New Asya SS: A gift from life, chap 15, 04-05-15 COMPLETED

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Awesome update dear
It was Sarah birthday. Zoya arranged the party & asad helped her. He bought a big teddy for Sarah. She was very happy to see her asad uncle there with gift. Asad wants a kiss from zoya as she gave it to salim but she gave it to teddy asad uncle. Asad kept his mouth shut bc she liked to irritate him. Sarah wish & zoya helplessness. He requested her to let him in & hold her. Make up thing was nice. Asad used his antics & zoya obliged what he said. She agreed to go on date with him but he refused as he wants zoya to enjoy not vice versa. He left for meeting & zoya was waiting for him like a wife. Their future convo was nice. Asad made her understand that she is strong women. Sarah is her strength so think abt that positive points & plan for future. Finally she confessed her feeling to sleeping asad. Asad was shocked to find her sleeping in his arms. He took her to her room & made a breakfast & note for her. Hope she will tell him soon. Sorry for being too late as I was very busy in last few days. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

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PrettYSmile

@PrettYSmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Heyyy rada!!...
SORRYY... For late reply
N like button not working...

N update, speechless yaar...
Surprised
Amazed
Emotional
Happy
Blush
Proud of asad
Cuter salim n Sarah...

ONLY U can do this...

Loveee you...

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

lovely lovely chapter
love is in the air...
zoya is close to breakdown...
waiting for that moment
continue soon

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Hey Dear,

The part was really nice. Finally the moment has come where Zoe has at least accepted to herself that she loves Asad, that's a good sign & start towards that beautiful future both of them have dreamt of.

Asad has been nothing short of a sweetheart over here, never forcing her into anything. He gave her all the time & space she required to get used to his presence & company, befriend him, accept him in her life, trust him with her past & open the doors of her heart for him. Seriously its damn hard to find a man like Asad who would wait so patiently and never react negatively to her rejections even though they did hurt him. Its his true love for her that's holding him there n giving him the courage n hope to dream of a future with her.

They do complete each other n their families. Its what their kids need the most at this time, the love of both parents. Lets see how their relationship goes ahead now.

I loved Asad's gift for Zoe on Sarah's bday. It was a sweeet gesture n a beautiful gift.

Looking forward to the next part. Update soon.

Much love..

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

super late res😳😆

unres

awesome blossom updt Rada👏

i m very busy this month so my comnts will b super late

Sarah's bday was celebrated in which Asad helped

i loved d whole part of Asad bringing teddy, Sarah giving it Asad's name & than d kiss conversation & Asya's game that followed was super cute😛

he then turned to the teddy bear, he pointed to his eyes and then to him, telling him : I'm watching you man.😆

Zoya's mission was to make him speak, and his mission was to remain silent,

Sarah's wish 2 have her dad hurt Zoya ,Asya's emotional scene after that was amazingly written👏

Asad gifted her a bracelet again awesome scene loved this part best lines i guess i read ever👏

many forget that every time a baby is born it is because the mother gave birth, we forget that this is a result of long hours, a sacrifice, hard and painful labors, the mother gives birth, actually every time we feast anniversary, we should highlight the mother who made this day, and even after years, it is important to remember this mother, who often remains in the shadow of every birthday.

Later night Zoya thinking about her futurre wid Asad & d little jealous scene Asad describing his future

Both realized there love hope they confess it soon

d small small lines u add r just fantastic👏⭐️👏

Nothing is more painful than a hope shattered by lies.

she began to whisper to the door asking it to shut up.

I loved d note Asad left😃

-ya Allah, why this man has to be so perfect and cute ?i'll say d same thing😆

great job again👏👏

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago

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arpita14godara

@arpita14godara

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

OMG i read the whole epilogues of runaway bride .its amazing &passionate &mature content fill. (in my dream). Plz give us epilogues before we forget the basic of runaway bride

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: arpita14godara
OMG i read the whole epilogues of runaway bride .its amazing &passionate &mature content fill. (in my dream). Plz give us epilogues before we forget the basic of runaway bride

i will try, i only start week ago and it will be longer than what I expect, so maybe it will be in two parts. I will try to update the first part next week. Sorry for the delay, but I will do my best 😕

Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago

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arpita14godara

@arpita14godara

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#188

chill yaar. tum kafi time se reply n ahi kar rahi thi only like kar rahi thi tho ya reply nikalna ka tarika tha .so dont take tension we never forget runaway bride its brilient story so take your time & give us a beautiful epilogues