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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashiii333

adiii i m going yo kill u
Jas esko ek laga
wisdom teeth aaye phr bhi meri nhi sunti


acha ek kaam karo new page pe hi krna h apko?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Adu 1 min chup nahi reh sakti thi😡
Ashi ab nxt pg pe res karna yahan dhaba khul gya
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Adu 1 min chup nahi reh sakti thi😡

Ashi ab nxt pg pe res karna yahan dhaba khul gya


jas tu aaja waha tab tak...main busy ho jaungi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Adu plz ab tu kuch bhi reply na karna is bar plz
tujhe tere Sallu ki kasam

han Ashi this time isko pitenge hum

now go 4 it😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Salaam...

hope all of you doing well 😊
finally i'm back with an update that too last one 😔
but ek na ek din story ko end hona hi hai so why not today 😆
okay let me warn you guys
Plzzz ek bar story ka title achy se dekh lo phir mat kehna mainy kya kiya
darr laging kya???
chalo koi nahi mai update deti hn
scroll down plzzz 😳
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Adhoori Mohabbat...






Part 30:

Zoya reached SM, a place that had snatched her happiness some days ago, she remembered her visit here and memories for their fight came running to her... she remembered how Asad had slapped her in front of everyone just bcox she stood for her father, she remembered how she left and he didn't bother to bring her back, then after a month, her father was proved innocent and she came to know about her pregnancy... she just wanted to hear out Asad's decision regarding them, she hid about her pregnancy and he offered her divorce papers...
Zoya was crying remembering all this, how Asad was all ready to let her go, she didn't wanted that Asad accept her for the sake of child that's why she signed the papers and left from there, fresh tears made their way, she remembered how she wake up in a hospital and she told Asad not to divorce her n all... then she remembered some good memories, how Asad was there for her like always, how he take care of her and their unborn child, but the thing that hurt her more was why Asad is lying to her??? She knew that he loves her, there is no one in his life except her then why he is doing all this too her... she was going to confront him, she took a deep breath, wiped her tears and entered SM...
Asad, Aman n Armaan reached airport, Asad was not in favor to send Aman Mumbai but that was the lest he can do for his son, after all Aman was going to Mumbai so he can meet his mom with some special gift that too made by himself... the flight was late due to continuous rain in Mumbai so they decided to spend some time at airport's cafeteria...
Zoya was standing at the entrance of the house, she just hated that place but when she stepped inside the house, despite of hatred she felt something else, a unique connection, a strong bond with that house... she closed her eyes to clear her thoughts but a blur flashback came running to her mind, she saw the same lady running behind the child with a shirt in hand while the boy was shirtless... Zoya smiled at mother-son antics when suddenly she froze and her smile faded, she saw Asad standing far away with a content smile, she was shocked to see Asad there... Asad stood up and came towards her, Zoya just wanted to open her eyes so that her flashback came to an end but stars were not in her favour... Asad catch hold of the boy and asked the shirt from the lady, he made him wear that shirt and ruffled his hair, the boy held his tongue out at Asad and that lady and ran from there, Zoya was confused by seeing such connection between the mother-son and Asad, how's Asad related to them, that was the only question that arose in her mind...
Zoya was on verge of crying again and wanted to open her eyes, but she was unable to do so, Asad's next move shocked her to the core, the lady was about to go but Asad grabbed her hand and pulled her flushed against himself, Zoya felt like hitting her Mr. Khan for doing such moves with someone else... Zoya was standing at the door only while her eyes were closed and a film was being played in front of her... Asad and that lady were lost in their world that was totally a cheat for Zoya, they were about to kiss...
Zoya: NO!!!
Dilshad and Najma were in kitchen, while Ayan was in his room with Haya and Zara, Rashid was sleeping after taking his medicines... all were shocked to hear a shout... Ayan came running downstairs and stopped in his tracks when he found Zoya at the door step... Dilshad and Najma too came in the hall and looked towards shocked Ayan, they followed his gaze and got a shock by seeing Zoya...
Dilshad: Zoya tum yahan...
Zoya opened her eyes by hearing Dilshad's voice... Ayan too came there and stood beside his badi ammi...
Zoya: yehi sawal mai app se bhi kar sakti hoon... app yaha kesy... jahan tak mjhy yaad hai app doctor ke pass gayi thein, or Najma tum to Delhi mai thi na???
Dilshad: haan wo mai...
Ayan: badi ammi ko mai lekar aaya tha...
Dilshad: Ayan, haan mai Ayan ke sath aayi hoon...
Zoya: acha theek hai par yeh Tamater yaha kya kar rahi hai???
Najma: Zoya app yaha achanak kesy... she was nervous and tried to divert the topic...
Zoya: everything is changed right, sab kuch badal gaya hai or afsoos to is bat ka hai k waqt or halaat k sath sath app sab bhi badal rahy hain... she cried...
Dilshad: tum ro kyun rahi ho... she tried to wipe her tears but Zoya jerks her hands...
Zoya: mere roney se apko kya fark padhta hai, arry apko kya ab to Mr. Khan ko bhi koi fark nahi padhta, un k pass mujhse bat karny k liye waqt hi nahi hai lekin jhoot bolny k liye unhy ek second lagta hai...
Dilshad: tumhara or Asad ka jhagda hua hai kya???
Ayan: haan Mona koi bat hai to mujhy btao, hum dono mil k bhaijan ko tang karenge...
Zoya: apko pata hai phupi Mr. Khan mujhse jhoot bol rahy hain, wo office ka bol k roz kahi or jaty hain...
Najma: apko... apko yeh sab kis ne btaya...
Zoya: kab, kahan or kesy yeh sab matter nahi karta, the thing is that he is lying to me from past 2 weeks Tamater...
Ayan: Mona I think you are just assuming things, bhaijan can't lie... he defended his bhaijan...
Zoya: app sab meri bat pe yaqeen... she stopped in her sentence as her head started spinning... she blinked her eyes to maintain her vision...
Dilshad: kya ua Zoya... tum yaha aao...
Dilshad made her sit on the sofa while Najma made her drink some water... Ayan was trying to call Asad but his phone was switched off...
Zoya: Mr. Khan kahan hain???
Dilshad: beta Asad is in office, why are you stressing yourself, its not good for you and the baby...
Zoya: phupi I don't know why but all of you are continuously lying to me...
Najma: aisa nahi Zoya, app janti hain hum sab app se kitna pyaar karty hain or apno se koi jhoot bolta hai kya... she tried to make her understand...
Zoya: when I called Mr. Khan, he said to me that he is in meeting while he was here and phupi was calling him for lunch... you guys think I m a FOOL???
Ayan: kya Mona jab se aayi ho ya to roye ja rahi ho ya phir bhaijan ko bula rahi ho, kuch waqt hamary sath nahi guzar sakti kya...
Zoya: you are trying to divert my mind haan...
Ayan: nahi wo...
Ayan was speaking but Zara came running there with her drawing book...
Memory Recall: Zara is Ayan and Asma's daughter and she is almost 3 years old...
Zara: papa... yeh Aman k liye...
Zoya was already messed up in her life and here a baby girl was addressing Rabert as her father and talked about Aman only... Zoya was more confused now...
Zoya: Rabert yeh bachi...
Ayan: Mona wo... yeh...
Zara: papa dekho na...
Zoya: yeh tumhari beti kesy ho sakti hai, tum to...
Dilshad: Zoya yeh Ayan ki hi beti hai...
Zoya: par...
Ayan: haan Zoya yeh meri beti hai... he said picking Zara in his arms and kissed her chubby cheek...
Dilshad: I know Zoya what are you thinking right now, but its true...
Zoya: but how's it possible???
Dilshad: tumary sab sawalo ka jawab Asad hi dega...
Zoya: haan to app Mr. Khan ko bulaiye... but I m sure he'll not meet me???
Najma: app aisa kyun soch rahi hain Zoya...
Zoya: hamary darmiyan koi aagaya hai Najma, koi or hai jo Mr. Khan k liye shayad mujhse bhi zaida eham hai... she let out her biggest fear...
Dilshad: Zoya tum Asad ko galat samjh rahi ho...
Zoya: or meri is galat fehmi k door karny k liye app log Mr. Khan ko kyun nahi bulaty...
Ayan: Mona, bhaijan ghar pe nahi hain...
Zoya: kahan hain wo...
Ayan: airport...
Zoya: he can't do this to me, how can he go somewhere without telling me... Ayan plz mjhy Mr. Khan k pass ly chalo...
Dilshad: Ayan tumhy Asad k pass ly jayega... par ek bat yaad rakhna Zoya tumhy sach ko Qubool karna hi hoga...
Najma: ammi app yeh sab kya kar rahi hain...
Dilshad: yehi sahi hai Najma, agar aaj sach samney aa kar hi rahega...
Zoya: kesa sach???
Dilshad: tum Ayan k sath jao Zoya, Asad tumhy khud btayega...
Zoya was in dilemma whether to go or not bcox she was scarred of the turn of events but she knew that Asad will never lie in front of her, yes she doubted him but that doesn't mean she doen't trust him, he is her husband and the thing is that they loved each other and she was sure that he can't do this intentionally... Zoya wiped her tears and left to airport with Ayan...
Ayan was driving as fast as he can but he was scarred of his bhaijan after all he was with Mrs. Asad Ahmad Khan and his bhaijan will not leave him if he didn't care about his bhaijan's pregnant wife... Zoya was sitting on the passenger seat, lost in her own thoughts... Ayan tried to divert her mind and switched on the FM...
Meri duniya mein aake mat ja mat ja kahin mat ja
Meri duniya mein aake mat ja mat ja mat ja
Meri duniya mein...
As soon the song started playing, he cursed himself for doing so, he was about to switched off the FM but Zoya stopped him... Zoya was lost in the lyrics of the songs and started crying...
Kya maine pa liya hai kya maine kho diya hai
Shayad yeh soch kar hi dil aaj ro diya hai
Tu hi to tha mera apna kaise phir se toota sapna
Tu jo mil ke kho jaayega jeena mushkil ho jaayega
O meri duniya mein...
Zoya felt like this song is just made for her, her life was too playing hide and seek with her, her Mr. Khan was lying him from some days and she can't do anything except believing him... Zoya's train of thoughts stopped when Ayan stopped the car in front of Bhopal International Airport... Zoya composed herself and got off the car while Ayan left for the parking area...
Zoya was advised by Ayan to meet him in cafeteria so she made her way towards cafeteria only... On the other hand, Ayan parked the car and tried to call Asad again and luckily the call got connected...
Ayan: hello, bhaijan kahan hain app???
Asad: Ayan I'm at airport only, actually flight takes off some minutes ago and we are in cafeteria...
Ayan: ohh shit...
Asad: what happened Ayan???
Asad asked but Ayan had already ended the phone call, Asad felt strange but put his thoughts aside...
Aman: papa kiska phone tha???
Asad: hmm Ayan tha, so you decided konsi ice cream chahieye...
Aman: I'll go with Chocolate Ice-cream as usual... he replied happily...
Asad: okay, main abhi aata hoon...
Asad left while Aman was playing Candy Crush on Asad's phone when he felt his mama's presence and turned immediately...
Zoya stepped inside the cafeteria and felt something, she started looking around her... Zoya was about to look in Aman's direction when Ayan came from behind and dragged her with him...
Zoya: what's wrong with you Rabert???
Ayan: we are here to meet bhaijan, app cafeteria main kya kar rahi hai, feeling hungry??? He asked with a wink...
Zoya: I can't believe you got this moment for cracking jokes and all... she glare at him and made her way towards inquiry booth...
Aman was looking at the entrance of the cafeteria when Asad came with an ice-cream...
Asad: here you go Mr. Khan... he placed the ice-cream in front of Aman...
Aman: ohh thanks...
Asad was sitting in front of Aman with questioning eyes... he noticed how Aman was looking at the entrance again and again...
Asad: Aman...
Aman: hmm... he replied playing with his ice-cream...
Asad: kya hua Aman...
Aman: kuch nahi papa... He replied without looking in his dad's eyes...
Asad: look at me Aman...
Aman: I'm fine papa... he passed a fake smile...
Asad: you're not fine Aman and i can bet on that, tell me what's the matter...
Aman: I felt mama's presence here... he stated blankly and looked down again...
Asad felt bad for his son and got up from his chair and moved to Aman's side and sat beside him...
Asad: let's go home Aman... he said placing an arm on his shoulders...
Aman looked at him with wide eyes...
Aman: abhi???
Asad: haan abhi... Let me remind you Mr. Khan app ne Mumbai janey ka program apni mama k liye hi cancel kiya hai sooo why are we wasting our time here, let's go and get back your mama...
Aman: but...
Asad: no ifs and buts, we're going right now!!!
Aman: I love you Mr. Khan opps papa... he hugged him...
Asad: I love you too Mr. Khan opps shona...
Aman: only mama can call me shona, hmm you can call me shono mono... he winked at his papa...
Asad: yeah sab pata hai mjhy, mama's son... he said with a pout...
Aman: mama sahi kehti hain app pout karty ho to or bhi cute lagty ho, now can we leave phir main or mama apky sab nakhrey uthayenge...
Asad: okay boss...
On the other hand, Ayan and Zoya reached inquiry booth, Ayan asked about the flight to Mumbai but the airport staff told them flight took off an hour ago...
Zoya was shattered, she didn't knew how to react, firstly Asad lied to her and now he left her without saying anything... She felt a sudden pain in her head and in order to reduce that pain she held the side of her head while Ayan rushed and held her securely and made her sit to the nearest seat...
Ayan: Mona app stress kyun ly rahi hain, it's not good for you and the baby...
Zoya: why is he doing this to me Ayan... Why??? she cried out...
Ayan was really helpless, he was unable to help her out from this mess, he was just praying for his Bhabi's safety... He made her drink some water and after 15 minutes they decided to go back home...
Ayan and Zoya were about to go when she bumped in someone, Zoya closed her eyes in fear to hit the ground but it doesn't happen... She gripped the shirt of that person tightly and in next moment she knew who's that man, it's him... she can tell without opening her eyes , she can feel him, smell him and then it hit her that he is here, he didn't went leaving her and somehow it relaxed her a bit...
Asad and Aman were making their way out of the airport suddenly he saw Zoya there and before he could react Zoya bumped in him and immediately he wounded his arms around her waist and prevent her from falling, he smiled at her reactions which changes from fear to realization in a flip of moment...
