Asad-Zoya FF: The Sun Has Set Chapter 12 Page 102 - Page 64

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Noe123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: EkPagliLadki

Loved the update! Thanks for the pm.


Thank you for reading and commenting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankahee

Res 🤗

Happy New Year!!!

Such a long, nice chapter after so long, it was a good read indeed. So this is the last chapter for past? I am going to miss tbe beauticul darjeeling and tbe tea gardens and the soft rains and that old graveyard.

My firstt feeling, Ahsaan is somehow related to Gold family, just the way his interaction was with Mrs.Gold. He couldn't access the library either. Zoe did and that zlight grudge that she could while he could not was obvious😊 I liked how that interaction took place, the whole visit. Seems like Ahsaan and Robert get along well. And the backdrop of labour issues with the burning, and the short trip Assam, I feel this all is going to get tied up, in a way. Waiting for that part, maybe it won't, will have to wait for you to complete the story Noe 😛

The whole nikaah and the constant issues on the estate, set a kind of grim tone, kind of a constant reminder of how things are in flux, not settled. The way Ahsaan had to be away, and how they were not getting enough time to spend with each other. It has a sort of omnious feel, and i think I felt that way as we already know that he is missing. It was sad to see Ahsaan leave at tbe end, knowing that he is missing. The key is how we are perceiving tbe story, i feel missing, maybe others think dead. It is hard to see such a good character gone from the story, this way, so i am hoping that he is just missing at this point.

Having said this, really looking forward go the next parts of the stories. How this mystery going to end. Like I said befoe, cannot wait to read it all over again 😳

Good chapter and writing Noe, hopefully next one sooner... 😊



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You were here.

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I am going to miss Darjeeling as well. But who knows we may revisit it.

I like your thought about people's different perception for the character - dead or missing. Some want him dead. Some want him back. I think this is one of key pillar of a suspense story - people's views about a character and how they are challenged. I hope that what I have planned for all characters is accepted and I am not roasted alive for writing the way I am writing 😆

Thank you for lovely comments. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Well can we expect an Update...in this week...
HaD just completed ZOYA PROPOSES AND ASAD DISPOSES story yesterday...plannin to read SOMEWHERE IN TIME again tonight...
U should write more and frequently too...
Take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey noe..

great to see you with another awesome story

read all parts in one go..

I really loved it..

what's with the mystery of Asad/Ahsaan..

I think asad may have short term memory loss or something.

and about that birth mark, I think it may have been removed during an operation as he gets injured frequently (pretty badly in case of last time)

very good

update soonish and plz pm me

Khushi
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Posted: 9 years ago
one more thing..I had this feeling that the guy who died in the beginning of the first chapter is Ahsaan...am not sure but I have an inkling about it..!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow
As always wonderfully written
Awesome update 👏
Felt bad for zoya 😭
So now we are going to have all asya scene.
Waiting for next update
Hey dear do pm me😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
update update update..
2 weeks se zyada ho gye noe!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Please update now
Waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Noe
sorry I m really late😳
but loved d detailed updt
so Zoya's past is very much covered now
Zoya really had a tough time since d start
Ahsaan did seemed distant from her she always was carving 4 his attention
Yes he cared about her & Dillu & was always respectful but there was lack of love which Zoya wanted & deserved 😔
We can say she was hopelessly in love wid him but he wasn't
this quality too gives me d idea that he can b Asad as our Asad too is very strict & proper in his conduct keeping mind in his business so this makes me wonder 😆
what so ever 4 now I will enjoy d coming part hope u won't make Zoya cry too much cuz that's really difficult thing 2 read 😳

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