Asad-Zoya FF: The Sun Has Set Chapter 12 Page 102 - Page 15

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

very interesting! even i thought the storylinbe resembled 'kahani' bt no not really!!!...really looking forward to it!👍🏼

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Thank you very much.

Glad that you understand how much it is like Kahani and how much it does not.😊

Originally posted by: manognasai

Well...this seems to be very interesting and quite different from ur way of writing! 😃
Would love to read it...n know how the story unfolds...😊

Best part of the story is Asad in uniform...Always loved heroes in police uniform...❤️
Update soon...waiting😊

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Thank you. Glad that it is interesting enough. Yes, Asad in uniform 😃

Keep reading.

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Hey Noe. I loved the beginning and am intrigued to read further. Will appreciate if you could PM me for updates.

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Thank you. Will PM you. 😊

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Unresss
Wow mazaa aa gya pdh k. It was js brilliant 👏
I was so curious dat what will happen in d police office (d end of 1st chapter), I thot u'll continue from dere bt something different
Aah now I was thinking as where is our chirpy bubbly Zoya.. n now here she comes.. loving her character so full of life despite having so many problems
Dilshad, Zo's mum.. Wud love to read them together
Haha dat line (Jee? *she was annoyed at being ignored*) js cracked me up.. Shez sucha drama queen.. btw I guess, infact i can bet dat guy must b Asad or u can say her Ahsaan.. coz hez asking fr gold estate; where she resides n vid d cherry on top dilshad wants a tenant so now m sure he will live in their n acc to me dey must hv fallen in love den married n then d rest is obviously a mystery..
Kaise gayb hua n y asad is a look a like of ahsaan n most imp whose dat man from 1st chapter, at very beginning who was dying
Soo many things to unfold.. Oh.my.god m js loving dis mystery so much 😃

(Sry fr sucha late rply, was really busy vid exams n all)

Originally posted by: ..Radiance..

yayy a new story from ur side
this is the most different story from ur prev stories 😛
oh i would so love to read it 😳
and about ur dilemma i would prefer to read this one first. u can also start both 😆
pregnant zoya and ACP asad 🥳
haha when i started reading i too thought that it was going kahani way.😆
pls jaldi jaldi start karo.
thanks 4 pm.

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Yes, it is different from anything that I have written so far. Glad that readers are liking it.

Thanks for reading and commenting. 😃

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI

Mistery on very first chapter Too bad for readers
but plot is very intersting
asad as police officer suits him very well
ahsaan the present mistery man 😆
u always hav a mistery character in your story 😆
Wanna read "kahaani" of this story keep sending pms

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If you consider mystery to be bad, then it is going to be bad almost throughout the story as it is a mystery. 😛

I always have a mystery character in my story? Which other story had a mystery character? Curiouser and curiouser...😉

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: pumpkin.honey

oh.my.god m totally at a loss of words.
Incredibly beautiful 👏
U know, while reading I was getting super excited by every progress in d story... soo different, u hold an amazing capability girl 👍🏼
Suspense, mystery n all r my area of interest really n dark stories as well 😊
N dis suspense is so so soo exciting, before I guessed Asad to b her lost husband bt he was not, rather a cop, bt den again hez some humshakal of her lost hubby or what 😳
So now dear, m loving both of ur stories a lot.. So m leaving it up to u.. Decide which to update first.. Bt soon haan plzz 😳

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Thank you very much.

Glad that you liked the story a lot. Very encouraging response for a writer. I am trying my hands with new genre this time so let's see how it goes.

Keep reading and sharing your thoughts. 😃

IT SEEMS great i hope it has aLL the lost chemistry between zoya and asad, cant wait to read further plz update real soon

Exam time...will read it when I get some free time.. .

This "Kahaani" is indeed a "Kahaani"