||AsYa SS|| The Notebook PART 3 UPDATED PG.24 2/28 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: kajenilious

awww tat was sooo cuteee🤗
asad is such a smart guy

Asad: "No, don't do me any favors."Zoya: "No, no I want to."Boy: "You want to"Zoya: "Yes!!"Asad: "say it"Zoya: "I want to go out with you."Asad: "say it again"Zoya screamedZoya: "I want to go out with you."Asad grabbed the barAsad: "Alright Alright we'll go out."Asad chuckled

i jus couldnt stop chucklng while readng dis

nd zoe tit fr tat she rmvd hs belt nd asad pants got dwn up to hs knees hahaha🤣
neithr any is lesdan ech othr in smartness😃
cntnue vry soon


haha thank youuu!

haha yes he is😉

haha love that partt right?😉

haha yes! she was being naughty😉

will update soon! maybe tomorrow!

almost done with this update and HTNMH!😃

so just waittt😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: kajenilious

cngo again turning into goldie dear🤗


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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

It was awesome... Asads character is so interesting...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

nice that you r putting up this story in ur style...
such a classic tale of love...
i am craving for more like right now!!
continue soon


Thanks!!!

yes it is!

i just love this moviee!!

haha will update soon! maybe tomorow!😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: asyaa4ever221

Res

unress

loved it
Asad wanted to go out with zoya
Zoya said no
but said yes to the other guy
they went on ferris wheel
asad hanged on the ferris wheel
zoya being naughty haha
continue soon


Thanks!!

haha yes he did!

will update soon!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

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Posted: 10 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Mvinfff

Very cute and awesome.


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#99

Chapter 2


Zoya pants him and he was hanging there with his pants to his knees and in his boxers.



Zoya: "Haha"



Ayaan and Humeria were laughing at him



Zoya crossed her arms together



Zoya: "You're not so cocky now, are you?" ahha



Asad: "I am going to get you for that."


Zoya: "Maybe you will, maybe you won't"


Everyone at the carnival was looking at him and laughing.


Next morning


Asad and Ayaan were walking on the streets with their coworkers, Zoya was walking too on the sidewalk, Ayaan spotted her


Ayaan: "Hey Asad look, its Zoya."


Asad looked at Zoya, he started to run towards her leaving Ayaan behind


Asad: "Do you remember me?"


Zoya looked towards him


Zoya: "Yeah, sure, Mr. Underwear was it?"


Asad: "oh yeah"


Zoya: "How could I have forget."


Asad came in front Zoya and started to walk facing Zoya


Asad: "I wanted to clear that up with you, im really sorry about that, it was really stupid thing to do, crawl up a Ferris wheel to talk to somebody."


They stopped walking and stood face to face


Asad: "But I had to be next to you, I was being drawn to you"


Zoya started to laugh


Zoya: "oh geez what a lie, do you use this line on all the girls."


Asad: "No"


Zoya started to walk


Zoya: "Right? I saw you the other day hanging out with the girl at the carnival."


Asad walked to her


Asad: "What are you doing tonight."


Zoya: "What?"


Asad: "Or tomorrow night, or the weekend, whatever."


Zoya: "Why?"


Asad: " Why? Our date"


Zoya: "What date"


Asad: "The date you agreed to."


Zoya:"No"


Asad: "yes you did, you promised and swore it."


Zoya: "Well I guess I changed my mind."


Asad: "Look,i know you get some dirty guy coming up to you on the streets, you dont know him, you dont know me, but I know me, And when I see something that I like I gotta-- I love it."


Zoya started to laugh


Asad: "I go- I mean I go crazy for it."


Zoya: "okay what are you talking about."


Asad: "Well you."


Zoya: "Oh your good"


Asad: "What?"


Zoya: "Your good"


Asad: No"


Zoya: "Your good."


Asad: "Your getting me wrong"


Zoya: "Your fantastic"


Asad: "Im not"


Zoya: "You really are, I am impressed"


Asad: "Im not usually like this, im sorry"


Zoya: "oh, yes, you are."


Asad: "I can be fun if you want."


Zoya looked at him while he was talking


Asad: "I can be pensive uh smart, superstitious, brave, And uh, I can be anything you want me to be."


