New Asya SS: A gift from life, chap 15, 04-05-15 COMPLETED - Page 42

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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg wonderful update, u made me cried and I don't like this sufian.
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was so emotional and beautiful. ...loved it to bits...
So you did seperate them...
Now get them back together reaal fast. ...
Waiting impatiently for it to happen...
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Posted: 10 years ago
BTW thanks for the pm...do send me another one when you will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear
Your story is awesome
I have enjoyed reading it
two parts only :(
It is amazing I love it
I will read remaining parts also :)
You are a brilliant writer dear
I am little busy right now
Can you send me pms
Please :)
When you update :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
nooo it cant be true😭😭
this sufian🤬🤬 want to kill him
n how could he ask for sarah he doesnt have any right on her
now plz tell me you wont stretch this more😭😭
i was feeling really happy reading first part how asad was taking care of her n kids😃 that braid making scene was so cute
but this guy came n ruined everything 😔
hope you will update soon n give us some happy movements
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Posted: 10 years ago
When do we get the next chapter? ☺️ 😆

P.S I loved this chapter, you really have a good story going for this fiction.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arrrgh...i want to kill this sufiyan😡😡.
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why dont he leave zoya and sara alone...
plz update next part soon i cant bear this sepration...
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Posted: 10 years ago
C'est ce que l'on appelle un MEGA rebondissement 😆, on a eu la totale le retour de Sufian et la separation de Asad et Zoya par la meme occasion... Perso j'ai adore, je te cache pas que j'ai eu quelques larmes aux yeux snif 😭... Sufian est completement fele, il est persuade que Zoya est en danger avec Asad, son accident ne lui a pas laisse que des sequelles dans son corps, dans sa tete aussi je crois... Et il lui fait du chantage en touchant la corde sensible, sa fille Sarah.

"but fighting the mother was a battle lost in advance." c'est tellement vrai, c'est tres realiste bravo ! combien de femmes renoncent a leur bonheur en tant que femme pour le bien etre de leurs enfants, Sufian l'a bien compris a son grand bonheur et Asad aussi a son grand detriment 😭

Quand la petite Sarah a retrouve son papa ca m'a beaucoup emue, rien ne remplace un papa ou une maman aux yeux d'un enfant meme ceux de la pire espece et je comprends Zoya qui veut preserver la figure paternel pour sa fille... J'aime bien aussi ce cote de ton histoire, les enfants n'ont pas a subir les erreurs de leurs parents et c'est pour ca que j'apprecierais beaucoup que Sarah garde un regard positif sur son pere malgr son comportement detestable avec Zoya (juste une petite suggestion hein)... Les adultes doivent savoir regler leurs problemes sans impliquer les enfants et j'espere que Sufian le comprendra plus tard 😉

Quand Asad dit a Zoya "-I HAVE ALL THE RIGHTS" mon coeur a vibre et quand il lui dit "I have one regret, she looked up, is that I didn't kill him before he killed us." mon coeur s'est brise 💔😭

En tout cas la l'histoire va devenir encore plus interessante vu qu'ils sont amene a se revoir puisqu'elle est l'enseignante de son fils... Comment ils vont se comporter l'un avec l'autre ? Est-ce qu'il va lui en vouloir de l'avoir mis au second plan ? il va y avoir quelques etincelles dans l'air, plus la tension sexuelle... MAMAN ! J'ai trop hate de lire la suite... Bravo 👏 et ne tarde pas trop a nous mettre la suite


Desolee j'ai ecrit un pave, bonne chance pour la lecture 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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sorry again 4 d super late comnt Rada😳
update it was a roller-coaster ride
i loved d beginning Zoya also felt ill due 2 Asad's infection
so it was a switch situation 4 them where they exchanged places who takes care whom😆
i loved that scene when Asad tries 2 make Sarah's hair it was cutely hilarious😆
than came d bomb Sufian came back claiming he's changed & want 2nd chance😡
Loved ki Asad punched him😃
Zoya hid this from Asad very bad move & it backfired when Asad got 2 know that
they had a big fight when she said mean hurtful things 2 Asad & he left after some shouting but i loved Asad's part of dialogues very powerful⭐️⭐️⭐️
Even Sufian took advantage of this piece of knowledge when Zoya went 2 confront him & all those shit things he said Zoya still chose 2 b wid him doesn't matter even if its her majburi
So Zoya decided 2 leave Asad & chose Sarah even if she had 2 b wid Sufian😲
I get it any1 in her place do d same but Sufian asked her 2 stay away from Asad not that she have 2 allow him 2 stay wid them...or i m missing something😕
the ending wid Asya was brilliantly penned 👏
Asad left bcuz he wanted Zoya 2 fight 4 their love which she was not ready 4
great job again dear👏

PS- can i wish 2 see a scene i think i might look heartless but can't help it😳. So as i read in previous parts when Dillu caught Asya kissing in her monologue she was thinking how Asad married Ayat 4 her wish but never loved her & seeing him happy wid this new love how overjoyed she is & later after conversing wid Zoya she was sure Zoya is d 1 & perfect 4 her son. So after seeing her son shattered again after this break up i want her 2 go give Zoya a tight slap yes yes i want that😆 & after that bade bade dramatic dialogue which opens Zoya's eyes & awake her 2 fight 4 their love.😛 So this is d hidden motive of this slap & Dillu Zoe confrontation not just d slap & also bcuz we have so many Asya scenes but few wid Dillu so i want Dillu's smashing scene as i love her character so much from d show. She was excellent mother i think😊

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional update
Sufian entered in her life & she hide it from asad as she didn't want him to involve in any trouble. Liked the way asad punched him. Zoya in anger told harsh words to asad & got emotional after his reply. She went to him & apologised. Asad was arrested by Sufian complaint. He blackmailed Zoya & she agreed as any parent do the same. Both were broken & hope kids will play their part now. I have a question dear if Zoya was divorced, she can't live or marry with Sufian again so how he wanted her in his life. Plz update soon. Thanks for pm

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