Thread#1 AsYa FF 'Woh Humsafar Tha!!!' Thread#2 Page 1

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Woh Humsafar Tha!!!


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Prologue:

The members of Khan Family were present there except Asad... Zoya asked Ayan to bring him here just for a few minutes... Asad didn't want to face her but he gave in on Ayan's insist and came in the hall... all were confused because Zoya was going to tell them something important...
Zoya: Asad I know you didn't want to come and hear me out but trust me I will not bother you in future...
Asad was looking to the other side and she assumed that he wanted her to continue with her talk... Zoya came to Dilshad and held her hands...
Zoya: phupi aap ne hamesha mujhe apny bachon ki tarha pyaar dia aur shayad yehi wajah hai ke aaj aapi or jeeju ko kho deny ke bad bhi mjhy yakeen hai ke meri phupi mujhe akela nahi chorengi... she looked towards Asad... you always loved me more than Asad and maybe that's the reason you are happy and sad at the same time... Asad aur mere sath jo bhi hua uski saza aap sabko bhi mili hai aur...
Asad: tumhe ammi se bat karni thi toh mera time kyun waste kar rahi ho...
Zoya: mjhy aap se bhi bat karni hai... she looked back at Dilshad and continue... aap kehti thein ke ek larki apni zindagi main teen janam leti hai... pehla, jab wo beti ban kar apny maa baap ki zindagi main aati hai... dusra, jab wo kisi ki biwi banti hai... she looked at Asad... or teesra, jab wo maa banti hai... aap ne hamesha mera sath dia hai kya app mere is aakhri janam main mujhe dua dy sakti hain...
Dilshad: Zoya tum aisy kyun bat kar rahi ho beta... meri dua hamesha tumhare sath hai... she said with teary eyes...
Zoya: I know bohat zaida maang rahi hoon par is waqt mujhe sab se zaida apki zaroorat hai... ho saky toh mujhe maaf kar dejieye ga phupi, mene aap sab ko bohat hurt kiya hai par phir bhi aap se kuch maangna chahti hoon, will you come to New York with me going against Asad's wish... she asked with lots of hopes...
Dilshad: New York kyun Zoya???
Zoya: phupi main wapis ja rahi hoon... yeh ghar mera nahi raha aur wese bhi ab is ghar pe kisi aur ka haq hai... she said looking at Asad...
Ayan: ek minute Mona tum wapis ja rahi ho or tumne hume btaya bhi nahi...
Haider: haan Zoya tum aisi halat main nahi ja sakti...
Zoya: I need to go guys, yahan mujhe har pal ehsaas hota hai ke meri wajah se aapi or jeeju... she looked down as fresh tears brimmed in her eyes...
Ayan: Anwer mamu or Zeenat aapi ki moat ek hadsa thi Mona... he said cupping her face...
Zoya: nahi Ayan aapi jeeju mere pass aa rahy thy... agar woh yahan Bhopal main hote to shayad hum sab ek saath hote...
Haider: par tum wapis kyun ja rahi ho... please don't go... I have already lost my family Zoya, now I can't let you go... he pleaded...
Zoya: bachon ki tarha rona band karo mujhe Asad se bhi bat karni hai...
Taking a deep breath she came to Asad while Asad fisted his hand and composed himself as he didn't want to lash out on her...
Zoya: Asad sab se pehly main apko congratulate karna chahati hoon... I'm happy that you moved on but please do me a favor, Sara ko meri taraf se sorry bol dena...
Asad: bol lia jo bolna tha... can I leave now... he asked angrily...
Zoya: Asad mujhe nahi pata hum dono ke sath jo hua us main apki galti thi ya meri par jo bhi hua wo acha nahi hua...
Asad: everything happens for a good reason only, and if I'm not wrong you are the one who taught me this illogical fact...
Zoya: yeah... to be honest I don't know what you want from our relation but Asad I don't want you to bear it because of me... main apko is rishte se azadi dena chahti hoon... she said looking in his eyes...
Asad: tumhe bhi toh is rishte se azadi chahiye Zoya... he replied controlling his emotions...
