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Posted: 10 years ago
Adhoori Mohabbat...




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Part 28:

AsYa reached Bhopal, Dilshad n Ayan were there t KV to welcome her, they were happy for her but at the same time they were sad for Aman...
Arman, Nuzhat n Aman reached SM, Najma was there to greet Aman but he just ran up to his room and locked himself... Najma tried to talk to him but he didn't bother to reply her back...
Zoya was behaving really odd, she was not allowing Asad to move away from her sight even for a second, it was Dilshad who made her understand that Asad is here only and he will not leave her, her phupi's no her ammis's words relieved her a bit... Asad was trying to go out and meet Aman but Zoya and her mood swings were not getting with him, he was lost in his thoughts when he received a call from Najma, he picked up immediately...
Asad: haan tamater...
Najma: bhaijan wo... wo Aman...
Asad: what happened to him... he panicked...
Najma: Aman has locked up himself in your room and...
Asad: and you are telling me now tamater... I m coming there... saying so he cut the call...
Asad came in the room and told that Najma reached airport, so he have to go... the thought of going Asad away disturbed Zoya...
Zoya: why are you going Mr. Khan, I mean Rabert can go na...
Asad: Zoya I can't trust Ayan's driving skills and tamater is waiting for me there, actually I made a promise to her that I myself will receive her and now I have to fulfill my promise and you know...
Zoya: Khans never breaks promises... she completed smilingly...
Asad starred at her in complete shock while Zoya too realized her words and immediately a blur image appeared in front of her and she hear someone saying same words about Khans Promise, she held her head due to sudden pain, Asad came towards her and sat beside her, he knew what must had happened with her, he was hurt by seeing her in such conditions she remembers him but she forgot Aman, her son, their son, but right now a new hope raised in him that Aman's mother can be back...
Asad: you okay... what happened???
Zoya: yeah, it's just that I... leave it Mr. Khan... she tried to divert the topic...
Asad: there is something you are hiding from me right???
Zoya: no Mr. Khan there is nothing... she lied...

Asad: hmm... I can understand after all that happened some days back, how can you trust me, it's okay Mrs. Khan... he tried to emotionally blackmail her...
Zoya: app aisy kyun keh rahy hain, app ne mujhse kaha tha k wo sab past hai and we will not discuss that, or abhi mujhy bas kisi ki awaz sunayi di, jesy kisi ne Khans Promise bola ho and the thing is that I don't know him... she replied...
Asad: him???
Zoya: hmm... she hmm-ed in response... she said controlling her tears...
Asad came closer to her and she threw herself on him and hugged him, Dilshad n Ayan were there but they understand her dilemma and prayed for her so that she can be with Aman ASAP... Asad hugged her closer and patted her head...
Asad: relax Zoya, tumhy ghabraney ki zaroorat nahi hai, I m here or aagey se kuch bhi sunayi dy ya dekhayi dy to app mujhy btayengi... he broke apart and wiped her tears...
Zoya: come on Mr. Khan yeh sab roz roz thodi hota hai, you are saying like mjhy aisy hi flashbacks aayengey, it's not a joke...
Asad: I know you are serious, but you will tell me immediately or doctor ne bhi to kaha tha no stress so you have to be careful, it's just that I can't see you in pain... he said kissing her temple...
Zoya: Mr. Khan app kab se etna bolny lage??? Now go and bring tamater, mujhy us se milna hai...
Asad: yeah I leave now and you lay down and take some rest, ammi plz stay with her...
Dilshad: I can stay with her without your permission, tumse pehly mera rishta hai Zoya se... she said sitting beside her...
Zoya: hmm akhir app ammi kiski hain... she winked at Asad...
Asad: you guys carry on, I'll be back soon...
Asad left from there while Dilshad made sure that Zoya take some rest, she made fruit salad for her and fed her by saying that Najma is super excited with her pregnancy so she must eat now otherwise Najma will made her eat some new dishes which may not taste yummy... Ayan was teasing them by saying that he will tell Najma, in short Dilshad n Ayan were taking care of Zoya really well but at the same time they were worried for Aman...
Asad reached SM and rushed to his room, Arman n Najm were there, he told Najma to go KV ASAP, he collected spare keys and entered in the room... Aman was sitting on the floor by hugging his knees and tears were rolling down from his eyes, Asad's heart winced in pain by seeing his son in such condition, he cursed himself bcox he was not there with his son when he needed him the most, he proved that he can't be a good father after all he was doing same like his own father, giving pain to his own son it's the quality he inherited from his father, Asad stopped his thoughts bcox it was not the time to think about past...
Asad: Am... Aman... he called him controlling his emotions...
Aman immediately looked at his best friend, his father, fresh tears brimmed in his eyes and he got up and take a step towards Asad but suddenly he remembered his words "friend's son" and he stepped back, Asad was hurt by his move, he was about to take a step but Aman stops him...
Aman: no... no need to be with me, I m not your son... he cried...
Asad: I m sorry Aman but I can't tell her about you... I m sorry beta but it's not in m hands...
Aman: sab meri galti hai... he shouted and threw a vase at Asad that was kept on the table near him...
Asad: what was that??? He ducked and vase hit the wall behind him...
Aman: app jao yahan se... he climbed up the bed...
Asad: Aman stop being a kid, or bed se neechy utro...
Aman: you don't love me know, mama don't remember me and you don't have time for me, just go away... he slip out his fears and starting throwing pillows at Asad...
Asad was feeling bad for him but he felt happy at the same time bcox:
1: Aman was crying in room all alone like Asad...
2: Aman climbed up on the bed like Zoya...
3: Aman spoke out his fears in front of his loved ones only like Asad...
4: Aman was making mess for the first time like Zoya...
In short, Asad was happy bcox Aman was proving that he is AsYa's son... a typical AsYa's son... their unique n loving combo...
Aman: I want to be with mama... when he saw that Asad was lost in his own thoughts he let out his only wish...
Asad was brought back to reality by Aman's words, he came forward and pulled Aman at the corner of the bed, Aman didn't try to move away after all he needed his father at that time, Asad hugged him tightly, Aman too hugged him back, both cried their hearts out... Asad was just repeating "I m sorry" while Aman was just crying and pleading him to let her meet Zoya, Asad was the first one who broke apart and wiped Aman's tears...