Asad: "Just tell me what you want me to be and ill be that for you."


Zoya: "You are dumb"


Asad: "I could be that."


Zoya smiled and walked away


Asad: "Oh come on, one date, what is gonna hurt"


Zoya skipped to her car and was about to sit down but looked back at him

Zoya: "Mhhm I dont think so."


Asad: "What can I do to change your mind."


Zoya: "Guess you will figure something out."


Zoya sat down in the car, the driver shut the door.


Later that night


Ayaan and Asad were walking towards the theather


Asad: "You sure she is going to come."


Ayaan: "Relax it is all set up, We're meeting up for the late show. Look, What did I tell you"


Ayaan and Asad walked over to where Humeria and Zoya were, who were standing at the entrance of theater


Humeria: "Oh my goodness, what a coincidence!"


Zoya took Humeria to the side


Humeria: Look who is here, Zoya you remember Asad right?"


Zoya: "Yes I remember"


Humeria: "Yeah"


Ayaan: "come here Humeria"


Humeria went to Ayaan and they kissed


Asad forward his hand for Zoya to shake


Asad: "Hi nice to see you again."


Zoya shook his hand


Zoya: "You too"


Asad: "You look great"


Zoya: "oh, Thanks"


Asad: "i mean, really, really great."


Ayaan came over to Asad and put his arm around his shoulder


Ayaan: "You do look great and Asad you look great and I know I look great so could we please go see this movie? The show is about to start"


Ayaan left inside with Humeria, Asad moved to the side of Zoya and pointed towards the door of the theater


Asad: "After you"


Asad was bored watching the movie, he was looking around in the theather, Zoya who was sitting in the seat front him was taking off her coat, Asad saw her, she looked back and saw him looking at her, Asad looked towards the screen and smiled, he got up from his seat and went to sit next to Zoya, Humiera and Ayaan weren't even watching the movie they were busy kissing each other. Zoya was eating popcorn and Asad was just staring at her, After the movie was over, Ayaan ran out of the theater and went towards his car, Humeria who was coming behind him with Zoya and Asad


Humeira: "What happened in that movie."

Zoya shook her head and let out a laugh


They got the car, Ayaan opened the door for Humeria


Ayaan: "Here you go my lady"


Humeria: "Thank you."


He closed the dooor


Asad walked closer to Zoya and whispered in her ears


Asad: "You want to walk with me."


Zoya: "Yeah sure"


Ayaan: "What are you guys doing"


Humeria: "Whats going on"


Asad looked towards them


Asad: "We are going to walk"


Ayaan: "Do you guys love each other."


Asad started laughing


Zoya came forward to Humeria hugged her goodbye


Ayaan: "huh? I get it you guys do love each other."


While hugging Zoya, humeria said


Humeira: "Dont do anything that I wouldn't do."


Zoya smiled at her and left with Asad


Asad: "Okay goodbye."


Ayaan and Humeria left in their car


Asad and Zoya were walking on the sidewalk


Zoya: "That was fun"


Asad: "Mhmm"


Zoya: "I havent seen a movie since ages."


Asad smiled


Asad: "really?"


Zoya: mm-mh"


Zoya: "Not since I was a little kid."


Asad: What?"


Zoya: No I uh, Im busy, I dont have a lot of time"


Asad: "your busy"


Zoya: "yes, I have a very strict schedule, my days are all planned out, I get up in the morning, get all my classes done, tutors, lunch, Tennis lesson, dance lesson and sometimes both, piano lesson, then I eat dinner, after dinner I spent time with my family, and then I catch up on my reading and shows"


Asad: "Wow, sounds like the road to success."


Zoya: "oh you bet."


Zoya: "we're applying to all these colleges, I want to get in one of which we decide."


Asad: "And who is we?"


Zoya: "what?"


Asad: "you just said we're applying to and we decide?"


Zoya: "Oh Mom and Dad, we decide everything together"


Asad: "Everything."


Zoya: "No, not everything, but the important things, yes


Asad: "And then everything else, you get to decide all by yourself."


Zoya hit his arm and laughed


Zoya: "Don't be rude"


Asad: "Im sorry."


Asad: "Just trying to figure out what you do for fun."