Zoya: but it's not possible because of my pregnancy, well you don't need to worry at all...
Asad: what do you mean???
Zoya: you know how much I yearned for my father's love... no doubt aapi and jeeju gave me love anyone could have wished for but the emptiness was there... then you came in my life and fill it with noting but happiness, you gave me your name... Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan... but Allah Has planned something else for us, that's why I myself wants to separate my name from yours...
Asad: hey wait a sec, you are forgetting something, Siddiqui Sahab had already accepted you as his daughter so congratulations Zoya Siddiqui... he spoke sarcastically...
Zoya: thank you but no thank you... when I left this house, I didn't go to my father and seek shelter from him but that's not what I want to discuss... see you only need to bear me for five months I guess and later you can marry Sara...
Asad: but I don't need your permission to marry Sara, I can marry her without divorcing you...
Zoya: you can't divorce me Asad...
Asad: not now, but after your delivery I can... he replied calmly but only his heart knew how hard it was for him...
Zoya: Asad you can't...
Asad: but why, care to explain... he asked annoyingly...
Zoya: I was 2 months pregnant when doctors told me to abort the baby but I didn't want to do that sin and after my first trimester, I was being told that now I can't even abort if I want to... I can't deliver my baby normally so only cesarean case is left and considering the complications doctors can't save both of us...
All were shocked to hear this while Asad was rooted to his spot...
Zoya: I have already told doctor Neil to save my child in fact I have signed the form too as I don't want to bother anyone... so you don't need to divorce me Asad... she spoke with teary eyes...
Asad was numb, he had never imagined Zoya would be going through all this and he didn't even have any idea about it...
Zoya: I know you don't want me in your life but maybe it's written in our destiny and I have to live being Mrs. Asad Ahamd Khan... last five months of my life, I hope you allow it... she asked hopefully...
Ayan: are you out of your mind Mona, what the hell are you talking??? he asked her angrily...
Zoya: yehi sach hai Ayan aur haan yeh kuch papers hain jo tumhare kaam ayenge... she said handling him some papers...
Ayan and Haider hurriedly went through the papers...
Haider: tum aisa kese kar sakti ho Zoya... tum hosh main ho??? He asked holding her by her arms...
Zoya: hosh main hoon tabhi yeh sab kar rahi hoon, mai nahi chahti mere jaane ke baad Asad ko koi bhi pareshani ho...
Ayan and Haider looked at her in disbelief, what the hell she was doing??? Where Haider was trying to understand from his sister's POV, Ayan was more than angry, he held out those papers in front of her and asked...
Ayan: you have put my and Haider's name as guardians of your child, have you lost it???
Zoya: I don't want my child to come between Asad and Sara... she replied confidently...
Ayan: tumhara dimag kharab ho chuka hai...
Zoya: think whatever you want, Haider can you drop me at the airport... I'm getting late for my flight...
Haider: Zoya tum aisy nahi ja sakti... it's my nikah today aur tum yeh gift de rahi ho...
Zoya: I'm sorry but I have to go, are you coming or I should go on my own...
Zoya bid her final good bye to everyone and looked at Asad for the last time...
Asad (in thoughts): don't go... mat jao Zoya... please...
Zoya (in thoughts): stop me for once Asad... stop me please...
Bicharty Waqt Un Aankhon Main Thi Hamari Ghazal
Ghazal Bhi Wo Jo Kisi Ko Kabhi Sunai Na Thi
Zoya left for the airport with Haider while Ayan tagged them along, what if he was angry, he can't let her Mona go like that...



