SEHAN 4 shots with sahil-KABHI ALVIDA NA KEHNA PART 2 UPDATED

Hey friends i m here with a sehan story i know it's crap it's my first time i wrote the dialogues in hindi because in emotional scenes hindi dialogues have more impact
It will b in 4-5 short parts plz say if i should continue or not after reading the first part
PART-1
Seher was feeling restless since rehan left for the airport
She was sitting in her room thinking of their moments together
She was holding the taveez which fell from rehan's neck in her hand
Seher-"Bappa!please rehan ko hamesha salamat rakhna!maine apni zindagi ke 22 saal sirf paiso ki laalach me guzare!kitne logo ko loota,lekin jab rehan meri zindagi me ae tab mujhe pehli baar ehsaas hua ki is duniya me paiso se bardhkar bhi koi cheez hoti hai aur wo hai pyaar!"
"Rehan ne mujhe mohabbat karna sikhaya!"
"Jab unhone mujhe khud se door jane ke liye kaha to mai bilkul toot gai mujhe laga ki shayad wo sab sirf ek chalawa tha ek baar phir zindagi ne mujhe usi jagah la ke khada kar diya!"
She said remembering that night
"Mujhe taumra iss baat ka afsos rahega ki kyu mai razia ki baton me ayi jiski wajah se aaj sanam aur ahil ek dusre se juda hai"
"Mujhe yaad hai ki kaise mai sanam k liye ahil ki mohabbat ka mazak banaya karti thi par rehan ki wajah se mujhe pata chala ki mohabbat duniya ki sabse haseen ehsas hai!
Bas ab jaldi se ahil ko tanveer ki sacchai pata chal jae uske baad hum sab sath rahenge!"
HAMESHA!
Here she was imagining their beautiful future together oblivious of the fact that destiny had something else in store for them!

Good part

its awsome.continue soon... pl pl pl pl pl...dnt knw shw me kya dikhega bt ho sake to sahil,sehan individualy or four of thm togethr li8 hearted or jiju-sali scene uptd karna..age apki marzi...stry apki ha...actualy serial me jo ho raha ha uske baad i jst wish...😕agar apko bura laga ho to sorry😛.its jst my wish...😉

Originally posted by: SONU2408

its awsome.continue soon... pl pl pl pl pl...dnt knw shw me kya dikhega bt ho sake to sahil,sehan individualy or four of thm togethr li8 hearted or jiju-sali scene uptd karna..age apki marzi...stry apki ha...actualy serial me jo ho raha ha uske baad i jst wish...😕agar apko bura laga ho to sorry😛.its jst my wish...😉

yeah sure i will try
it's my first experiment on writing
so i m kinda nervous
i will definitely try to fulfill ur wish

Amazing start! Do continue soon...

PART 2 ON THE AIRPORT ROAD Ahil-Damn!iss car ko bhi abhi puncture hona tha. He said and kicked the punctured tyre Sanam ko call karta hun!
AHIL-Hello sanam? Sanam-Aap kaha hai ahil?hum dono kab se apka intezar kar rahe hai! AHIL-sanam actually meri car kharab ho gai hai.yaha samne ek mandir hai tum Suleiman chacha ke sath yaha a jao Sanam-ji Sanam-baba chaliye! SC-kahan beti? Sanam-yaha paas me ek mehfoos jagah hai
And they left for the temple In the temple near the pool Ahil-chacha apka bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne mujhe sacchai batane ka faisla kiya.bataiye mujhe kaun hai wo shaksh jisne mujhe fasaya tha.kaun hai mere abbu ka katil (tanveer is still in the car to reach the temple ASAP as sanam 2 has informed her about ahil's location) SC-Beta!wo shakhs koi aur nahi balki tum..tumhari am..ammi hai! Ahil is shocked and sanam is relieved Ahil-ye...ye aap kya keh rahe hai chacha!aisa kaise ho sakta hai?me..meri ammi aisa nahi kar sakti. Aapko zaroor koi galat fehmi hui hai SC-nahi ahil beta.hum bilkul sach keh rahe hai. And he narrated the whole incident which took place that night to ahil Ahil was in tears n he was going to collapse when sanam supported him and held him firmly
Just then tanveer reached there with revolver She saw Suleiman was leaving and ahil was in devastated state and sanam was holding him She understood that ahil has got to know the whole truth
Tanveer to herself-bahut hua ye khel.hum thak chuke hai roz roz ki musibat se Hum to yaha Suleiman ko marne ae the par jab ahil ab sab kuch jaan hi chuka hai to kyu na usi ka kaam tamam kar de Na rahega baas aur na bajegi basuri She aimed the gun towards ahil Meanwhile rehan who was going back after having an one-to-one talk with bappa on his biwi jaan's insistence saw her mother aiming at ahil He was shocked Rehan-ahil bhaiii...i Tanveer fired the gun Rehan was running to save his brother As soon as he reached his brother he pushed ahil on sanam and the bullet hit him Rehan-AM..MII SANAM AND AHIL LOOKED AT THE DIRECTION WHERE REHAN WAS LIFTING HIS HAND AND FOUND TANVEER STANDING WITH A GUN LOOKING SHOCKED THE GUN FELL FROM TANVEER'S HAND AND REHAN FELL INTO THE POOL! TO BE COTINUED!! How was it guys ?yes tanveer is exposed!

update kab kar rahe ho?realy need ths 4 refreshment...😔...

Originally posted by: SONU2408

update kab kar rahe ho?realy need ths 4 refreshment...😔...

update pl...😆

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second part update kiya h wo padha??

Originally posted by: ankiecool

second part update kiya h wo padha??

Originally posted by: SONU2408

ya...jis din updt kia usi din...bt read it by phn to cmnt nehi kar payi...& uske baad rehan k maut ka shock...sorry...😛

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same here i haven't started to write the next part yet but i will start writing tomorrow