Tere dil ka mere dil se
Rishta purana hain
In aankho se har aansu
Mujhko churana hain
Mujhko churana hain
Mujhko churana hain
Tere dil ka mere dil se
Rishta purana hain
Asad: you know mama hate tears in your eyes, so stop crying and be a good boy...
Aman: but mjhy mama pass jana hai...
Asad: Aman abhi app mama k pass nahi ja sakty... the thing is that she doesn't remember her life as Ayesha Khan, app k nana, mamu or app, she doesn't remember all of you and now that part of her life is blank, you a quite mature Aman, plz try to understand I cant't tell her... he said sitting on the bed and take Aman in his lap...
Aman: papa she didn't remember you in the past but she accepted you, so she can accept me na... he asked...
Asad: actually when I told your mama that she is Zoya, she was all okay, but now she has a head injury and it may stress out her and she can lose her entire memory too...
Aman: arryy mama ko btaty hain wo maan jayengi... plzzz... he pleaded...
Asad: nahi Aman, abhi mama ko btana safe nahi hai, or apko pata hai AsYa bhi aany vali hai to humey mama ka zaida khyal rakhna hoga...
Aman: meri sis aany vali hai... he asked excitedly...
Asad: haan or is liye humey kuch din wait karna hoga...
Aman: but mjhy mama or sis se milna hai... ek dafa...
Asad: app mama ko ek dafa miley ho or unho ne apko nahi pehchana to apko bura lagan a so how can I permit you to hurt yourself again...
Aman: mama to mjhy bhool gayi hain... his face fell and fresh tears brimmed in his eyes...
Asad: mama k sath to app ne etna time spend kiya hai, how about we make a deal, kuch din app mama k hissy ka pyaar bhi papa ko karo to...
Aman: app bhi to mama k pass ho, yahan thodi rahoge...
Asad: that's my problem, you say deal k no deal???
Aman: deal... but raat ko???
Asad: I said na I will manage, app bas achy se smile karo to papa ek or good news bhi dengey...
Aman: kya??? He asked smiling broadly...
Asad: when I was coming here, mama remembered our Khans Promise...
Aman: so what... he said dejectedly...
Asad: so it mans mama ko apki baat yaad aayi which is a positive sign or is tarha hum mama ko apky baarey main jaldi bta dengey...
Aman: sachii...
Asad: muchii... he kissed her dimpled cheek and hugged him again...
Asad n Aman spent a lot of time catching up with each other, Aman was okay now but after some minutes his thoughts went to his mama so Asad tried to cheer him up by playing with her, they made a mess of the entire room, so unusual to them, but that was necessary to lighten up their moods, both needed that freely atmosphere...
On the other hand, Najma reached KV and met Zoya, actually Najma was out of station from last month so she was meeting her bhabhi after a long time, both met n cried a little, Zoya bcox of her past incident, she was leaving her BFF to just bcox of that fight that took place 6 years back, but Zoya was considering it as it happened now only, Najma cried bcox she was happy for her BFF but sad for Aman too... it has been 5 hours since Najma came and Zoya started panicking...
Zoya: tamater tum kuch chupa rahi ho, Mr. Khan yaha wapis nahi aayengy na???
Najma: Zoya app aisy kyun soch rahi ho, bhaijan ko meeting main jana tha so he dropped me and left for office...
Zoya: nahi wo chaly gaye hain... she started crying...
Najma tried to make her understand, Dilshad was too there but Zoya was not listening to them, Ayan who was busy in changing the calendars of KV came there with his stupid shayari and diverted Zoya's mind...
Aman and Asad had their dinner in their room only, Asad was trying to make Aman sleep with Arman, and he said that he will sleep with him only but later Asad can shift him to Arman's room... so both were lying on their bed, Aman was sleeping on Asad's arm while he had held a family photo in which Aman was in the middle and AsYa were on his sides, Asad was thinking about how he will manage with Aman n Zoya at the same time...
Aman: papa... he said in a sleeping voice...
Asad: hmm... he replied...
Aman: what if mama refused to accept me???
Asad: huh...
Aman: I mean mama ne mujhy accept nahi kiya to...
Asad: Aman apki mama pehly thodi jhalli type thi but jab wo Ayesha Khan ban k rahi, she was quite mature than Zoya, she accepted me open heartedly, now you are going through the same phase that I had crossed months back, but I was alone Aman, you have me with you, mama apko kyun accept nahi karengi...
Aman: phir bhi papa...
Asad: apki mama ko accept karna hi hoga and I promise she will accept you as her own...

