|SaHil SS: Appetence ft. AsYa & SeHan| [Complete]

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Loved, loved, loved it! 👏 Beautiful ending to a beautiful story. It was great how disappointed Aahil was not to win Asad over after practicing for 4 hours. And how he made Sanam promise to listen to it all before proposing. cute story. Hope to read many more from you.

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siyasharma94

@siyasharma94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Beautifuly written..
Amazing epiologue..

Do write more.. 😊

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Nice update
Liked the way aahil proposed.
It was a beautifully written story
Thanks for pm

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Oh this was so beautiful
I've been checking this forum waiting for an update and it was perfect

Ahil and sanam are just adorable. So real and perfect. Loved the proposal and him scared of asad so true!

Zoya and asad totally miss em. They are so funny and super cute. The three girls :) It's so strange that theyre all played by surbhi but they feel like completely different ppl. That's all in the amazing acting and your fantastic writing skills!

Ayaan ohhh nice to see him again and love how you added all the cute little things of the show

Seher and Rehaan they're so cute and lovey dovey.

Especially loved the last part and how you wrote it from all of their points of view. It was a perfect ending

Amazing sweet quick no-Tanveer story
Thanks so much!!

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Love it

Amazing ending

U as a writer always leaves me gushing

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@ChamakChallo91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Comment updated on pg 18 :)

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Megha

@arshilicious.M

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

i really loved this ff...its very different from others gathering everyones povs!!]

aur shabd nahi hai yaar...its too unique to be described!

just wanna say that i loved ur writing style and i wanna read many more such happy stories with no bad cicumstances or villains!

sometimes villains r too much nd v need a break frm villain story!