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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: kmh2lover
Res!
Girl be back on her writing grinddd.

Excuse my wanna-be-hood phase LOL.

LMFAO AARTI!

Watchuuu saying bae? Oh man, I remember when everyone used to talk like that, ahaha.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: canoodle

You've done it again, I am in love with everything you write. You had me at the first line, I love how you write Sanam as a doctor, I think this is the second time you've done it?

Aahil as a hot cricket player, yes, I can totally see that. And I love the little touches of AsYa in the chapter. I didn't expect the sorry from Aahil after the start Sanam and Aahil had but I like where this is going.

Karan sounds like a little ball of cuteness. Aww, Sanam is already falling for him and Aahil is so sweet. I can't wait to see where you take this. Eagerly awaiting the other parts.

-Meera

Aw, thanks Meera bby! And idk why but I think Sanam would make an awesome doctor since she is so kind and patient yet so confident and headstrong. Plus, she seems to know a lot of things (i.e how to fix Nazia/Shazia) and the whole taking care of Aahil part.

And the cricket thing was from when they were discussing "Haya aur Faiz ke bache" and she wanted Aahil to teach them cricket b/c he is good at it.

I'll be updating soon! But I haven't seen you around campus forever, where you at girl? :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: suni_104
Superb start
Sanam doctor ahil cricketer
Karan was cute
Do pm me next part

I am gonna add you as a friend, and then you'll automatically be on my pm list :)

Originally posted by: bindasss
You have me hooked to another one of your absolutely amazing works! Karan sounds like the definition of adorable! And Aahil as a hot indian cricket player? Omg! Soo hawtt! And i love Sanam as a doctor! Cant wait for the rest of the story! Please continue soon and also please pm further updates of possible! Thanks!

THANKS GIRLLL. I will send out PMs when I update next, so be on the look out I guess.

Originally posted by: -Awaari-
OMG OMG OMG...I have a gut feeling im gonna fall in love with this one <3

I like your gut feeling girl! LOL.

Originally posted by: najma123
Great! Sanam is a doc... Again. I thought the douchebag who wanted to ask her out all the time was Aahil. LOL. Brilliant... Will you do me a favour by PMing every time you update anything? Old or new? I am kinda losing track of it all... I hardly get update PMs anymore... So many stories are gone! Like WHOOSH!😆

HEY GIRLLL! LOL, I can't even imagine that because Aahil is so sauve, ugh, but you've just given me an idea for another OS or something. I will PM you for sure, I am pretty sure you're on my friend list so you'll get the PM when I send them out! :)

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Anjali you are back🥳 and that with a beautiful story. Really how do you come up with such lovely track. Its unbeleivble, aw aahil as the cricket caption and he is so sweet to karan. Sanam the tigeress😆. Now to the story, its a spelendid narration so vivd and so endearing. Bless you dear, for writing such lovely stories and making us so happy. Proud to be reading your stories👍🏼

OH HEY! :) Awww, thank you so much. LOL, this one came to me while I was at the hospital (I work there as a research assistant right now) and I was kind of like "wouldn't it be so cool if Aahil was Sanam's patient" and then my hamster in my brain started running on it's wheel. Thank you so much, I am glad to like my stories bby! <3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Amazing!!

Love Aahil as the patient and Sanam's as a doctor!

Karan and Aahil's part was adorable!

Poor Karan! Feel so sad for him!

Can't wait for the next part!!

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Pagalpinky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Ahhh
This story is soo good

Love that she's a doctor and she's fiesty love it!
He's a hot cricket player uff can so see that!

Am loving where this is going
I was so excited that you wrote something new that I didn't even comment on your clueless thread oops
Thanks!

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Preeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

superb start
thanks for the pm

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Tadibaaaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Awesome start

i am really a big fan of your writing

I was sad that clueless is getting over but

this gavve me something wonderful to read .

wating for the next part.

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Esha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Wow gurl!!! This one is really interesting! All of ur stories are interesting, including this one! I love the premise! Aahil as a hot cricketer and Sanam as a doctor 😉 Sounds awesome! She is already starting to feel something for him Would love a bit of his perspective too lol So Zoya is a fan... I have a feeling that AAK wont be too happy with the two important women in his life going gaga over Aahil lmao Karan's story was sad but he is so cute! Loved it ❤️ Plz update the other parts soon! Amazing concept!

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Nice start dear
Sanam as doctor & aahil as cricketer.
He was grumpy bc of his injury. Sanam realise his fear & assured him that he will start playing in few months. Karan was cute & biggest fan of aahil. Their meeting & talks were wonderful. Aahil was shocked to hear his illness. He asked sanam whether he take him to field for play. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm