent upbringing. You need to get out of your little bubble hon, just because you think something is wrong doesn't mean it actually is for everyone else.


Oh, and another thing, I don't write for other people, I write for me, writing is my outlet, I will write what I want and how I want it. So you have no right to tell me "next tym u'll write anything on asya then write smthing very ri8,clean,decent,intresting nd good".


If you don't like what I write then don't read it, I am not going to change myself to accommodate your beliefs.


Now onto your next comment, that's perseverance right there, spending time to find me on another forum. Wow. Okay, so you don't like my stories...don't read them, again, it's as simple as that. And I am sure the stories you told me to read to "learn" are great too. But here's the thing, I don't care. I love constructive criticism, but what you're doing right now is attacking me as a person.


If you were thinking that your comments were going to make me see the light, then oopsieee. That's never going to happen, I stand firm in my beliefs and you're allowed to stand firm on yours but you can't force me to do anything.


So thank you for taking out SO much time to tell me everything you didn't like about my stories, if you thought I'd be offended by what you had to say about my writing, I wasn't, what is offensive to me is the way you automatically deem anyone who doesn't see the world like you do as wrong.

Edited by astonm - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Plzz...
Write more of these Stories...the way U write them...
That is the only way i would like to read them...
And for others..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Anjali just dropped in to say... People will take care of the required.
Love you loads and Please continue writing. :)) xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Anjali Luv u loads n your stories...keep writing..Miss ur Asya stories...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Actually people grow up and get a life!!!! If not pls stay away from this thread!!!!!

Anjali, pls continue writing for an amazing writer you are!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey! I don't think I have commented before! But just wanted to say that your an amazing writer and I have loved this FF! You gave a fitting reply!
Keep writing what you want to always! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am kind of shocked that someone would write such a comment to anyone on this forum!!
It's like you said if you don't like something don't read it. It was a fitting reply, really classy from a classy woman 👏

I love you girl, keep writing and don't let the haters get to you...not that you will, you're probably already over it 😉
I for one come onto this forum only when I get a PM from you because I am so excited to read the things you write, ever since the Twilight and Harry Potter days fammm, I gotchuuu! 😊

Aarti out! ❤️

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