New Asya SS: A gift from life, chap 15, 04-05-15 COMPLETED

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miss.namrata96

@miss.namrata96

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Sooo beautiful update... Loved it to the core..❤️

Asad is too cute...☺️ I just loved it...

Please continue soon...👏

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Heyyy RADA...😃 Thanx for the P.M...😛 You know you have to believe me when I say this... Iam tonguetied and out of words to convey how I felt after reading this update... It was mesmerizing, beautiful & breathtakingly and brilliantly written...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...I don't know if the above words make a sense but as I said I don't know how to convey the sheer happiness & satisfaction I got after reading this update...👏👏👏

Sarah's birthday🥳 and ASYA preparing for it together...😎

Zoya's breakdown in the bathroom was a emotional one and Asad consoling her without any dirty flirting😆 was a very well written scene..👏⭐️

Then the scene after that party when Asad was going for the meeting and Zoya was so overwhelmed about the gift given by Asad ...perfect👍🏼 and it is true even the parents should be wished and gifted

And then when Asad came back from the meeting how Zoya was visioning about a perfect happy future with Asad and their kids...😉

And their convo about how they picturise their future...was excellently penned...RADA...👏

And atlast the realsiation of LOVE for Zoya...that she loves Asad was beautiful...❤️❤️❤️

Just flawless writing ...🤗

Continue soon...😃

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arpita14godara

@arpita14godara

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Hi its such a beautiful update .i luv it. after reading the whole update the first thought come to my mind is i have to wait 7 days 168 hour to read next update sooo sad na.plz do something to erace my sadness

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siyasharma94

@siyasharma94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Superb nd beautifuly written..asad was so much caring..
Update nxt part soon

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Amulya

@Amulya9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Awww it was sooo sweet...

Im madly in love wth this story..its amazing.

Asad...hes d best...

Cant wait fr next chap.

Update asap

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Beautiful update. Finally she realized her love! ❤️

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captjs

@captjs

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#177

love this story... pls continue :))

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Nav

@kabhi_asya

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Awww... Perfect...!

Everything is going just perfect...

Loved the update...

Beautifully written chapter..

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#179

omg what can I say u r an incredible writer

I was in love with this story from the first chapter

When u said it was a Ts I beag to make it longer

Hopefully 10 chapters or more

I love Asad Iand zoya in here with their individual kid and life experience

But since from day one they had been drawn to each other

He was persuasive and she was impassive

Love the update I read it since yesterday maybe was abt the 4 person to like

But then I just kept rereading and now like 24 hrs later I am commenting

Asad an amazing man he was just one in a million

He just make me gush and swoon how adorable he is and his mouth and the things that comes out of it

Love the gift he give her so sentimental

Love how he just wanted to hold her and forgot abt his kiss

Love how he refuse the date when she finally gives in

He loves her and his patience for her is so strong tht he is just there waiting

Love the bit with the make up

Aww she loves him too she can't believe he is in her life but she is afraid

Sarah u may not get ur daddy but u can get a daddy

Love the future talk and then she admit but he fell asleep

Love his shocked of seeing her sleeping on him

Love the breakfast and the note with love u

Comtinue like now

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Anu

@surbhikano1fan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Omg u are such a good writer love it

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