Asad-Zoya FF: The Sun Has Set Chapter 12 Page 102

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#611

Thank you for the update. This chapter does close a lot of loose ends and now, it makes sense. Looking forward to the present.

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#612

Superb update

U showed their past completely

Ahsaan was always shy

And they consummated due to bhang effect

He was caring and responsible

But did he love zoya

A lot is going in my mind

Don't know when will everything get cleared

Waiting eagerly to read more

Update soon

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Antara123

@Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#613

Nice update Noe! Though Zoya and Ahsaan, and Dilshad are annoying. LOL. I SO MISSED ASAD in this chapteer. Ajsaan ay have Asad's face. Byt, Asad is Asad. xD I so want Ahsaan to be some crank or some honest guy who is vanished or dead. Dont want him again. LOOL. Asad, and Asad and Asad is more than enough. Love. <3 Update soon. And i think they are 2 different men. Or. Asad disguised as some botansit came there for investigation. But my gut feel says they are different men. lol. So long.

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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Posted: 9 years ago

#614

Awesome & Interesting Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Was Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Beautifully Written...⭐️

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#615

Awesome update 👏
So did Ahsaan loved her? 😕
Plzzz continue soon 😳

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EkPagliLadki

@EkPagliLadki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#616

Loved the update! Thanks for the pm.

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#617

Nice update

Full on past

So he agreed to marry her

He never confessed love to her he was always with himself

He consummated after she drunk him

Wonder if he have recollection of tht night

So after her was still distant and secretive

And one day he left to never return

So hope from next update we see what becomes of zoya

Will ACP take care of her or not

Continue

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#618

Res 🤗

Happy New Year!!!

Such a long, nice chapter after so long, it was a good read indeed. So this is the last chapter for past? I am going to miss tbe beauticul darjeeling and tbe tea gardens and the soft rains and that old graveyard.

My firstt feeling, Ahsaan is somehow related to Gold family, just the way his interaction was with Mrs.Gold. He couldn't access the library either. Zoe did and that zlight grudge that she could while he could not was obvious😊 I liked how that interaction took place, the whole visit. Seems like Ahsaan and Robert get along well. And the backdrop of labour issues with the burning, and the short trip Assam, I feel this all is going to get tied up, in a way. Waiting for that part, maybe it won't, will have to wait for you to complete the story Noe 😛

The whole nikaah and the constant issues on the estate, set a kind of grim tone, kind of a constant reminder of how things are in flux, not settled. The way Ahsaan had to be away, and how they were not getting enough time to spend with each other. It has a sort of omnious feel, and i think I felt that way as we already know that he is missing. It was sad to see Ahsaan leave at tbe end, knowing that he is missing. The key is how we are perceiving tbe story, i feel missing, maybe others think dead. It is hard to see such a good character gone from the story, this way, so i am hoping that he is just missing at this point.

Having said this, really looking forward go the next parts of the stories. How this mystery going to end. Like I said befoe, cannot wait to read it all over again 😳

Good chapter and writing Noe, hopefully next one sooner... 😊

Edited by Ankahee - 9 years ago

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Noe123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hey Noe..😊
Hope U r doing good...

Belated Happy New Year to you too Dear..😃

Yes, my dear friend, doing really good. Hope you are well, too! 😊

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Noe123

@Noe123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Very Good and Well written part Noe..
Though Ahsaan agreed to get hitched with Zoya still he was not into the marriage from the very start I feel...and if I am not wrong for the first time I have read that Ahsaan smiled on Zoya's antics...😕

Still Mrs.Gold seems to be a important character I guess...she seems interesting though...

But again...at the end what all happened...I feel sorry for Zoya and Dilshaad that both have to go through all this...

Intriguing part..

Continue soonish..😃