Aman was excited to see his mama there but Ayan came to him and asked him to be quite for a while, Aman obliged bcox he wanted Asad to make everything perfect for them...
Asad made Zoya stand on her feet, she was breathing heavily, what if she, tears brimmed in her eyes due to fear, Asad understood her dilemma...
Asad: its okay Zoya, you are safe, open your eyes... he said cupping the side of her face...
Zoya: Mr. Kh. Khan... she opened her eyes and fresh tears made their way...
Asad: sshhh... I'm here na, everything is fine... he whispered and hugged her...
Zoya hugged him tightly and held on his shirt, she closed her eyes and hid her face in the crook of his neck... Asad roamed a hand on his back in order to calm her down while Zoya leaned on him completely...
Asad looked at Aman and nodded his head at him telling that she is fine and he'll handle the situation, Aman smiled at his concern... suddenly Zoya remember her reason of coming here at the airport and she broke apart...
Asad: Zoya... he called her at her sudden rude move...
Zoya: naam mat lejieye mera...
Aasd: Zoya yeh tum kya keh rahi ho... he tried to reach her out...
Zoya: door rahiye mujhse... Don't you dare to touch me... she shouted...
Asad: Mrs. Khan app ghar chaliye, sab log dekh rahy hain... he tried to make a sensible move...
Zoya: kounsa ghar Mr. Khan, wo ghar jahan mai sara din wait karti hon k app kab office se aayengey ya phir wo ghar jahan app sara din guzarty hain... she replied back without realizing the crowd that was gathering around them...
Aman was getting emotional by seeing his parents in such situations, he just wanted to be with them without any problem...
Asad: app meri bat suniye...
Zoya: kya suno mai, ek or jhoot... she taunted...
Asad: jhoot??? he asked not getting her point...
Zoya: okay, let me say it straightly, I know k app mujhse jhoot bol rahy hain, roz office k naam pe SM jaty hain or...
Asad: or??? he asked bcox he wanted to hear what she exactly knew then he can made her understand the situation easily...
Zoya: or app kisi or se py. pyaar karty hain... she let out her biggest fear...
Asad: apko koi galat fehmi hui hai Zoya, app janti hain main sirf app se mohabbat karta hoon...
Zoya: jhoot, sab jhoot... apka pyaar, apki mohabbat sab kuch jhoot hai... mainey khud apko kisi ko "I love you too" kehty suna tha...
Asad: wo to...
Zoya: app ne kaha na...
Asad: par Zoya...
Zoya: just say yes or no!!! she yelled...
Asad: haan... he shouted back...
Aman got scarred by seeing them yelling, Ayan pick him in his arms and tried to go out when Asad stopped him...
Asad: let him stay here Ayan... he stated firmly...
Zoya was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't hear out him talking about Aman, her mind was repeating his confession which he made few seconds ago, he loves someone else, he loves someone else... how can he do this to her, no he can't do this to her, she was sure he was hiding something, she trusts him more than her life...
Asad: Zoya app janti hain main sirf app se pyaar karrta hoon par yeh bhi sach hai k app k ilawa meri life main koi or bhi hai... he said cupping her face...
Zoya: app jhoot bol rahy hain na, app mujhe tang karny k liye yeh sab bol rahy hain na...
Asad: nahi, yeh sach hai or...
Zoya: or kya Mr. Khan???
Asad: app bhi kisi or se pyaar karti hain Zoya, its not a lie, the thing is that...
Zoya: main sirf app se pyaar karti hoon Mr. Khan, app mujhe chodh k kyun ja rahy hain... I know I did lots of mistakes and I m sorry for that but plz don't leave me Mr. Khan... she cried and hugged him again...
Asad hugged him back, both cried bcox the situation was getting worse but the good thing was that both were together... Aman too cried... Zoya was ranting "don't leave me Mr. Khan" again and again...
Asad: I'm not going anywhere Zoya, or app sorry kyun keh rahi hain, I'm the one who should say sorry, apko nahi pata main bohat selfish hoon, apko apny sath rakhny k liye mainy apko Aman se door rakha...
Zoya: I don't know what are you saying Mr. Khan, mujhe bas app k sath rehna hai...
Asad: lekin mere ilawa koi or bhi hai jisko apki zaroorat hai...
Zoya: nahi mujhe nahi pata, hum dono bas ghar ja rahy hain, app mere sath chaliye...
Asad: meri bat to suniye...
Zoya: mujhe kuch nahi sun'na app chaliye...
Zoya dragged Asad with him but before she can take a step she felt a tug at her hand, she felt that strange feeling again, she turned and found a boy standing with teary eyes...
Aman: apko mere sath nahi rehna kya???
Zoya froze on her spot, how's that possible, she was dreaming about that child from last few days and here that child standing in front of her, then suddenly she remembered that this boy was in SM with Asad when she had a flashback there...
Zoya: Am. Aman... she whispered...