Teri bechaini ka teri tanhai ka ehsaas hain mujhko sun
Main jo saath tere hu phir tujhe hain kaisa gam
Dard baat lenge ham sun
In palko mein khushiyo ka sapna sajana hain
Tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hain
Aman: Khans Promise... he asked...
Asad: Khans Promise... he replied happily...
Asad pulled him closer and patted his back so he can fall in deep slumber, after an hour Asad took Aman in his arms and dropped him in Arman's room... Asad bid good bye and left for KV...
Zoya was asleep after a lot of tantrums when Asad came KV, Asad changed in night suit and climbed up the bed with her and hugged her from behind, Zoya felt her presence and turned to face him and hugged him while sleeping, Asad smiled at her presence of mind and dropped a kiss on her forehead and closed his eyes so sleep can took over him...
Precap: Asad managing Aman n Zoya... Zoya having flashbacks and Aman deciding to go back Mumbai...


Sooo that's it...
ignore my mistakes plzzz...
hit like n leave ur replies...
Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res ..
unres...
loved the update ashii...
oh zoyas insecurities... she lives in a constant fear of losing Asad...
and poor Aman... he js wants to b with zoya...
aman throwing fits and tantrums like his parents... dono pe gaya hai 😉
aur Asad has sort of juggling to do now...handling his wife n Aman...
hope zoya remembers all soon...
Edited by aarzoo50 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part.
Y is Zoya behaving this way with Assad?
What is her fear?

N so sad for aman.
Asad will have a hard time managing both lol.

Atleast Zoya remembered something.

And precap...
Don't let Aman go to Mumbai.
This is harsh on the kid.

Just a suggestion please don't mind.
If Aman is just a 5 year old then he is way too matured for his age to understand all this.
I'm saying this coz I have a 5year old with me.
I know this is fiction but still.
Please don't mind it is ur story n u can do anything with it.
Edited by sweet_tehs - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous Update
a lil bit emotional too
but
I l❤️ve it
ps: Congratulations for Ur engagement Ashii&ab tumhara bf Sara ka kya hoga🤣lol
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Nice part.

Y is Zoya behaving this way with Assad?
What is her fear?

N so sad for aman.
Asad will have a hard time managing both lol.

Atleast Zoya remembered something.

And precap...
Don't let Aman go to Mumbai.
This is harsh on the kid.

Just a suggestion please don't mind.
If Aman is just a 5 year old then he is way too matured for his age to understand all this.
I'm saying this coz I have a 5year old with me.
I know this is fiction but still.
Please don't mind it is ur story n u can do anything with it.



actually aman is quite mature than his age...
now he vl be 6 in some days...
well that maturity is not just imagination i had faced a real one too n that was so hard to see such kid...
i kno aman is mature but in past he knew who his mother took care f him vdout his dad thats y he is like this... maturity vd innocence...
sorry if u find it odd...
well zoya ka fear to vohi hai na k asad n she decided for divorce before her 1st accident so she is cranky now...
hope u got my point...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ABI-

<font color="#ff0000"><font size="7">Fabulous Update
a lil bit emotional too
but
I l❤️ve it
ps: Congratulations for Ur engagement Ashii&ab tumhara bf Sara ka kya hoga🤣lol</font>
</font>



thanks abi...
or bf vl be bf... or haan just my bf.. tm try mat karna... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all congratulations to u for ur engagement
Coming to the update
Nice but emotional feeling bad for aman poor small child

In all this poor asad how will he manage aman n zoya
.
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all Congo ashii...

N really thanks for updating it.. I really didn't expected it...
Grt thing you updated it soon after the engagement...

Coming to the update, as always it was wooww...
The song is perfect suit for their situation...

Waiting to see aman zoya next meet..
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow finally update is here
gr8 part loved it
zoya is behaving all insecure
aman is so sad and yes first behave completely like asya son
asad and aman moments were little emotional
precap is amazing omg aman want to go to bombay i hope asad stops him
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unres
So Aman is in a real hard time. Asad too...don't know how will he manage them at same time!!

Zoya's fear is justified!!
Aman is going back! Now this is a real twist!! Zoya should feel restless. Lets see...
Waiting for the next...
Edited by H.e.n.a - 10 years ago

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