'DOBARA'-A SAHIL THREE SHOT-LAST PART-NEW-ON PAGE 10 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mandy,
🥳 Let the forum be flooded with separation stories, I say!😉😆

That is a lovely plot U have there...
Written so well too. I can see how important details are to U...and closures. QH must make U tear your hair out!😆

Looking forward to reading the rest of this story...soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is amazing! Totally in love!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Absolutely lovely Mandy.
AHil's MU continues, and the Ahil's angst can be felt in this piece of writing. Alas, not even 1% of this angst comes across when CVs write separation tracks.

Looks like the writers in the forum know the characters more than the creators themselves. Hope CVs get some inspiration from here.

Waiting for the remaining 2 shots.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love it ! I'm happy you chose to write your own version. Suspense suspense lol I can't wait to see Aahil reaction when he will know the truth. Cute little Rehan ! :) Seher deserve at least that in her life : a mini version of her last and unique lover . Really nice chapter Aahil seems traumatized ad secluded not the nawab we all knew... So sad.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Do you send PMs?? If so I would love to receive one.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aaawwwnnn!

This was so damn freaking beautiful!

Rehan?

Cute!

Adorable!

Lets see how they finally make their way back!

But didn't Ahil be surprised when he saw her in jeans?! :P

Hoping to read more and more and more!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks all again for the comments. Has any of you seen "Pearl Harbor?" Remember in that how Ben Affleck's girl ends up with his best friend after she thinks he has died? Then he comes back to find out that his Best friend and his girl are an item now. He looses it. The friends fall out. It was very sad, coz they sort of fell into this relationship, coz they had been the closest to Rafe (Ben's character) and they were almost consoling each other. But the guy actually fell in love with her.


Soon after this she finds out she is pregnant, and she tells Rafe that she has to accept Danny with all her heart now, coz she is going to be the Mother of his child. Rafe has to accept it too. Then of course the two boys end up in the war again and Danny gets badly injured. I still remember the scene were Rafe tells Danny that he needs to live coz "Your going to be Daddy". That was so sad. Danny didnt even know. But he dies knowing he is going to be a Father.


At the end we see that Evelyn and Rafe had married and they were raising Danny's son. It was beautiful and so sad. I cried buckets and have seen that movie several times. Rafe and Evelyn were really in love, and circumstances separated them. That is how she ends up with Danny. But in the end, she and Rafe end up together anyway. But with a little Danny. I think they name him Danny as well.



At this point Aahil's plight is like Rafe's. He has to ask himself if he will accept the women he loves, but with another man's child! This is a big deal. But if he can do it, then his love is real. Also, this is not any child. This is Rehan's child.


The next chapter will explore all that! This is a very interesting premise. In this case, this is not Sanam. But if it was...then what would Aahil do? Worth a thought isn't it?
Edited by MrDarcyfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice..This TS made me think... Do continue it.. I always enjoy reading your SaHil stories..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing! I've always wanted SeHan's child to be named "Rehaan" (If Seher is pregnant). I'm sure that's Seher playing with that child and not Sanam. Chota Rehan is choo cute! Haha.

Well hope Aahil gets to know soon that it's not Sanam that had Rehan's baby! Continue soon :)
Edited by SprinklesOfLove - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Another amazing story ...why dont u write for Qubool hai...it would be realistic and much more fun to watch

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