Asad: haan Aman... Aman Ahmad Khan... our son...
Zoya went numb, she missed a breath when Asad revealed its their son, how on the earth she didn't knew that she is a mother, how can she remember some flashbacks but not the entire truth about her own son...
Zoya: yeh. Yeh hamara beta hai Mr. Khan... Aman Ahmad Khan... but why can't I remember him???
Asad: you are suffering from Amnesia Zoya, you forgot your own son Zoya, you forgot 6 years of your life...
Zoya: how's it poss. possible???
Asad: destiny Zoya, it's a cruel game played by destiny, but I can't hide more, you have the right to know about Aman, he needs you Zoya, our son needs his mama...
Zoya: Aman... she came closer to Asad and Aman...
Aman was going to hug her but before he could go, she held her head and fell, but Asad caught her in time... Asad tried to wake her up but she was passed out, they rushed to the hospital...
All were in hospital from last 2 hours, Zoya was in ICU and doctors were checking her from underneath time, she was unconscious from a long time and that was not good for her and the baby...
Asad was guilty bcox he was the sole reason behind this mess, if had managed the situation wisely at that time then Zoya had never went to Mumbai and didn't lose her memory, then she came back in his life as Ayesha Khan, a single mother... later he came to know that Ayesha is Zoya only, they were together with their son Aman, all was good... then he visited Mumbai with Zoya and Aman and she met with an accident and forgot her son, her Aman, her shone... all was his mistake, he separated his own son from his mother who was like a father and mother for him... yes he lied bcox Dr told him that Zoya can't accept the reality but when he came to know that she started remembering some moments he decided to tell her the entire truth and he was wrong again, she was in danger right now just bcox of him and he don't know to do??? He just hate himself more now...
Aman: she'll be fine papa... his train of thought broke when Asad came and sat beside him...
Asad: she have to... she have to be fine Aman... he hugged him tightly and tears made their way...
Asad and Aman were sitting when doctor came out of the ICU and caller for the patient's husband...
Asad: Asad Ahmad Khan, Zoya's husband, how's she now???
Dr: patient is very critical, she is not responding to our treatments, it seems like she doesn't wants to live or something serious is bothering her...
Asad was totally broken by hearing him out, he knew one thing that Zoya is the strongest woman he ever came across thenhow come she can lose her strength, she have to be strong, she can't do this to him, she have to do this for Aman and for their unborn child...
Asad: Dr. how's the baby??? You guys don't need to worry about money, call the best doctors and make sure she regain her consciousness...
Dr: its not about best doctors and treatment, its about her will power, she is not responding Mr. Khan...
Asad: app logo ko doctor kis ne banaya??? Ek patient ko app log hosh main nahi la sakty... he shouted...
Dr: dekhiye humey hamara kaam mat seekhaiye, apko pehly hi warn kiya gaya tha k apki wife sach bardasht nahi kar sakti or app ne to samney se ja kar unhy sach btaya hai...
Asad: app... he was about to say something but a junior doctor came running there...
Jr Dr: Sir jaldi chaliye wo patient...
Asad; kya hua Zoya ko???
Jr Dr: her pulse rate is decreasing and...
Asad: and???
Dr: app Mr. Khan se sign ly lejiye, I have to see Mrs. Khan... he left for ICU...
Asad: sign kyun??? He asked from junior doctor...
Jr Dr: actually we can't hear the heartbeat beat of the fetal and your wife is bleeding too, so have to take the responsibility if anything happens to your wife or the baby... he replied handling him some papers for the signatures...
Asad froze at his spot, he went numb and fell on the ground with the papers in his hands... tears made their way and he read and re read the papers, his Zoya was lying unconscious inside and now their unborn baby's life is also in danger, just bcox of him...
Asad closed his eyes and remembered his entire life which he had spent with Zoya and he concluded that he always made her cry before and after the marriage and now he is punishing his own child bcox he was the one who revealed the truth...
Asad looked up and smiled with teary eyes...
Asad: meri galtiyon ki saza app mujhy kisi or tarha bhi to dy sakty thy but why are you punishing me like this, Zoya ko kyun saza dy rahy hain app??? Or us masoom si jaan ko jo abhi is duniya main bhi nahi aayi... he wiped his tears... theek hai main app se shikayat nahi karonga akhir app ne hi mujhy Zoya se milaya tha... mujhy apka har faisla Qubool Hai, app chahty hain k meri mohabbat adhoori reh jaye to aisa hi hoga... lekin is sab k zimmedaar app hain, yeh "Adhoori Mohabbat" app ne manzoor ki hai or aaj se apko ek nayi kahani likhni hogi, "Hamari Adhoori Kahani", saying so he signed the papers...