Zoya: "What do you mean."


Asad: "I mean, I dont know. I mean all those things are things you have to do, right?"


Zoya looked towards him


Asad: "So, what do you do because you want to."


Zoya: "I just told you."


Asad chuckled a little


Asad: "I dont know, this surprises me"


Zoya: "Why?"


Asad: "I always figured you were kind of"


Zoya: "Kind of what."


Asad: "Just... free."


Zoya: "What"


Asad: "free"


Zoya: "I am free."


Asad: "You dont seem like it."


Zoya: "Well I am."


Asad and zoya stopped walking a just looked at each other, after a minute Asad started walking


Asad: "come here I want to show you something."

Asad was walking to the middle of the street


Zoya: "Asad what are you doing."


Asad: "Just come on."


Zoya: "You are going to get run over."


Asad looked far away and and saw no cars


Asad: "by all the cars?"


Asad laid on the street in front of the traffic light, Zoya walked up to him


Asad: "My dad and I use to come here and lay down on the street and just watch the traffic light change colors from red to yellow and then finally green."


Asad lifted his head up to see her


Asad: "You could try, If you wantto"


Zoya: "No"


Asad: Why not?"


Zoya: "Because--- I dont know, will you just get up"


Asad: "That is your problem, you know that, you dont do what you want."


Zoya looked around the streets


Zoya: "Okay fine."


She laid next to Asad , closed her eyes and let out a breat, she tilted her head back to see if a car was coming or not, which it wasn't, she looked over to Asad and he looked at her and smiled


Zoya: "what if a car come."


Asad: "we die."


Zoya: "What?"


Asad: "Just relax! And trust me."


Asad: "you need to learn how to trust."


Zoya: "Okay."


Zoya fixed her dress that she was wearing


Zoya: "Painting"


Asad" Hmm?"


Zoya: "you aked me what I do for me"


Asad: "What now"


Zoya: "I love to paint"


Asad: "Yeah?"


Zoya: "Mmh" nodded her head


Zoya: "Most of the time, I have all these thought bouncing around in my head, but with a brush in my hand the world just gets kind quite"

Zoya and Asad eyes were closed they were enjoying this time relaxing, but a honk the car made their eyes open wide, they lifted their head up and saw a car couple of meters away they got and ran to the sidewalk, Zoya bumped into the brickwall, they guy who was in the car screamed at them for laying on the streets, Once the car disappeared Zoya started laughing and hitting the brick wall, Asad looked at her


Asad: "Are you okay."


Zoya was still laughing


Asad: "Why are you laughing."


Asad chuckled


Zoya: "oh that was fun."


Asad smiled at her and was staring at her, Zoya looked at him


Asad: "you want to dance with me?"


Zoya: "Sure."


Asad walked towards and held out his hands


Zoya: Now?"


Asad: "Yes now."


Zoya: "here, not suppose to dance in the middle if the street."


Asad: "Who said dance in the street."


Zoya: And we don't have music."

Asad: "Well, we will make some."


Asad took Zoya by her waist, She put her hands on his shoulder and held his other hand in the air, they started doing the waltz, Asad started to sing Tum hi Ho, and they dance under the moonlight looking into each other eyes


Zoya: "You are terrible singer"


Asad laughed


Zoya: "but I love this song."


Zoya and Asad were lost in each other, they didn't even notice that it was dawn already, Zoya put her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes and just danced with him till she couldn't even feel her feet


Flashback ended(Duke Just reading to the old lady)



Duke: "Asad and Zoya gave a remarkably convincing portrayal of a boy and a girl traveling down a very long road with no regards for the consequences"


Old lady: "They fell in love didn't they?"


Duke: "Yes, they did."


Old lady: "Good, I like these kind of stories, go on."


Here you go guys!! another updatee!! Hope you guys love it! Im not getting enough likes on this story as I thought I would! So Im thinking of discontinuing it! After this update I will make up my mind to continue or not!


If you guys want this story to keep going give me atleast 50 likes! I sent out about 113 PMs so yeah! Thanks

I sent PMs to people who actually like and read my stories(I think)! So I dont know! Maybe i have to make PM list for all 3 stories and put them up!

Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago
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