Note: Hi... i know sabko laga hoga sad story hai but trust me its just a Love Story... with some twists... what had happened between AsYa ??? and don't bash on Asad plzzz... is bar Zoya ki bhi galti hai so both are responsible for their messed up married life... i will update this one after finishing SNM but let me clear one thing no sad ending... i m saddist but not cruel... i love AsYa so i m here but trust me they will resolve everything soon... Part 1 will start from AsYa or yeh intro bas sabko tease karny k liye tha... i know i m bad but paka AsYa sath hi rahengy hamesha... Ashii's Plomishhh...

PS: Jas, Arzoo, Affu, Ammu, Nilu, Niya, Anopama, Mayur, Abi, Asif, Hena, Cinderella, Mags, Sasir, Jillo, Suni, and my readers I can bet that u will Love sooo give it a chance...


Sooo that's it...
ignore my mistakes plzzz...
hit like n leave ur replies...
criticism is welcome...
Ashii...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Index:

Prologue Above

Part 1 Page 74
Part 2 Page 85
Part 3 Page 101
Part 4 Page 113


Edited by AkaiBara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres

Rula diya mujhe😭😭
Itna dard hai iss story main💔
Asya married hain🥳
Zoya preggy hai
Asad Sarah se nikah karna chata hai😲
Seems like Humsafar dono main koi MU hai jiski wajah se woh Zoya se hate karta hai
iss liye apne bache ke bare main bhi na soch dusri shaadi karna chahta hai😲
Zoya is very deeply hurt 😭
but Asad ko blame nahi kar rahi
Sarah jarur Billi ki biradri ki hai😡😡
Married man ke piche padi hai psyco kameeni🤬
Delivery main koi 1 bachega Zoya ne sabko bta diya😲
Asad shocked hai wants 2 keep her but phir bhi jane de raha hai😭
Rook lo apni Zindgi ko AAK
Zindagi 1 safar hai suhana yahan kal kya ho kisne jana😭

PS- mujhe senti kar diya tune Ashi😭
i know u said happy ending toh woh hogi but mujhe but Ashi i want 2 know kya isme aisa hoga ki end tak struggle chalta rahega aur last part main Asya 1 honge toh koi fayda nahi mere liye main nahi padungi cuz end happy hoga but baki sare parts toh emotinal sad rone wale honge na

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res...
unres...
whenr u going to update this one... I m already hooked to this one...
ashi ji agay badho hum tumhare sath hai... 😆
mujhe pata hai tu asya ko alag nai karegi...
I trust u and afu fr that 😉
conyinue with this one soon... ab ye mat bolna k tujhe to pata hai story jas naraz hojayegi 😆😆😆
Edited by aarzoo50 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res😎😲😎😈 unres
omg its a sad story🥺
sad sad😡😡
asad nd zoya divorce...
kyon dhoor jaa rahi hai zoya wht the hell😕
mystery kya hai...😕
asya thadap thadap ke iss dil main
wht was this...
sarah kon hai stupid...😡
and wht the hell is wrong wth aak...for him love is a waste of time huh😡
and zoya preggy hai🤢
aur asad is ready to leave preggy zoya🤢
and zoya aur bacche main sirf ek zinda reh sakta hai😲
kitni na in safi hai baiya...😲
btw its awesome blosme😎 story just loved it😎 but sad one..thadap thadap one...nd I hope zoya ko kuch na ho...ending happy chayiye otherwise will not read this🤢
and hate tht cheapo sarah...sahara desert huh😡😡
Edited by jilmil.1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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My God !! This girl never lets a chance to fascinate me !!


New FF !! 🥳

My Heart felt congratulations may you win all the readders heart with your this awesome piece of writing !! 👍🏼


And about the Story ...
Thumbs up from my side Dee !! 👍🏼
Loving the concept...😳
But when did you started writing sad one ??😲

Zoya leaving to New York..
Married to Asad !!
Being Pregnant
Going to Die in 5 months ..
And Child will be with Ayaan ..Ayaan ?? Why why why ??

And this Asad,
why is he so angered and hiding his real emotions from her ??
taunting her about her Father G.A.S !!
So something went wrong in mid ...
wondering what it is ...

Why is planning to get married to Sarah ??
Hell with Sarah!!
I hate her now...

Fine he does not what;s her to leave..
But why didn't he even react when she said she is pregnant ??
Ok..So Asad miyah is hiding feelings ...

Equal share of guilt and anger towards each other ..
So ..Zoya stupid is waking away...
Let's see who stops who and who goes with who ..

Awesome Story Plot !! Hooked up to Prologue itself..🤪
Loving this piece of work of yours too .😳
Beautifully Written !! 👏
Keep Writing More ...⭐️

My Evil mind is all ready to see more saddy and painful updates ..😈But yet I know u are not a sadist !!🤔So,shape it in your way ..👍🏼
and I would obviously love that too .. 👏

Banner looks so so beautifulll !!


Continue soon Mam !! and No Thanks for Pm.as Isn't that your duty ??
😎

Love you so much !! Keep Dazzling :)

Edited by Aishwa09 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start. ..
Bt sad one...
Zoya is going away ...
What happened between asya...
Both didn't want to go away from each other bt still they are .
Hope sad will stop her .
Don't let anything happen to our zoya...
Wonderful story
Waiting for 1 part
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Awesome start. ..

Bt sad one...
Zoya is going away ...
What happened between asya...
Both didn't want to go away from each other bt still they are .
Hope sad will stop her .
Don't let anything happen to our zoya...
Wonderful story
Waiting for 1 part
Update soon


yashii 🤗
zoya ko kuch nahi hoga...
or asad zoya dono ki galti hai or EGO ufff...
i knw sady tha par start or end mast sa hoga...
haan yh mid se tha to sady sady...
part 1 jald hi ayega...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishwa09

Congratulations Ms.Dazzler !!


Aish 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yashii Aishh i forgot ur name in the list...
sowwyyy...
so here is ur special announcement...

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