Sooo that's it...
ignore my mistakes plzzz...
hit like n leave ur precious views...
Ashii...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Okay i know bohat se log mujhy maarney aa rahy hain...
but guys its my planned story, from day one i had planned this end...
i know i hurt u guys but remember Zindagii mai hamesha happy ending nahi hoti...
even Qubool Hai mai Zoya ne kaha tha " kuch kahaniyan kabhi mukammal nahi hoti "
sooo here i m with such end...
plzzz leave ur comments...
this time i m waiting eagerly 😳

P.S jas u were waiting from so long na to yeh tere liye 😉
arzoo i hope dr apna kaam sahi se kiya or else tu unko ja kar peet 😆😆

lots of love...

Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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res for arzoo, jas, affu, choto, trisha, adi, srash, mayur, anopama, sasir, aroo, ammu, asif, sasir, nilu and for my all loyal readers 😊
koi reh gaya ho to shollyyy 😳
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally mera bhi res unres
I don't have anything 2 say
Zoya's pain was very touching
d way she felt sacred
but end tak she never left trust on Asad
Aman ke liye I felt bad d way he saw Asya fighting
Asad blaming himself😒
u did ur best Ashi
great job⭐️⭐️⭐️
Superb👏
btw I know Epilogue main tu sab happy kar degi nahi toh get ready 4 my silence😈😆 this can't b d end at all itna betuka end maine aaj tak kabhi nahi pada🤣
prank ka acha idea tha but din't worked😆
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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finallyyy sabka res
chooza bhi aaya
dr ji welcome etnnyyy din baad 🤗

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