Thread#2 AsYa FF 'Adhoori Mohabbat' Thread#3 Page 1 - Page 89

I dnt like it.i possible try to end this story with happy ending,zoya and her child didnt deserve died.adhuri mahhabat ko mukammal kijia aur ak epilodge dijia.

Aashu ki bachi jhoote khane ke liye ready hojaaao ...

Salaam Ashiii... 😊
Thanx for the PM... 😛 & the Res* also after a longest gap. 😳
Emotional 😭 , Very Emotional 😭😭 ,
Very Very Emotional 😭 😭 😭.
But Kudos to you...for going on with this part... 👏 now their no diff btw you and Sara...but a very well written part. ⭐️
Zoya this update was mostly about her only...her past revelations , then those dreams and haullicantions and then her confrontation with the family...then her own confrontation with Asad...meeting with Aman...and then the last fall.
I don't know...how could so sudden a life threatening situation...aroused... 😲 but never the less...writer's liberty at bay...I don't know about they love for Such climaxes..😕 and you named this as the end chapt...😊
But this was Asad's adhoori mohabbat...but still their adhoori kahani has to be written...lets see...if their is a kahani still left here... but truly Ashiii...you stood your ground with the title..and gave us this emotional part..😃
Still as a reader...i would expect a deservin end...
Well a very good part...if ignoring it as a AsYa fan...you wrote it brilliantly.. 😃
Agar Epilogue hai...toh intezar rahega.. 😳

truth finally out
but this is bad...zoya is serious
will she and the baby make it

continue soon sweetie and do pm me again

😭 sad end. But a beautiful .story.great job

wth ye nahi ho sakta zoya can't die asad ka kya hoga and what abt aman bechara baccha

Hope zoya n the kid will be safe